LITR 4368
Literature of the Future
        

Model Assignments

Final Exam Essays 2015

assignment

Sample answers for Essay 1:
compare 2 or more “future scenarios”

 

Kimberly Hall

May 4th, 2016

Conformity or Freedom: Dystopias and Diversity in Different Visions of the Future

          One of the most common fears in human adults is, unsurprisingly, the fear of the unknown. And as time travel has, to my knowledge, not been invented yet, the course of the future is entirely unknown. It is this fear of the unknown that drives people in power to attempt to create a utopia, and in doing so oppress individuality and the unpredictability of diversity. While science fiction and speculative fiction are not widely considered relevant as literature, they serve as effective tools for pointing out the flaws in ‘ideal’ societies. Three stories that we read in class, “Drapes and Folds”, “The Logical Legend of Heliopause and Cyberfiddle”, and Parable of the Sower, provide examples of flawed utopias (or rather, dystopias), both low-tech and high-tech, and criticize different kinds of enforced conformity. Finally, ecotopias such as “Chocco”, alongside the new artistic and literary genre of solarpunk, provide a hopeful vision for a future that embraces diversity.

          In “Drapes and Folds”, society has progressed to a point where many diseases have been eliminated and individuals have average lifespans of over one hundred years. In the name of safety and equality, The Powers have also experimented on national food sources, outlawed decorative fabrics, and brainwashed and conditioned rebellious individuals into compliance. The main character, Pearl, is distraught to discover that her best friend Diana has been involuntarily brainwashed into agreement with the new FabricLaw dictating that all manners of clothing were to be replaced with uniform ‘Bracies’, essentially eliminating the appearance of different body types. Diana has also been conditioned into a dislike for flavored food, which Pearl laments because Diana had previously been a fierce proponent of flavored food and had rejected their society’s ‘Approved Nutritional Procedure’ until it had become the only safe option. Essentially, society enforced conformity by making it physically unsafe to be individualistic.

          While reading “Drapes and Folds”, I was immediately reminded of one of my favorite short stories, “Harrison Bergeron” by Kurt Vonnegut. In “Harrison Bergeron”, no one in society is allowed to be smarter, more athletic, or better-looking than anyone else, and conformity is enforced by means of ‘handicaps’—weights for the more athletic, ugly masks for the more attractive, and radios inside the ears of the more intelligent. Harrison Bergeron, the title character, is shot on live television for refusing to wear his handicaps. The two stories share the same criticism of societal progress: that in an effort to create a utopia, society will essentially embrace and enforce dangerous levels of conformity.

          “The Logical Legend of Heliopause and Cyberfiddle” takes place in a much different, but in some ways remarkably similar, society. Technology has drastically advanced, at the expense of the natural world, and humans are now able to create any experience that they want through virtual reality. The characters view this society as utopian. However, when the main character, Pryer, finds a manual on building a Stradivarius violin, others in Pryer’s community are critical of his desire to build something manually as nonsensical and nonconformist. When Pryer attempts to find help building the violin outside of his community, the one person he finds is immediately killed for being an outsider. These could both be direct criticisms of societies that value conformity while presenting as a utopia—human creativity and individuality is stifled, and those that live outside of a specific community’s norms are deemed either silly and not to be taken seriously, or dangerous and to be eliminated.

          A third example of this phenomenon exists in Octavia Butler’s Parable of the Sower. A large corporation called KSF buys a small coastal town called Olivar and turns it into a company town, where all the residents work for the corporation in exchange for a modest living space and relative safety. There is a selective screening process, and applicants must meet specific standards to even get into Olivar, and the residents of Olivar are then paid extremely poorly, so that they are perpetually indebted to KSF and are forced to work longer and harder while never being able to get out of debt. This kind of systemic oppression is rejected by the main character and her father, because they recognize that this would essentially acquiesce to slavery, and they value their personal freedom more than any modicum of safety that Olivar could provide.

          All of these stories have one thing in common—the powers that be attempt to create a utopia by enforcing conformity, and in doing so the people exchange individual freedoms for safety and unity. This is a common enough phenomenon in utopian and dystopian literature. As Cynthia Perkins states in their essay High Technology: Utopic, Dystopic, or Ecotopic Future?, “...even utopias that were created with the best intentions can become oppressive and dehumanizing.”

          Dystopias seem to reign supreme when it comes to visions of the futures, be they high-tech or low-tech, but fear not—the future is not entirely bleak. The aforementioned stories all critique societies that try to create a utopia by enforcing conformity, and so end up becoming dystopias. Ecotopias, on the other hand, attempt to create peace in society by embracing natural diversity and blending nature with compatible technology. An example of one such society is that in the short story “Chocco”. In a kind of Socratic dialogue between the characters Jon and Mikal, we learn about a dystopian past in which society primarily valued profit and ignored diversity, only to die off and leave behind almost nothing of real value to new societies. Jon and Mikal criticize the type of conformity that exists in capitalism–the ideological conformity that asserts that capitalistic ideals and for-profit culture exist as human nature, and the subsequent rejection of those that do not fit the status quo. They also describe how their own society has moved away from this by embracing biodiversity and adapting technology to the environment rather than replacing it.

Jon (more than Mikal) also accepts that they do not have a perfect society, and that it is likely that they never will, rejecting even the idea of a utopia because of its likelihood of twisting into a dystopia. He also sees that they have a free and peaceful society and is cautiously optimistic about the future of his community. This hope for a better future exists in speculative fiction in the form of a new genre called solarpunk, described in Jet Heer’s The New Utopians as “a heartening sign that the dream of a better tomorrow is still possible”. Solarpunk as a genre accepts that there are no perfect societies, and embraces the diversity found both in the natural world and inside people as a means for striving for a better future. People are allowed to be fully free, find strength in diversity, and live in harmony with nature. I believe that this is a hopeful kind of vision for the future that is desperately needed in fiction–if all we have to look forward to is an oppressive dystopia, without freedom and without hope, what reason do we have to keep pushing forward?