LITR 5831
World / Multicultural Literature: Tragedy & Africa

Lecture Notes
Readings:
Buchi Emecheta, The
Rape of Shavi (1983) , complete
Bacchae
Presentation Six (lines 1126-1431):
Caryn Livingston
Nietzsche,
Birth of Tragedy,
Chapter 11, pp. 54-59
notes
+
Birth of Tragedy Glossary;
Discussion: Heather Minette Schutmaat
Allegory: symbolic characters, didactic
Bacchae
Presentation
Six (lines 1126-1431):
1126
DIONYSUS: [admiringly, as he
escorts Pentheus from the doors]
You
look just like one of Cadmus's daughters.
1130
you look like a bull leading me out here,
1130
with those horns growing
from your head. Were you once
upon a time a beast? It's
certain now you've changed into a bull.
[cf. bull(s) in lines 762, 913]
DIONYSUS:
The god walks here. He's made a pact with us.
[cf. Nietzsche
on confusion of actor / hero & Dionysus as god]
1137
PENTHEUS:
How do I look? Am I holding myself
just like Ino or my mother, Agave?
1142
PENTHEUS: [demonstrating
his dancing steps]
[Dionysus begins adjusting Pentheus's hair and clothing]
1147-8
PENTHEUS:
All right then. You can be my dresser,
now that I've transformed myself for you.
[transformation theme; cf. lines 70,
1646, 1704, 1711]
1155
DIONYSUS:
Once you see
those Bacchic women
acting modestly,
[confusion whether Bacchic women are "girls gone wild" or consciousness-raising]
once you
confront something you don't expect,
you'll consider me your dearest friend.
1161
[Dionysus observes Pentheus trying out the dance step]
DIONYSUS:
Your mind has changed. I applaud you for it.
[transformation
theme; cf. lines 70,
1148, 1646, 1704, 1711]
1174
I'll use no force
to get the better of these women.
I'll conceal myself there in the pine
trees.
[sounds like voyeurism
or peeping-tom]
1180
I can picture them right now,
1180 in the woods, going at it
like rutting birds,
clutching
each other as they make sweet love.
[Pentheus
reveals sexual interest in group he sought to repress]
1192
Follow
me. I'm the guide who'll rescue you.
When you return someone else will bring you back.
PENTHEUS:
That will be my mother. [foreshadowing]
1197
DIONYSUS: [continuing].
. . in your mother's arms.
[foreshadowing]
1198
PENTHEUS:
You've really made up your mind to spoil me.
DIONYSUS:
To spoil you? That's true, but in my own way.
[irony]
PENTHEUS:
Then I'll be off to get what I deserve.
1200
1201
DIONYSUS: [speaking in the
direction Pentheus has gone, but not speaking to him]
You fearful, terrifying man—on your way
to horrific suffering.
1210
CHORUS 1:
Up now, you hounds of madness, [hounds
of madness = maenads as furies?]
1210
go up now into the
mountains, go where Cadmus's
daughters
keep their company of
worshippers,
goad them into
furious revenge
against that
man, that raving spy,
all
dressed up in his women's clothes,
so keen to glimpse the Maenads.
1230
CHORUS:
Let justice manifest itself—
1230 let justice march, sword in
hand, to stab him in the throat,
that godless, lawless man,
1265
cast your deadly noose upon
that hunter of the Bacchae,
as the group of Maenads brings him down.
[Enter Second Messenger, one of Pentheus's attendants]
1278
SECOND MESSENGER:
Pentheus, child of Echion, is dead.
CHORUS:
O my lord Bromius,
Now your
divine greatness
is here made
manifest!
1280
SECOND MESSENGER:
What are you saying? Why that song?
Women, how can you now rejoice like this
for the death of one who was my master?
CHORUS LEADER:
We're strangers here in Thebes,
1291
CHORUS:
Dionysus, oh Dionysus,
he's the
one with power over me—
not
Thebes.
1305
The stranger was our guide, scouting the way. [The
stranger = Dionysus]
1309
a valley there shut in by
cliffs.
Through it refreshing waters flowed, with pines
1310
providing shade. The
Maenads sat there,
their hands
all busy with delightful work—
1321
on that hill, a pine tree stands.
If I climbed that, I might see those women,
and witness the disgraceful things they do."
Then I saw
that stranger work a marvel.
He seized that pine tree's topmost branch—
it stretched up to heaven—and brought it down,
pulling it to the dark earth, bending it
as if it were a bow
1336
So that pine
towered straight up to heaven, with my king
[my
king = Pentheus]
perched on its back.
1342
some voice—I guess
it was Dionysus—
cried out from
the sky, "Young women,
I've
brought you the man who laughed at you,
who ridiculed my rites. Now punish him!"
As he shouted this,
a dreadful fire arose,
blazing between the earth and heaven.
1357
His mother Agave with both her sisters
and all the Bacchae charged straight through
the valley, the torrents, the mountain cliffs,
pushed to a god-inspired frenzy.
1360
1375
catch the climbing beast up there,
stop him making our god's secret dances known."
Thousands of hands grabbed the tree
and pulled.
They yanked it from
the ground. Pentheus fell,
crashing to earth down from his lofty perch,
screaming in distress
1382
His priestess mother first began the slaughter.
[his priestess mother = Agave, Pentheus's mother
She hurled herself at him. Pentheus tore off
his headband, untying it from his head,
so wretched Agave would recognize him,
so she wouldn't kill him. Touching her cheek,
he cried out, "It's me, mother, Pentheus,
your child. You gave birth to me
1391
But Agave was foaming at
the mouth,
eyes rolling in their
sockets, her mind not set
on
what she ought to think—she didn't listen—
she was possessed, in a Bacchic frenzy.
1397
tore his shoulder out. The strength she had—
it was not her own.
The god put power
into those hands of hers. Meanwhile
Ino,
her sister, went at the other side,
1400
ripping off chunks of
Pentheus's flesh,
while Autonoe
and all the Bacchae,
the whole crowd of them,
attacked as well,
all of them
howling out together.
1405
The women cried in triumph—
one brandished an arm, another held a foot—
complete with hunting boot—the women's nails
tore his ribs apart. Their hands grew bloody,
tossing bits of his flesh back and forth, for fun.
1410
1414
As for the poor victim's head, his mother
stumbled on it. Her hands picked it
up,
then stuck it on a thyrsus,
at the tip.
1420 She's coming here, inside these very walls,
1420
1427
The best thing is to keep one's mind controlled,
and worship all that comes down
from the gods.
Readings:
Buchi Emecheta, The
Rape of Shavi (1983)
discussion leader:
Hanna Mak
Nietzsche,
Birth of Tragedy,
Chapters 9-10, pp. 45-54
notes
+
Birth of Tragedy Glossary;
Discussion: Jeanette Smith
Instructor presentation:
Aeschylus's
Seven Against
Thebes
Notes for Aeschylus,
Seven Against Thebes
SCENE > Oed's curse
7th gate: Eteocles x Polynices
10 do not be afraid . . . crowd of foreigners
10 Tiresias as herdsman of birds
39 each commander > gates
Chorus of Theban maidens
109 saved from slavery . . . torrent of men
149 hear rattle of chariots
181 Eteocles: don't go Dionysiac
230 man's duty . . . your duty silent, isnide house
256-7
ETEOCLES:
[256] O Zeus, what a breed you have made for us in women!
CHORUS:
[257] A breed steeped in misery, just like men whose city
is captured.
262 do not terrify men
271, 280 Eteocles's vow to sacrifice > action at 7 gates
Chorus 332 modest girls plucked unripe
375 Scout narrates action, gate 1
422 gate 2
526 fifth man, Northern gate
631 7th gate, your own brother
654 Eteocles: father's curses brought to fulfillment
677 chorus: don't be like your father
712 obey us women
719 Eteocles [exit]
792 city saved
804 city is saved but kings born of the same seed
810 men are dead
812 destiny, ill-fated family
845 funeral procession
861 Antigone and Ismene
957 antiphonal dirge--cf. opera
971-2 perished by, killed nearest and dearest [Aristotle on families]
1011-13 rewrite to set up
Antigone
1032 Antigone previews action
Shavi
notes
Ch. 1 The Bird of Fire
Ch. 2 The Leper Creatures
11 “Things will never be the same again,” Patayon mouthed
16 [place / change] the bravery
found only in those of royal birth . . . .
the bird of fire heralded change
Ch 3 The Song of Freedom
17 How come the Ogene priests hadn’t foretold this event?
17 kriors [drums]
17-18 human sacrifice
18 woman as "speaking silence"
19 Olisa > king
20 we're people too . . . not different
24 birds holy, sacrifices [cf. Tiresias]
24 no longer the way they used to be
Ch. 4 The Visitors
25 two figures
26 long time, 15 minutes
28 church synod, nuclear power
29 [apocalypse] destruction for all the people of their own world
29 binoark
30 little communities
30 for no foreseeable reason
30-1 cf. Jesus, Jonah
Ch 5 Members of the Human Race
32 Asogba the curious
34 why should one human wish to monopolise her sorrow, or even her child? . . .
child of the community
36 What kind of people have we become . . . . How will it sound when future people learn that we treat visitors or
immigrants who land among us like animals?
37-38 They are immigrants, just like us.
38 Anoku: not humans
38 their arrival was symbolic
Ch 6 The Cattle People
41 declared people of Shavi
41 “Here women are used as chattels, aren’t they?
Tell me, are you a slave or simply a serving maid?”
42 only a child > slave, sweeping girl
43 typo
44 You have also heard our young people.
Maybe Ogene sent them to teach us something.
Oyoko daughter of priest
45 dignity commands more respect than position
47 All these may not be glamorous to the youth
47 if we could fly? We could extend
the borders of Shavi to take in Bordue, and Aflie . . . .
War isn’t progress
47 enough food
48 Asogba as modern; story x children of today
49 typo
Ch 7 Shavi Crystals
50 these aren't people, only rootless savages
52 first Noah saved his people
54 best house in town
54 typo
56 crystal, like a diamond
57 womb of earth
58 accept kindness
60 accept kindness
Ch 8 False Alarm
63 trust the humanity
64 picturesque ignorance + romantic; cf p. 73
66 these “savages” happened to be noble people who never forgot their past
history
67 learn to accept kindness without strings
Ch 9 The Dancing Queen
71 an isolated place, hidden from view by the surrounding desert and hills (cf.
Herland)
74 Christianity > slavery > mineral rights
76 no deformity; no means of artificially prolonging life.
Every living being had to be able to contribute something to the
community
77 the mother of my son, the woman who told the world I’m a man
78 dance, individuality, all women were people, just like men
Ch 10 The Drinking Party
84 keen on native girls / hates them
84 born into this; adapt
86 The fact that their culture’s different doesn’t make us more human than they
are.
87 I want to be able to choose the work I do
87 make slaves out of us. When a
white man lands in a place like this, he is always superior.
He makes the native his servant, not the other way round.
88 Why don’t you explain about being British, and deserving of respect, not like
coolies from nowhere.
Ch 11 The Rape
89 [Ronje recognizes Asogba’s rank]
91 Such simple people would never be able to understand that women, grown-up
women, could be single
92 He could stand black people behaving badly, because that was expected—volumes
had been written . . . . But
how could one explain the behavior of blacks that went about their work with
dignity? Was it because they had
remained in Africa and had never been enslaved in foreign countries?
93 He thought, “Black people had no moral standards anyway.
In England and the West Indies, most black women raised their families
alone, because the women slept around . . . . “
94 what human would rape? She had
heard the elders say that things would never be the same after the arrival of
the leper people, and now she saw why.
Ch 12 The Women's War
96 the whole stability of Shavi will be affected
96 This is a case beyond men.
97 For the first time, she was confronted with human dirt, evil, indignity, and
violation. For this, she would need
a new set of rules, which Siegbo had not taught her. . . .
They must act quickly to save the fabric of Shavi life.
97 never had a case like this
97 polluted? no, not human
98 her mother transformed into a warrior; two senior women of Shavi
98 rape ages and humiliates any woman
98 two senior women of Shavi (Bechdel
test)
99 we must purify our land. This is
our war.
100 In fact, I intend coming back and studying the life of the people.
101 [recognition scene?]
101 live here forever x nerve-racking life
102 they trusted us with their best.
102 Mother Africa . . . new set of humans (OBJECTIVE)
102 we’re all immigrants . . . . contribute [cf. Emecheta's other texts]
102 I wanted to learn, so they taught [learning objective]
103 our own polluted world
103 the man’s adaptability
103 Ronje conscience
104 don’t divorce; cows > family
104 rape Ayoko = rape Shavi
Ch. 13 Ronje Disappears
105 chosen race, romantic, illusion of the noble savage
105 half-white children left behind by fathers
106 black girl as object of use; he had only done what generations of his race
had done before. > dog that bit a human must be put down
106 a pact to silence
107 50s = old for Shavi
107 birth > pillars of Shavi
107 a net [cf. Agamemnon, Bacchae]
108 simply left him . . . mutely
Ch. 14. Flip Returns
110 Ista's doctor father: German, Sudan, Nepal
110 Flip as chief
111 nomadic people, trust in others for survival
111 hidden place, secluded
111 drought > sensitive, profound air, so disarming
111 why didn't pair me up with Ronje? [Bechdel test, man couldn't imagine
this turn in conversation]
112 assumption of family
112 gray rocks luminous
112 Flip too romantic, trusting
113 women, human, can't stop body from doing work created to perform
Ch. 15 Ayoko's Secret
118 typo (albino's, but right on 119)
118 how could he control people whose past he didn’t know?
adventurous youth's curosity curbed
119 controlled Shavi
119 Anoku's assistant and Ogene's priestess Iyalode, better self-control
119 whether albinos' bird could fly again
120 Anoku's family nothing to do with Ronje's disappearance (irony)
120 Shoshovi: men were strange
120 learn their wizardry
121 voice of women = voice of Ogene
121 back to ancestors, if any (also 123-4)
121 clitorization
122 that again was not true
122 younger wife speaks against Siegbo
123 The kriors would weave our names into Shavi’s history . . . .
123 father punished through daughter (Kriors' history)
123 father's prophecy and ambition too much? (hubris?)
124 nets
124 kriors' dying son
124 Ayoko cuts wire, saves Ronje
125 blood not on our hands--cf. Creon
Ch. 16 Asogba Leaves Shavi
126 Newark flies
126 Ogene so impatient
127 words like rags--wherevery you leave them, there they will stay
127 special happiness and indescribable self-fulfilment of creative
scientist
127 Flip w/ controls, no danger
127 Ronje disappears, Mendoza mellows (woman's authorship)
128 these pregnant ladies. Now at
least we have a choice . . . .
128 typo
128 friendly but not us
128 come back and help, food and medicine, needn't die
129 English-speaking race, impose on others
129 Andria: invaded . . . rape her culture, what leave them?
129 belong nowhere
130 Ista: a doctor, a gynaecologist
130 Ista wasn't listening
131 Can't you just watch and learn?
131 so callous? Newark, over the moon
131 girl needs a Caesarian section
132 untouched noble savages, need western ways sometimes
132 open mind, but against grain of western thinking
132 birth of babies women's affair; Ogene & Olisa as world creators
132 western arrogance, deflation
133 complicated life our own making
133 inside me I feel that nothing from Africa stands up to western ways
133 too much heartsearching? > pampered women [woman's authorship?]
134 Asogba: going of my own free will
134 return, teach young men to build and fly birds of fire
134 hope and ambition . . . unthinkable
135 things not the same anymore; things have really changed; special case
135 things weren’t going to be the same anymore.
Our young people have seen . . . .
135 drinking friends trying to convey something
136 subtle conspiracy
136 Elders would bre offended
137 Flip's cool leaving him, loud baying voice
137 prepared, clitorized
137 it's too late to go back
137-8 Shoshovi as midwife, Iyalode
138 man's circumcision
138 our sex organ
138 swelling thing, red and bloody, strange disease
138 anything could happen < didn't understand each other
139 Flip: I'm guilty . . . [Asogba] wants to see it for himself
Ch. 17 Flip's Conscience
141 spectacle (Asogba)
141 misgivings about his audacity
141 said yourself things have changed
141 our future, not our past [mod / trad]
142 policeman . . . not a Mister, a prince
142 fault isn't entirely his
142 too late to blame anybody
142 Flip's marriage econd to profession
142 nothing about nuclear war
143 immigration bureau, big man
143 big Man or Woman up there
143 some woman, Maria Theresa . . . prayed for the world
143 tragedy of it struck home
143 drought relief, help women
144 not having the baby
144 Flip: 1 + 1 must = 2
144 we're having ours
144 planeload of rice and beans and corn
145 Mondoza more English; lady; Eton
145 Do you want Shavians to be exactly like us?
145 repay their hospitality
145 Their whole way of life will disappear
145 think you can play God
146 so many albino people . . . whites or Charlies
146 people from his part of world and Caribbean in prison
147 not gods at all . . . treated people of different skin color as if
afflicted
147 company to collect Shavi stones, take care of Shavians' welfare
147 Flip's talent > conventional weapons, ethusiastic
148 village inn cf. dome houses of Shavi
148 more food than you need
149 a society not always right to say what one thinks (cf. Shavi?)
149 make them work for him
Ch. 18 Changed Asogba
150 harmattan [dry hot dusty NE wind from Sahara through West Africa to
Gulf of Guinea, mid-Nov to Mid-March]
150 everything shrunk
150 grown fat . . . Ogene?
150 impersonal, coldness, controlled
151 shame killed Anoku
151 don't talk to albinos, not friends, dangerous
151 horror, Asogba had changed
152 Charles Fielding: not so bad, only 1 year in civilization
153 Asogba sees with eye of outsider: food > conquer the desert
153 taking over the working of Shavi
153 called me black; cf. albionos
153 dehumanized me
153 won't give us antyhing for nothing; why they didn't understand our
kindness
154 Ebongbele: power corrupts (chorus? cf. O's friend in Things?)
154 water holes, "magic water"
154 making people jealous
155 what I suffered from the albinos
155 Egbongbele: cannot talk to us like that
155 Mensa: cows?
155 200 guns
155 John Mendoza: make his pile and get out (extraction, exploitation)
156 market saturated, no further responsibility
156 learn the western way
156 acquitted himself of Shavian responsibility
Ch. 19 Defeated Elders
157 another unkind and ugly drought
157 drought = test of strength
157 survival: shame arrogant young man
157 farmers + King's Elders: survival plan
158 a few people died; cf. cold winters
158 food-bearing birds driven by albinos
158 independence, freedom > dependence on albinos
159 the albinos can never fail
159 Shavians couldn't imagine [albinos' country]; Asogba's age group knew
the facts
159 Egbongbele: farm at all?
160 talk excitedly of his dream
160 the chosen people (cf. Oedipus)
160 millions and millions of albinos
160 that time is coming soon [millennialism]
160 survived drought. History is made
160 stop working > less human
160 joy of providing
160 suppressed laughter from younger side
161 intricate ironies of fate
161 Shame kills faster, won't live in shame
161 power of his own words, forgetting proverb (rags)
162 guns and food
162 if run out of stones, what contribute to world?
162 why so behind other people
162 only thing: train men with guns
162 guns = England’s empire
162 cattle + camels
162 Viyon, brother, different mother
163 tell him his dreams
163 wanted riches and their way of life
163 no worship, no tomorrow
163 Ongar people, seek out Kokumas and enslave
163 anything possible to man with killing weapon who flies (cf. drones)
164 don't farm > expand
164 Asogba's voice becoming loud (cf. Flip)
164 lived beyond our time?
Ch. 20 Ista
165 mother's cottage, home, not
166 why not kept the child?
166 deadening one's conscience
167 Shavi: depth and concentration of passion
167 John Mendoza becomes cold
167 Flip didn't feel guilty at all
167 work to invent, discover . . . responsibility ended
167 people like Mendoza exploit discoveries
167 Europe didn't blow up, confirmed belief in Almighty
168 creating the world
168 home waiting for him
168 humans communal at heart
168 love, without pros and cons
169 life could be so simple
169 what teach Shavi? > learn from them: another way to live
169 Mondoza monopoly
169 rich - rape
Ch 21 New Shavi
171 The Shavians needed the Ongar people, as they too were needed by them.
/ But the Ongar people looked down on their neighbours because they didn't rear
camels.
171 as soon as in range, opened fire
172 arrows, knives x machine guns
172 rode like kings . . . song of freedom
172 life however soon became more difficult . . . troublewome slaves
173 a waste land
173 running out of ammunition
174 people of Koo helped by their own albinos
174 brother Viyon survives
174 we'll regain all we have lost . . . go down . . . to avenge the wrongs
they did to our ancestors
175 Shavi . . . ghostly
175 the orignator of the laughter was Iyalode, the priestess
176 Who killed the Elders? drought + shame
176 [Asogba] couldn't afford to die of shame, it was too much of a luxury.
He must remedy the wrongs he had done.
176 Shoshovi: start all over again
177 We've lost all our men, our way of life and our privacy
177 keep all the young children alive . . . survive
177 you allowed them to rape us, to take all we had and all that made us a
people. It isnow for you to find a place for the New Shavi. . . . We have been
raped once, don't let us be raped twice.
177 his country didn't need the stones from Shavi any more
177 [proverb]
177 married Ayoko, syphilus, time couldn't eradicate the albino disease
178 half-brother Viyon carried on Shavian line
178 Viyon, who had always behaved like Patayon [back-filling]
178 We showed the albionos how to look after each other, how to be
reponsible for one another.
178 Ogene teaching us a lesson
178 we don’t have to run away
178 No one can blame you for believing their promises, all a bad dream
178 Queen Mother: Shavi is the mother of us all.
178 What exactly is civilization?
178 pondering about the future
review: novel as nationalism + modernity
Novel as dialogue + narrative
Novel as representing many contending voices of nation / group
+ narrative / myth of modernization
Things
124 nothing like this had ever happened
187 such a thing had never happened before.
194 administer justice just as it is done in my own country
203 Our fathers never dreamed of such a thing . . . .
But a white man never came to them.
Shavi
11 “Things will never be the same again,” Patayon mouthed
16 [place / change] the bravery
found only in those of royal birth . . . .
the bird fo fire heralded change
17 How come the Ogene priests hadn’t foretold this event?
30 for no foreseeable reason
36 How will it sound when future people learn that we treat visitors or
immigrants who land among us like animals?
66 these “savages” happened to be noble people who never forgot their past
history
94 what human would rape? She had
heard the elders say that things would never be the same after the arrival of
the leper people, and now she saw why.
96 the whole stability of Shavi will be affected
97 For the first time, she was confronted with human dirt, evil, indignity, and
violation. For this, she would need
a new set of rules, which Siegbo had not taught her. . . .
They must act quickly to save the fabric of Shavi life.
118 how could he control people whose past he didn’t know?
135 things weren’t going to be the same anymore.
Our young people have seen . . . .
141 since they came here things have changed. . . .
Think of our future . . . .
I’m talking about our future, not our past.
145 Their whole way of life will disappear
176 start all over again
178 pondering about the future
Christianity or Capitalism / spiritual or material motives
Christianity & Capitalism
sin & scarcity
grace & abundance
convert nature to capital
“universalist” religions x tribal, local religions
Shavi
129 belong nowhere
165 a place to regard as home
178 we don’t have to run away
178 lunatic religion + trading store $
p 10 the conquest of the earth
two theoretical impulses in western thought
"white man's burden"
1. convert world to Christianity--"every knee shall bow"
--?post-Christian or post-evangelical?
"Make the world safe for democracy"
Shavi
132 untouched noble savages need western ways sometimes
Shavi
137 clitorized
143 drought relief + help women
2. convert world to capitalism
Things
174 church, government, court, prison
religion trade government
176 custom = language
178 lunatic religion + trading store $
207 administrator, student of native customs; cf 181
208 book he planned to write
Shavi
27 “We have enough of everything”
47 if we could fly? We could extend
the borders of Shavi to take in Bordue, and Aflie . . . .
War isn’t progress
74 Christianity > slavery > mineral rights
76 no deformity; no means of artificially prolonging life.
Every living being had to be able to contribute something to the
community
156 market saturated, no further responsibility
157 drought = test of strength
158 in / dependence
160 x-work = less human
165 x-farm, > expand
Shavi—science
fiction, apocalypse, utopia
29 [apocalypse] destruction for all the people of their own world
71 an isolated place, hidden from view by the surrounding desert and hills (cf.
Herland)
104 rape Ayoko = rape Shavi

|