LITR 5831 World / Multicultural Literature: Tragedy & Africa

Lecture Notes


Readings: Buchi Emecheta, The Rape of Shavi (1983) , complete

Bacchae Presentation Six (lines 1126-1431): Caryn Livingston

Nietzsche, Birth of Tragedy, Chapter 11, pp. 54-59 notes Birth of Tragedy Glossary; Discussion: Heather Minette Schutmaat

 

Allegory: symbolic characters, didactic

 

 

Bacchae Presentation Six (lines 1126-1431):

1126 DIONYSUS: [admiringly, as he escorts Pentheus from the doors] 
You look just like one of Cadmus's daughters.

1130 you look like a bull leading me out here,                               1130
with those horns growing from your head.
Were you once upon a time a beast?
It's certain now you've changed into a bull.         
[cf. bull(s) in lines 762, 913]

DIONYSUS: The god walks here. He's made a pact with us.   [cf. Nietzsche on confusion of actor / hero & Dionysus as god]

1137 PENTHEUS: How do I look? Am I holding myself
just like Ino or my mother, Agave?

1142 PENTHEUS: [demonstrating his dancing steps]

[Dionysus begins adjusting Pentheus's hair and clothing]

1147-8 PENTHEUS: All right then. You can be my dresser,
now that I've transformed myself for you.                          
[transformation theme; cf. lines 70, 1646, 1704, 1711]

1155 DIONYSUS: Once you see
those Bacchic women acting modestly, [confusion whether Bacchic women are "girls gone wild" or consciousness-raising]
once you confront something you don't expect,
you'll consider me your dearest friend.

1161 [Dionysus observes Pentheus trying out the dance step]

DIONYSUS: Your mind has changed. I applaud you for it.       [transformation theme; cf. lines 70, 1148, 1646, 1704, 1711]

1174 I'll use no force
to get the better of these women.
I'll conceal myself there in the pine trees.           
[sounds like voyeurism or peeping-tom]

1180 I can picture them right now,                1180
in the woods, going at it like rutting birds,
clutching each other as they make sweet love.  
[Pentheus reveals sexual interest in group he sought to repress]

1192 Follow me. I'm the guide who'll rescue you.
When you return someone else will bring you back.

PENTHEUS: That will be my mother.        [foreshadowing]

1197 DIONYSUS: [continuing]. . . in your mother's arms.       [foreshadowing]

1198 PENTHEUS: You've really made up your mind to spoil me.

DIONYSUS: To spoil you? That's true, but in my own way.                  [irony]

PENTHEUS: Then I'll be off to get what I deserve.                      1200

1201 DIONYSUS: [speaking in the direction Pentheus has gone, but not speaking to him]
You fearful, terrifying man—on your way
to horrific suffering.

1210 CHORUS 1: Up now, you hounds of madness,  [hounds of madness = maenads as furies?]   1210
go up now into the mountains,
go where Cadmus's daughters
keep their company of worshippers,
goad them into furious revenge
against that man, that raving spy,
all dressed up in his women's clothes,
so keen to glimpse the Maenads.

1230 CHORUS: Let justice manifest itself—                                           1230
let justice march, sword in hand,
to stab him in the throat,
that godless, lawless man,

1265 cast your deadly noose upon
that hunter of the Bacchae,
as the group of Maenads brings him down.

[Enter Second Messenger, one of Pentheus's attendants]

1278 SECOND MESSENGER: Pentheus, child of Echion, is dead.

CHORUS: O my lord Bromius,
Now your divine greatness
is here made manifest!                                                                      1280

SECOND MESSENGER: What are you saying? Why that song?
Women, how can you now rejoice like this
for the death of one who was my master?

CHORUS LEADER: We're strangers here in Thebes,

1291 CHORUS: Dionysus, oh Dionysus,
he's the one with power over me—
not Thebes.

1305 The stranger was our guide, scouting the way.           [The stranger = Dionysus]

1309 a valley there shut in by cliffs.
Through it refreshing waters flowed, with pines                                   1310
providing shade. The Maenads sat there,
their hands all busy with delightful work—

1321 on that hill, a pine tree stands.
If I climbed that, I might see those women,
and witness the disgraceful things they do."
Then I saw that stranger work a marvel.
He seized that pine tree's topmost branch—
it stretched up to heaven—and brought it down,
pulling it to the dark earth, bending it
as if it were a bow

1336 So that pine
towered straight up to heaven, with my king           
 [my king = Pentheus]
perched on its back.

1342 some voice—I guess it was Dionysus—
cried out from the sky, "Young women,
I've brought you the man who laughed at you,
who ridiculed my rites. Now punish him!"
As he shouted this, a dreadful fire arose,
blazing between the earth and heaven.

1357 His mother Agave with both her sisters
and all the Bacchae charged straight through
the valley, the torrents, the mountain cliffs,
pushed to a god-inspired frenzy.                                                             1360 

1375 catch the climbing beast up there,
stop him making our god's secret dances known."
Thousands of hands grabbed the tree and pulled.
They yanked it from the ground. Pentheus fell,
crashing to earth down from his lofty perch,
screaming in distress

1382 His priestess mother first began the slaughter.  [his priestess mother = Agave, Pentheus's mother
She hurled herself at him. Pentheus tore off
his headband, untying it from his head,
so wretched Agave would recognize him,
so she wouldn't kill him. Touching her cheek,
he cried out, "It's me, mother, Pentheus,
your child. You gave birth to me

1391 But Agave was foaming at the mouth,
eyes rolling in their sockets, her mind not set
on what she ought to think—she didn't listen—
she was possessed, in a Bacchic frenzy.

1397 tore his shoulder out. The strength she had—
it was not her own. The god put power
into those hands of hers. Meanwhile Ino,
her sister, went at the other side,                                                       1400
ripping off chunks of Pentheus's flesh,
while Autonoe and all the Bacchae, 
the whole crowd of them, attacked as well,
all of them howling out together.

1405 The women cried in triumph—
one brandished an arm, another held a foot—
complete with hunting boot—the women's nails
tore his ribs apart. Their hands grew bloody,
tossing bits of his flesh back and forth, for fun.                                1410

1414 As for the poor victim's head, his mother
stumbled on it. Her hands picked it up,
then stuck it on a thyrsus, at the tip.

1420 She's coming here, inside these very walls,                                     1420

1427 The best thing is to keep one's mind controlled, 
and worship all that comes down from the gods.

 

 

 

Readings: Buchi Emecheta, The Rape of Shavi (1983)  discussion leader: Hanna Mak

Nietzsche, Birth of Tragedy, Chapters 9-10, pp. 45-54 notes Birth of Tragedy Glossary; Discussion: Jeanette Smith

Instructor presentation: Aeschylus's Seven Against Thebes 

 

 

Notes for Aeschylus, Seven Against Thebes

SCENE > Oed's curse

7th gate: Eteocles x Polynices

10 do not be afraid . . . crowd of foreigners

10 Tiresias as herdsman of birds

39 each commander > gates

Chorus of Theban maidens

109 saved from slavery . . . torrent of men

149 hear rattle of chariots

181 Eteocles: don't go Dionysiac

230 man's duty . . . your duty silent, isnide house

256-7

ETEOCLES:
[256] O Zeus, what a breed you have made for us in women!

CHORUS:
[257] A breed steeped in misery, just like men whose city is captured.

262 do not terrify men

271, 280 Eteocles's vow to sacrifice > action at 7 gates

Chorus 332 modest girls plucked unripe

375 Scout narrates action, gate 1

422 gate 2

526 fifth man, Northern gate

631 7th gate, your own brother

654 Eteocles: father's curses brought to fulfillment

677 chorus: don't be like your father

712 obey us women

719 Eteocles [exit]

792 city saved

804 city is saved but kings born of the same seed

810 men are dead

812 destiny, ill-fated family

845 funeral procession

861 Antigone and Ismene

957 antiphonal dirge--cf. opera

971-2 perished by, killed nearest and dearest [Aristotle on families]

1011-13 rewrite to set up Antigone

1032 Antigone previews action

 

Shavi notes

Ch. 1 The Bird of Fire

 

Ch. 2 The Leper Creatures

11 “Things will never be the same again,” Patayon mouthed

16 [place / change]  the bravery found only in those of royal birth . . . .  the bird of fire heralded change

Ch 3 The Song of Freedom

17 How come the Ogene priests hadn’t foretold this event?

17 kriors [drums]

17-18 human sacrifice

18 woman as "speaking silence"

19 Olisa > king

20 we're people too . . . not different

24 birds holy, sacrifices [cf. Tiresias]

24 no longer the way they used to be

Ch. 4 The Visitors

25 two figures

26 long time, 15 minutes

28 church synod, nuclear power

29 [apocalypse] destruction for all the people of their own world

29 binoark

30 little communities

30 for no foreseeable reason

30-1 cf. Jesus, Jonah

Ch 5 Members of the Human Race

32 Asogba the curious

34 why should one human wish to monopolise her sorrow, or even her child? . . . child of the community

36 What kind of people have we become . . . . How will it sound when future people learn that we treat visitors or immigrants who land among us like animals?

37-38 They are immigrants, just like us.

38 Anoku: not humans

38 their arrival was symbolic

 

Ch 6 The Cattle People

41 declared people of Shavi

41 “Here women are used as chattels, aren’t they?  Tell me, are you a slave or simply a serving maid?”

42 only a child > slave, sweeping girl

43 typo

44 You have also heard our young people.  Maybe Ogene sent them to teach us something.

Oyoko daughter of priest

45 dignity commands more respect than position

47 All these may not be glamorous to the youth

47 if we could fly?  We could extend the borders of Shavi to take in Bordue, and Aflie . . . .   War isn’t progress

47 enough food

48 Asogba as modern; story x children of today

49 typo

Ch 7 Shavi Crystals

50 these aren't people, only rootless savages

52 first Noah saved his people

54 best house in town

54 typo

56 crystal, like a diamond

57 womb of earth

58 accept kindness

60 accept kindness

Ch 8 False Alarm

63 trust the humanity

64 picturesque ignorance + romantic; cf p. 73

66 these “savages” happened to be noble people who never forgot their past history

67 learn to accept kindness without strings

Ch 9 The Dancing Queen

71 an isolated place, hidden from view by the surrounding desert and hills (cf. Herland)

74 Christianity > slavery > mineral rights

76 no deformity; no means of artificially prolonging life.  Every living being had to be able to contribute something to the community

77 the mother of my son, the woman who told the world I’m a man

78 dance, individuality, all women were people, just like men

Ch 10 The Drinking Party

84 keen on native girls / hates them

84 born into this; adapt

86 The fact that their culture’s different doesn’t make us more human than they are.

87 I want to be able to choose the work I do

87 make slaves out of us.  When a white man lands in a place like this, he is always superior.  He makes the native his servant, not the other way round.

88 Why don’t you explain about being British, and deserving of respect, not like coolies from nowhere.

Ch 11 The Rape

89 [Ronje recognizes Asogba’s rank]

91 Such simple people would never be able to understand that women, grown-up women, could be single

92 He could stand black people behaving badly, because that was expected—volumes had been written . . . .   But how could one explain the behavior of blacks that went about their work with dignity?  Was it because they had remained in Africa and had never been enslaved in foreign countries?

93 He thought, “Black people had no moral standards anyway.  In England and the West Indies, most black women raised their families alone, because the women slept around . . . . “

94 what human would rape?  She had heard the elders say that things would never be the same after the arrival of the leper people, and now she saw why.

Ch 12 The Women's War

96 the whole stability of Shavi will be affected

96 This is a case beyond men.

97 For the first time, she was confronted with human dirt, evil, indignity, and violation.  For this, she would need a new set of rules, which Siegbo had not taught her. . . .   They must act quickly to save the fabric of Shavi life.

97 never had a case like this

97 polluted? no, not human

98 her mother transformed into a warrior; two senior women of Shavi

98 rape ages and humiliates any woman

98 two senior women of Shavi (Bechdel test)

99 we must purify our land.  This is our war.

100 In fact, I intend coming back and studying the life of the people.

101 [recognition scene?]

101 live here forever x nerve-racking life

102 they trusted us with their best.

102 Mother Africa . . . new set of humans (OBJECTIVE)

102 we’re all immigrants . . . . contribute [cf. Emecheta's other texts]

102 I wanted to learn, so they taught [learning objective]

103 our own polluted world

103 the man’s adaptability

103 Ronje conscience

104 don’t divorce; cows > family

104 rape Ayoko = rape Shavi

Ch. 13 Ronje Disappears

105 chosen race, romantic, illusion of the noble savage

105 half-white children left behind by fathers

106 black girl as object of use; he had only done what generations of his race had done before. > dog that bit a human must be put down

106 a pact to silence

107 50s = old for Shavi

107 birth > pillars of Shavi

107 a net [cf. Agamemnon, Bacchae]

108 simply left him . . . mutely

Ch. 14. Flip Returns

110 Ista's doctor father: German, Sudan, Nepal

110 Flip as chief

111 nomadic people, trust in others for survival

111 hidden place, secluded

111 drought > sensitive, profound air, so disarming

111 why didn't pair me up with Ronje? [Bechdel test, man couldn't imagine this turn in conversation]

112 assumption of family

112 gray rocks luminous

112 Flip too romantic, trusting

113 women, human, can't stop body from doing work created to perform

Ch. 15 Ayoko's Secret

118 typo (albino's, but right on 119)

118 how could he control people whose past he didn’t know?

adventurous youth's curosity curbed

119 controlled Shavi

119 Anoku's assistant and Ogene's priestess Iyalode, better self-control

119 whether albinos' bird could fly again

120 Anoku's family nothing to do with Ronje's disappearance (irony)

120 Shoshovi: men were strange

120 learn their wizardry

121 voice of women = voice of Ogene

121 back to ancestors, if any (also 123-4)

121 clitorization

122 that again was not true

122 younger wife speaks against Siegbo

123 The kriors would weave our names into Shavi’s history . . . .

123 father punished through daughter (Kriors' history)

123 father's prophecy and ambition too much? (hubris?)

124 nets

124 kriors' dying son

124 Ayoko cuts wire, saves Ronje

125 blood not on our hands--cf. Creon

Ch. 16 Asogba Leaves Shavi

126 Newark flies

126 Ogene so impatient

127 words like rags--wherevery you leave them, there they will stay

127 special happiness and indescribable self-fulfilment of creative scientist

127 Flip w/ controls, no danger

127 Ronje disappears, Mendoza mellows (woman's authorship)

128 these pregnant ladies.  Now at least we have a choice . . . .

128 typo

128 friendly but not us

128 come back and help, food and medicine, needn't die

129 English-speaking race, impose on others

129 Andria: invaded . . . rape her culture, what leave them?

129 belong nowhere

130 Ista: a doctor, a gynaecologist

130 Ista wasn't listening

131 Can't you just watch and learn?

131 so callous? Newark, over the moon

131 girl needs a Caesarian section

132 untouched noble savages, need western ways sometimes

132 open mind, but against grain of western thinking

132 birth of babies women's affair; Ogene & Olisa as world creators

132 western arrogance, deflation

133 complicated life our own making

133 inside me I feel that nothing from Africa stands up to western ways

133 too much heartsearching? > pampered women [woman's authorship?]

134 Asogba: going of my own free will

134 return, teach young men to build and fly birds of fire

134 hope and ambition . . . unthinkable

135 things not the same anymore; things have really changed; special case

135 things weren’t going to be the same anymore.  Our young people have seen . . . .

135 drinking friends trying to convey something

136 subtle conspiracy

136 Elders would bre offended

137 Flip's cool leaving him, loud baying voice

137 prepared, clitorized

137 it's too late to go back

137-8 Shoshovi as midwife, Iyalode

138 man's circumcision

138 our sex organ

138 swelling thing, red and bloody, strange disease

138 anything could happen < didn't understand each other

139 Flip: I'm guilty . . . [Asogba] wants to see it for himself

Ch. 17 Flip's Conscience

141 spectacle (Asogba)

141 misgivings about his audacity

141 said yourself things have changed

141 our future, not our past [mod / trad]

142 policeman . . . not a Mister, a prince

142 fault isn't entirely his

142 too late to blame anybody

142 Flip's marriage econd to profession

142 nothing about nuclear war

143 immigration bureau, big man

143 big Man or Woman up there

143 some woman, Maria Theresa . . . prayed for the world

143 tragedy of it struck home

143 drought relief, help women

144 not having the baby

144 Flip: 1 + 1 must = 2

144 we're having ours

144 planeload of rice and beans and corn

145 Mondoza more English; lady; Eton

145 Do you want Shavians to be exactly like us?

145 repay their hospitality

145 Their whole way of life will disappear

145 think you can play God

146 so many albino people . . . whites or Charlies

146 people from his part of world and Caribbean in prison

147 not gods at all . . . treated people of different skin color as if afflicted

147 company to collect Shavi stones, take care of Shavians' welfare

147 Flip's talent > conventional weapons, ethusiastic

148 village inn cf. dome houses of Shavi

148 more food than you need

149 a society not always right to say what one thinks (cf. Shavi?)

149 make them work for him

Ch. 18 Changed Asogba

150 harmattan [dry hot dusty NE wind from Sahara through West Africa to Gulf of Guinea, mid-Nov to Mid-March]

150 everything shrunk

150 grown fat . . . Ogene?

150 impersonal, coldness, controlled

151 shame killed Anoku

151 don't talk to albinos, not friends, dangerous

151 horror, Asogba had changed

152 Charles Fielding: not so bad, only 1 year in civilization

153 Asogba sees with eye of outsider: food > conquer the desert

153 taking over the working of Shavi

153 called me black; cf. albionos

153 dehumanized me

153 won't give us antyhing for nothing; why they didn't understand our kindness

154 Ebongbele: power corrupts (chorus? cf. O's friend in Things?)

154 water holes, "magic water"

154 making people jealous

155 what I suffered from the albinos

155 Egbongbele: cannot talk to us like that

155 Mensa: cows?

155 200 guns

155 John Mendoza: make his pile and get out (extraction, exploitation)

156 market saturated, no further responsibility

156 learn the western way

156 acquitted himself of Shavian responsibility

Ch. 19 Defeated Elders

157 another unkind and ugly drought

157 drought = test of strength

157 survival: shame arrogant young man

157 farmers + King's Elders: survival plan

158 a few people died; cf. cold winters

158 food-bearing birds driven by albinos

158 independence, freedom > dependence on albinos

159 the albinos can never fail

159 Shavians couldn't imagine [albinos' country]; Asogba's age group knew the facts

159 Egbongbele: farm at all?

160 talk excitedly of his dream

160 the chosen people (cf. Oedipus)

160 millions and millions of albinos

160 that time is coming soon [millennialism]

160 survived drought. History is made

160 stop working > less human

160 joy of providing

160 suppressed laughter from younger side

161 intricate ironies of fate

161 Shame kills faster, won't live in shame

161 power of his own words, forgetting proverb (rags)

162 guns and food

162 if run out of stones, what contribute to world?

162 why so behind other people

162 only thing: train men with guns

162 guns = England’s empire

162 cattle + camels

162 Viyon, brother, different mother

163 tell him his dreams

163 wanted riches and their way of life

163 no worship, no tomorrow

163 Ongar people, seek out Kokumas and enslave

163 anything possible to man with killing weapon who flies (cf. drones)

164 don't farm > expand

164 Asogba's voice becoming loud (cf. Flip)

164 lived beyond our time?

Ch. 20 Ista

165 mother's cottage, home, not

166 why not kept the child?

166 deadening one's conscience

167 Shavi: depth and concentration of passion

167 John Mendoza becomes cold

167 Flip didn't feel guilty at all

167 work to invent, discover . . . responsibility ended

167 people like Mendoza exploit discoveries

167 Europe didn't blow up, confirmed belief in Almighty

168 creating the world

168 home waiting for him

168 humans communal at heart

168 love, without pros and cons

169 life could be so simple

169 what teach Shavi? > learn from them: another way to live

169 Mondoza monopoly

169 rich - rape

Ch 21 New Shavi

171 The Shavians needed the Ongar people, as they too were needed by them. / But the Ongar people looked down on their neighbours because they didn't rear camels.

171 as soon as in range, opened fire

172 arrows, knives x machine guns

172 rode like kings . . . song of freedom

172 life however soon became more difficult . . . troublewome slaves

173 a waste land

173 running out of ammunition

174 people of Koo helped by their own albinos

174 brother Viyon survives

174 we'll regain all we have lost . . . go down . . . to avenge the wrongs they did to our ancestors

175 Shavi . . . ghostly

175 the orignator of the laughter was Iyalode, the priestess

176  Who killed the Elders? drought + shame

176 [Asogba] couldn't afford to die of shame, it was too much of a luxury. He must remedy the wrongs he had done.

176 Shoshovi: start all over again

177 We've lost all our men, our way of life and our privacy

177 keep all the young children alive . . . survive

177 you allowed them to rape us, to take all we had and all that made us a people. It isnow for you to find a place for the New Shavi. . . . We have been raped once, don't let us be raped twice.

177 his country didn't need the stones from Shavi any more

177 [proverb]

177 married Ayoko, syphilus, time couldn't eradicate the albino disease

178 half-brother Viyon carried on Shavian line

178 Viyon, who had always behaved like Patayon [back-filling]

178 We showed the albionos how to look after each other, how to be reponsible for one another.

178 Ogene teaching us a lesson

178 we don’t have to run away

178 No one can blame you for believing their promises, all a bad dream

178 Queen Mother: Shavi is the mother of us all.

178 What exactly is civilization? 

178 pondering about the future

 

 

review: novel as nationalism + modernity

 

Novel as dialogue + narrative

 

Novel as representing many contending voices of nation / group

 

+ narrative / myth of modernization

 

 

Things

 

124 nothing like this had ever happened

 

187 such a thing had never happened before.

 

194 administer justice just as it is done in my own country

 

203 Our fathers never dreamed of such a thing . . . .  But a white man never came to them.

 

Shavi

 

11 “Things will never be the same again,” Patayon mouthed

 

16 [place / change]  the bravery found only in those of royal birth . . . .  the bird fo fire heralded change

 

17 How come the Ogene priests hadn’t foretold this event?

 

30 for no foreseeable reason

 

36 How will it sound when future people learn that we treat visitors or immigrants who land among us like animals?

 

66 these “savages” happened to be noble people who never forgot their past history

 

94 what human would rape?  She had heard the elders say that things would never be the same after the arrival of the leper people, and now she saw why.

 

96 the whole stability of Shavi will be affected

 

97 For the first time, she was confronted with human dirt, evil, indignity, and violation.  For this, she would need a new set of rules, which Siegbo had not taught her. . . .   They must act quickly to save the fabric of Shavi life.

 

118 how could he control people whose past he didn’t know?

 

135 things weren’t going to be the same anymore.  Our young people have seen . . . .

 

141 since they came here things have changed. . . .  Think of our future . . . .  I’m talking about our future, not our past.

 

145 Their whole way of life will disappear

 

176 start all over again

 

178 pondering about the future

 

 

 

 

 

Christianity or Capitalism / spiritual or material motives

 

Christianity & Capitalism

sin & scarcity

grace & abundance

 

convert nature to capital

 

“universalist” religions x tribal, local religions

 

Shavi

129 belong nowhere

165 a place to regard as home

178 we don’t have to run away

 

 

178 lunatic religion + trading store $

 

p 10 the conquest of the earth

 

two theoretical impulses in western thought

"white man's burden"

 

1. convert world to Christianity--"every knee shall bow"

--?post-Christian or post-evangelical?

"Make the world safe for democracy"

 

Shavi 132 untouched noble savages need western ways sometimes

 

Shavi 137 clitorized

 

143 drought relief + help women

 

 

2. convert world to capitalism

 

Things

174 church, government, court, prison

religion trade government

 

176 custom = language

 

178 lunatic religion + trading store $

 

207 administrator, student of native customs; cf 181

208 book he planned to write

 

 

Shavi

 

27 “We have enough of everything”

 

47 if we could fly?  We could extend the borders of Shavi to take in Bordue, and Aflie . . . .   War isn’t progress

 

74 Christianity > slavery > mineral rights

 

76 no deformity; no means of artificially prolonging life.  Every living being had to be able to contribute something to the community

 

156 market saturated, no further responsibility

 

157 drought = test of strength

 

158 in / dependence

 

160 x-work = less human

 

165 x-farm, > expand

 

 

 

 

 

Shavi—science fiction, apocalypse, utopia

 

 

29 [apocalypse] destruction for all the people of their own world

 

 

71 an isolated place, hidden from view by the surrounding desert and hills (cf. Herland)

 

104 rape Ayoko = rape Shavi