(2016 final exam assignment)

Sample Student Final Exam Essays 2016

Essay 3. Special Topics on Tragedy

Special Topic
# 1: Tragedy & Its Updates
LITR 4370 Tragedy 

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Nikki Jones

6 July 2016

Adaptation: What Changes as Literature Evolves?

          Since the beginning of the written word, when men started taking accounts of stories, there have been people who choose to vary each tale. We see this happen often with biblical tales. Miracles that are supposed to be exclusive to one religion shows up in a different religious doctrine, only with slightly varied circumstances. Another example is urban legends and fairy tales that have been passed down for generations that become slightly modified over time, so that instead of the event happening in a faraway place, it now takes place in a town near you, and the teller of the story swears that it happened to their cousin’s friend. This type of editing goes back for hundreds upon hundreds of years. In this course we have plenty of examples that prove this to be true. Arguably the most interesting duo to compare and contrast is Sophocles’ Oedipus the King and William Shakespeare’s Hamlet. It would seem that Shakespeare has payed homage to Sophocles with this work as there are very similar qualities throughout each play, but there are changes that differentiate the plays and keep them two separate works.

          One of the most immediate changes that is apparent is that the predominantly Greek aspects of tragedy did not get translated into Hamlet. There is no questioning that Hamlet is one of Shakespeare’s longer plays. That being said, it is just one play. The entirety of the play is set in those five acts, whereas it is typical for Grecian tragedies to have three separate parts. The story of Oedipus is no exception and to comprehend his family’s entire story Antigone and Oedipus at Colonus should be read in conjunction with Oedipus the King. Another classic element Shakespeare took creative liberties with is the chorus. Danielle Maldonado mentions this change as well in “Tragedy and its Updates”. She states that when it comes to modernized tragedy “The chorus … doesn’t exist in the same capacity”. This is an aspect in which we see Shakespeare paying homage to Sophocles and the classic tragedies. In Oedipus the King, the chorus acts as narrators for the audience, but they also act as Oedipus’s advisor. In this same regard, Hamlet has Horatio. Although Horatio’s character is not used as a narrator, as we have stage directions for that, he is honestly trusted by Hamlet and he is the only one Hamlet goes to with his troubles. Through Horatio, Shakespeare creates a chorus. For Hamlet’s dying request he forbids Horatio to commit suicide and instead tells him to share the story and relay the tragic events that happened to his family.

          In addition to these technical changes, Hamlet has some superficial changes to the plot as well. In making these changes Shakespeare modernizes the play. He strays away from the mythological aspects found in Oedipus and instead incorporates elements of the supernatural. With this major change comes the need for a villain. The driving force of the play is no longer fate, but free will. The gods are no longer to blame as they are in Oedipus the King, now we are aware that the characters in Hamlet make their own conscious choices and create their own consequences based off of them. In this aspect of incorporating human nature, Hamlet becomes more relatable. Along with the need for a villain, Oedipus and Hamlet are at contrast in some aspects as well. Where Oedipus is an older king, Hamlet is a younger prince. Oedipus is also established in his love life. He is happily married, up until a certain point, and has four children whereas Hamlet is a playboy or a tease. He takes a romantic interest in Ophelia and expresses it in seductive ways, yet he toys with her emotions and ultimately causes her tragic demise.

These characteristics of Hamlet, in a way, make him more realistic and relatable to the audience reading the play, instead of Oedipus’s character. This aspect creates a sense of mimesis. In today’s society, Hamlet is usually introduced in high school, around the eleventh grade, or so. Most sixteen and seventeen-year-old students cannot relate to a hot-headed, middle-aged man whose fate is the fault for all of his pain and suffering, like Oedipus. On the other hand, adolescents can relate more to a young vigilante-type character, trying to get revenge and retribution on the behalf of his murdered father. In Tragic Changes?, Haylie Unger describes this change as an evolution from “heroic character(s)” to “a more pure, tragic hero”, and while Oedipus is not really thought of as a traditionally “heroic” character, his character still applies to Unger’s statement because his fate is not ultimately of his own doing, but of the god’s.

Unger goes on to add in her midterm that as tragedy “ages” the play’s end up “mixing and blending … conventions from multiple genres”. This, again, rings true to Hamlet. Romantic elements are strongly perceived through Hamlet’s character. Hamlet is given an objective by his father’s ghost, and in turn he must overcome obstacles, like creating a play and murdering his uncle, in order to fulfill his duty as a son and as the heir to the throne. Oedipus, in contrast, does not have these romantic qualities in Oedipus the King. Arguably, it is his backstory and Oedipus at Colonus that has the romantic qualities of Oedipus setting out on a quest or journeying to faraway places. In his backstory, he tells of his journey from Corinth to the oracle and ultimately to Thebes where he bests the Sphynx and becomes the king and it is only at the very end of the play when we see him setting off on another journey, which is recorded in the sequel.

          Even with all these changes and modernizations we still have some similarities that tie these two plays together. The main characters have some extremely comparable characteristics and practically the same “tragic flaw” (LITR 4370 Terms/Themes). Oedipus and Hamlet both share a strong sense of justice and to avenge their fathers, who have been wronged in the most severe way, unbeknownst to Oedipus obviously. Both characters are extremely impulsive in their behavior and actions without thinking ahead to the consequences. The duo is also irrational and violent in temperament at times, mainly when they feel they are being condescended or betrayed, again leading to impulsive behavior.

The aspect of spectacle is an element that has become more prevalent as the plays become more modernized. According to the term page on the course website the Oxford English Dictionary defines a spectacle as “A specially prepared or arranged display of a more or less public nature, forming an impressive or interesting show or entertainment for those viewing it”. There are many instances of spectacle when it comes to both of the plays, but the events become more observable in Hamlet, with the action happening on stage rather than off the stage, as it is in Oedipus the King, which “offers more visible gratification to the audience”. (Lozoya, Jorge, Tragedy Forms: Classics and the New Classics).  There are two types of spectacle when referring to Hamlet, one example is the public sword fight that takes place in the final act, which incorporates elements of adventure and danger. The other type of spectacle is more of a horrific nature. An example of this would be the scene between Queen Gertrude and Hamlet in her bedroom. This scene is horrifying for obvious reasons, as it reflects the Oedipus Complex, but it is also so horrifying that it is hard to look away, which in turn makes it a spectacle. 

There are both similarities and differences in Oedipus the King and Hamlet to support the argument that the latter of the two could potentially be loosely based off of elements from the first, or at least the same elements of thought that inspired Sophocles to write Oedipus the King. In reflection, Shakespeare’s modernization does change many things between the two plays. Hamlet is a more relatable character for the students and younger generation reading the play in schools, and he becomes a more tragic character, as he is a victim of his circumstances and duty rather than fate. In all though, both of these plays have made a huge impact on the literature of today and have inspired many plays, remakes, recreations, movies, and more that we do not have to compare one for the sake of it being better than the other. They are both strong plays that stand out on their own.