(2018 midterm assignment)

Sample Student Midterm Answers 2018

#2b: Short Essay (Term) (Index)

LITR 4328
American Renaissance
 

 

Jasmine Choate

Correspondence: A Heart as Dark as A Room with No Windows 

          It may be strange that I am a horror movie fanatic and lover of all things dark, grotesque, and creepy, yet my favorite term in this course is not Gothic. After reading the course texts so far, I’ve discovered a fascination with the use of Correspondence. Interestingly enough, I had never heard this word prior to this course, in terms of Romantic literature. My understanding and definition of the word is that it means a connection between one’s inner emotions and spirit with their outer surroundings and environment.

          I think understanding this term and being able to identify it within literature can elevate any reader’s experience by allowing them a deeper perspective into the spirit of the written character. By connecting the spirit to something visual, like the character’s surroundings, a writer can create a more relatable tone, thus drawing readers in closer to the work. Through external reflection and correspondence, vivid pictures and settings help writers describe emotions that at times seem indescribable. Such as grief, heartache, hopefulness, hopelessness, optimism, etc. On the course website, the term is described as; “relation between inner and outer world, soul and nature, self and cosmos.” I think this perfectly describes how it is used in this period, especially with nature.

          I think is my personal favorite example of correspondence is from Susan B. Warner’s the Wide, Wide World in chapter 10. When Ellen is adjusting to living with Aunt Fortune, who treats her crudely, when she returns to her room to find that she no longer feels welcomed or comfortable as she initially did. “The sunshine was out of it; and what was more, the sunshine was out of Ellen's heart too.” [10.67] Her room had lost its charm and was now described as dim and dark, which reflected how Ellen was beginning to feel about her living situation, after Aunt Fortune took away all of her white stockings and was planning on doing something to them against Ellen’s wishes. By connecting the space of Ellen’s bleak and dark room to heart, we are given an image of just how bleak and dark Ellen must be feeling. In this example, her dim room and dim heart are one and the same, mirrored images of each other displaying the loneliness Ellen is going through.

The earliest I remember coming across the term Correspondence is within Ralph Waldo Emerson’s selections from Nature. At the end, there was a mention of summer, and the effects that it would have on people. “As when the summer comes from the south; the snow-banks melt, and the face of the earth becomes green before it, so shall the advancing spirit create its ornaments along its path, and carry with it the beauty it visits, and the song which enchants it; it shall draw beautiful faces, warm hearts, wise discourse, and heroic acts, around its way, until evil is no more seen.” [28] I liked this example because of how it was different in that it was not speaking of how summer would affect one individual person, but many. The bright and positive characteristics of summer that Emerson depicts are so powerful that it is able to reach the many minds and souls of multiple people. The beauty and warmth that summer brings will be so correspondent that it will warm people’s hearts, raise their spirits, motivate them to commit heroic acts, and most importantly make evil go away.