Plot Synopsis In the near-future in a slightly-alternate universe, Maebelline, nicknamed Mae, a twenty-something graduate of Carleton College encumbered by crushing student debt and working at a no-future public energy utility in California, accepts an entry-level position in Customer Efficiency at The Circle, a California-global social media corporation that appears to have assumed the functions of Facebook and Twitter. Mae is offered the job through the intervention of her college roommate, Annie Allerton, who is one of the Circle's "Gang of 40," a group of innovators and entrepreneurs under the company's founders, the "Three Wise Men." Literary critique: Very readable, easy to turn pages Clever, inventive brand names, contemporary conversations Excellent mimesis of hip corporate-speak: "Rob from Payroll," "Tania the Notary"; "Let's hug it out"; "I'm just getting a lot of input today." Problem: Mae not as smart as author. She seems not to register information the author puts before her, making her something of a Candide satire-protagonist, eternally naive and hopeful, potentially cooperating with interests that only exploit her talent or availability.
Reviews Margaret Atwood, "When Privacy is Theft," New York Review of Books 21 November 2013. (review of The Circle): "Utopia, it seems, is an awful lot like high school, but with even more homework." Ellen Ullman, "Ring of Power" New York Times 1 Nov. 2013 (review of The Circle): Susanna Luthi, "Brainwash, Condition, Repeat: Dave Eggers's The Circle" Los Angeles Review of Books 27 November 2013:
Eggers as utopian author Obj. 1d. To identify the utopian author both within and beyond traditional literary categories—e.g., as writer + activist, agitator, reformer, prophet / visionary? Eggers as writer, visual artist, publisher, philanthropist, literacy activist, and novelist
Utopian Conventions: Style Socratic dialogues with older founder Public presentations, spectacles revealing information, explaining ideology Metaphorical representations of society (Corporate aquarium: octopus as curiosity, groping; shark as capitalist aggression, consumption) mottos, slogants: Community First; PPT: Passion, Participation, Transparency 47 satire: smiles / frowns to Guatemala victim / paramilitaries 243
Utopian Conventions: Content 30 The rest of America . . . seemed like some chaotic mess in the developing world. Outside the walls of the Circle, all was noise and struggle, failure and filth. But here, all had been perfected. The best people had made the best systems and the best systems had reaped funds, unlimited funds, that made possible this, the best place to work. And it was natural that it was so, Mae thought. Who else but utopians could make utopia? "participating": division b/w work and social life collapse 1000 settlers, on campus permanently 332 161 urban reclamation 171 CircleMoney . . . obviate need for paper currency 258 Mercer ("Luddite"): . . . some cult taking over the world. . . . 259 It's the usual utopian vision. . . . it sounds perfect, sounds progressive, but it carries with it more control, more central tracking of everything we do. . . . Individually, you don't know what you're doing collectively. 395 "Now we're all God." 426 ensure behavioral norms
Platonic forms (sometimes logos) as symbols for ideal community 248 completing the Circle 287 circle strongest shape 311 All over campus there were signs that hinted at immionent completion. (millennial); 401 the moment where history pivots
Contemporary social commentary art from stressed public museums (privatization; starving of public institutions) 259 no oppressors. No one's forcing you to do this. . . . you willingly become utterly socially autistic . . . nothing to show for it [work] except for some numbers that won't exist or be remembered in a week. 385 Circle profile > register to vote > 100% participation 388 require every voting age citizen to have a Circle account 483 mob rule, filterless society where secrets are crimes 484 Infoccommunication paired with ruthless capitalitic ambition 485 Rights of the Digital Age
Reading notes 21 everything tied together and tractable and simple 23 Tom Stenton: "He was the anachronism at the Cricle, the flash CEO, and created conlficted feelings among many of the utopian young Circlers. 30 The rest of America . . . seemed like some chaotic mess in the developing world. Outside the walls of the Circle, all was noise and struggle, failure and filth. But here, all had been perfected. The best people had made the best systems and the best systems had reaped funds, unlimited funds, that made possible this, the best place to work. And it was natural that it was so, Mae thought. Who else but utopians could make utopia? 47 mottos, slogants: Community First; PPT: Passion, Participation, Transparency 66 SeeChange (cf. Scientology as corporate religion, "SeeOrg") 68 All that Happens Must be Known (transparence or surveillance?) 76 [dystopian insurance] [alternate universe: Affordable Care Act apparently doesn't exist] 100 PartiRank 105 improve selves, share knowledge 107 "Let's hug it out." 112 "I'm just getting a lot of input today." 134 monetize 144 4th screen 154 swallows sensor > collect data 161 urban reclamation 171 CircleMoney . . . obviate need for paper currency 173 Senator: "Break Up the Circle" > scandals Senator x-wars in Iraq and Afghanistan 175 social behavior and message sending > totally optional 186 Josiah: " My problem with paper is that all communication dies with it. It holds no possibility of continuity." 200-01 We don't delete at the Circle. 206 Sunshine Laws 214 patent security 222 cave (gothic) 237 Projet 9: random dreaming > organized thinking, real life problem solving 241 SeeChange +- protection of intellectual property 242 6 screens 243 satire: smiles / frowns to Guatemala victim / paramilitaries 248 completing the Circle 251 new screen 252 insurance solved 253 she was now a crucial and measurable driver of world commerce 258 Mercer : . . . some cult taking over the world. . . . 259 It's the usual utopian vision. . . . it sounds perfect, sounds progressive, but it carries with it more control, more central tracking of everything we do. . . . Individually, you don't know what you're doing collectively. 258 sex-porn-witchcraft controversy 259 no oppressors. No one's forcing you to do this. . . . you willingly become utterly socially autistic . . . nothing to show for it [work] except for some numbers that won't exist or be remembered in a week. 267 What was it about here that made her this curious? 277 secrecy 281 When is a secret a good thing? 287 circle strongest shape 290 finally compelled to be our best selves 292 If all doors are open, only one truth 301 Aphorism 311 All over campus there were signs that hinted at immionent completion. 314 on campera: studied, performative 325 9 screens elimination of physical money trackability of internet currency > eliminate huge swaths of crime overnight 328 thousands, millions watching, you perform your best self 329 liberated from bad behavior 332 1000 settlers, on campus permanently 333 tear opening, fathomless blackness 334 This is a day like every other day, in that it is unlike any other day. 334-5 Insurance companies, world health agencies, CDCs, Big Pharma > complete information-sharing among all of these previously disconnected, eve4n adversarieal entities 343 YouthTrack all student records in one unified database 355 sensitive intellectual property 364 parents request less messaging 367 different evolutionary paths 368 we need options for opting out 370 gamification 371 cease to contact them, unless privately 75 the tear 382 Gang of 40, the group of innovators 385 Circle profile > register to vote > 100% participation 388 require every voting age citizen to have a Circle account 351-2 eliminate Congress, much of Washington 394 How do we get the inevitable sooner? 395 "Now we're all God." 401 the moment where history pivots 415 votes were public 421 NeighborWatch 426 ensure behavioral norms 430 P.O. Friday 465 the tear was not knowing 483 mob rule, filterless society where secrets are crimes 484 Infoccommunication paired with ruthless capitalitic ambition monetized utopia 485 Rights of the Digital Age 489 Circle devouring all competitors
Olivia Santos, Rep. District 14 Stewart the Transparent Man
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