2016 Midterm1 (assignment)

Sample Student Midterm Answers 2016

Part 1. Essay comparing and contrasting
immigrant and minority narratives

LITR 4340 American Immigrant Literature

Model Assignments

Austin Green

10/3/16

Culture Clash

The ideas I had of what this class would be when signing up for it have differed greatly from what, to me, has become the most engaging aspect of it. While I was correct in the types of readings we would be assigned to read and study, I was completely unaware of how common, or how similar the experiences of immigrants coming to the United States were. Right from the start of class, my eyes were opened when we were presented with the five stages of the immigrant narrative. A guideline basically, of how the typical immigrant experiences goes. The reason this was so interesting to me was twofold. One being that the experiences were similar enough a guide could be made, and the other is that it was here when we first see how the experiences of immigrants and minorities differ. I feel bad to admit that this is not a topic I am too familiar with, and even worse admitting that while I do understand the clear distinction of immigrant and minority, if you had asked me how their experiences differed from each other I would not have had an answer to give you. Luckily that has changed. There are clear distinctions between the immigrant experience and the minority experience in the United States.

To help understand the immigrant experience, we can refer back to the 5 stages of the immigrant narrative mentioned previously. The first two stages go hand in hand with each other: leaving the Old World, and journeying to the New World. These two stages represent the basic definition of an immigrant. They are someone who has left their home country in order to live in another, foreign country. This is the beginning to every immigrant narrative. Leaving everything behind in order to start new in a new place. We see this journey mentioned in "Bread Givers" when Max is telling our narrator or speaker about when he first arrived in America: "I still see that first day when I got off the ship with my little bundle on my back. I was almost lost in the blowing snow of a freezing blizzard." He arrived in America with nothing more than a bundle of belongings, and was lost (almost) in this new land.

Upon arrival in the new land, we then run into the next two stages of the immigrant narrative experience. Stage three is "Shock, resistance, exploitation, and discrimination," while Stage four is "assimilation into the dominant American culture" which may include "Loss of ethnic identity" (Objective 2c-Course Homepage). These stages are where we can see the immigrant and minority experiences become similar (Stage 3), but it is also where the two greatly differ from each other (Stage 4). The typical immigrant experience when first arriving is a culture shock. So much they see may greatly differ than what they were used to back in their original homeland. They can feel out of place, and it is not helped when the dominant culture here recognizes that, and can make them feel more out of place, or unwelcome. The best example of shock from our readings so far has been in "The Interesting Narrative of the Life of Olaudah Equiano, . . . the African" by Olaudah Equiano. When our narrator first sees white people: "I asked them if we were not to be eaten by those white men with horrible looks, red faces, and loose hair." He was not sure if they white people whose ship he was on were going to eat him. Also, we can see a similarity in this story between immigrant and minority narratives in the journey from the Old World to the New World (Stages 1 and 2), but under different circumstances of course. We also see the resistance mentioned in stage three in Anchee Min's "The Cooked Seed." When our narrator is looking for a job, "The one Chinese carry-out-only restaurant owner who had a help-wanted sign in his window said to me, "No English, no job."

Stage three for the immigrant runs directly into stage four. In order to get out from this feeling of different, or standing out, the immigrant basically does what they can in order to fit into the dominant culture here. This assimilation is also where we see the biggest difference, or breaking away point in experiences from immigrants and minorities. An immigrant has come here on purpose, and wants to be a part of America. America is typically considered a country that was built from and of immigrants. The minority experience we have discussed in class has been one of being either brought here to America against their will (slaves/slavery, like in the previously mentioned "The Interesting Narrative of the Life of Olaudah Equiano, . . . the African”), or the Native Americans who were here before the Old World made its way over and outnumbered and took over their land from them. Both cases of groups who are now considered part of America fully, but did not intend to be initially.

These minority groups do not necessarily have any interest in assimilating to the dominant culture. Part of assimilation is leaving behind customs, traditions, and culture and accepting the dominant cultures. These minority groups do not want to do this (nor should they feel the need too). We see this in "The Man to Send Rain Clouds." After convincing a local priest to come sprinkle holy water on a grave during a funeral (under the guise of assimilation), we learn the true motives with the closing line: "...he was happy about the sprinkling of the holy water; now the old man could send them big thunderclouds for sure." He used the priest's holy water for his own culture and beliefs. He never truly wanted any type of Christian burial rites. Another example of a minority's experience or frustration with not wanting to be assimilated into dominant culture can be found in Louise Erdrich's "American Horse." After being removed from his home and family by members of the dominant culture, Buddy "...opened his mouth to say thank you to the woman, as his mother had taught him. But instead of thank you coming out he was astonished to hear a great rattling scream, and then another, rip out of him like pieces of his own body and whirl onto the sharp things all around him."

Once assimilated (or even during), we see another type of immigrant appear: the "Model Minority." These are immigrants who do not clash with or threaten the dominant culture. A good example of this model minority can be found in "What Color would you Like, Ma'am?" Right from the start we see assimilation with Thien: "Even though all he could think about were his college plans, he figured this summer he would play basketball and Play Station games for months while he had the chance." We see Thien described here as pretty much any other teenager, fully matching the dominant culture in terms of being one. As the story progresses, we see more glimpses of why Asian Americans are considered a model minority. When Thien's family is being described we learn "Every member of the family worked at the nail salon, whether they were licensed nail technicians or not. Without knowing and understanding English, they would find it difficult to work even down the street at a restaurant or fast food chain. Without college education or even completing high school, they couldn’t be considered for corporate or professional positions." We see the entire family falling "in line" and working one of the jobs our dominant culture has seemed to approve of Asian families running. I believe most Americans would not even give it a second thought if very little to no English was spoken at a nail salon they visited. It's one of the rare occurrences (or "privileges"?) of the dominant culture showing support of the model minority. We then see Thien's future plans, and again we can better understand the model minority: "Afterwards, he would go to medical school and become a doctor." He plans on becoming a doctor, one of the most respected professions in the country.

The last stage of the immigrant narrative is reconnecting back to parts of these cultures or traditions that were lost during assimilation. Only once you are fully ingrained in the dominant culture can you start to reel back in some of the customs you or your family may have lost during immigration.

 Ultimately I have found both the immigrant and minority narratives we have read in class to be far more impactful than I thought I would when the class began. Knowing (and seeing, and recognizing, and understanding) the differences between immigrant experiences and minority experiences make the readings much more rewarding. The highs are higher and the lows are lower when you have the added context and information on these narratives.