(2017 midterm assignment)

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#2b: Short Essay (Favorite Theme)

LITR 4326
Early American Literature
 

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Chelsea Brotherton

To Read or Not to Read: Thoughts on the Pleasure of Literature

          Throughout this course thus far, the idea that I have found the most interesting is the question of what is literature? What exactly is it that we enjoy reading, and why? There are clearly texts that are not enjoyable to read, such as The Federalist Papers, and then there are those that immediately demand attention, such as the captivity narrative of Mary Rowlandson. But why is this? The answer is not simply fiction versus non-fiction, as the Rowlandson text is a non-fiction work that maintains its allure. I believe it is a combination of action, dialogue, and writing style that gives a text its draw. Whereas those texts that we find to be dry and boring not only often lack action and dialogue, but tend to be either so full of language that it becomes difficult for most readers to find the meaning, or the language is so bland that it holds no life.

    In the case of The Federalist, the language is anything but plain, and its flourishes create a work that must be scrutinized to fully comprehend. This is not a text that can be casually read, and therefore makes it difficult to find pleasure in reading it “An over-scrupulous jealousy of danger to the rights of the people, which is more commonly the fault of the head than of the heart, will be represented as mere pretense and artifice, the stale bait for popularity at the expense of the public good;” this is a sentence that takes some time to digest, and its meaning is not plain. Not only is does the elaborate language of this text make it a difficult read, but its subject matter is not altogether appealing for the common reader either. There are certainly texts with ornate language that are still gripping, but their subject matter is usually of great interest. In The Federalist, the coupling of the language and the political subject matter places this text out of the spectrum of enjoyable reading for most people.

    In contrast to The Federalist, Sinners in the Hands of an Angry God is a text that is highly consuming. Edwards manages to use ornate language and still keep this text alive and interesting: “The manifold and continual experience of the world in all ages, shows this is no evidence, that a man is not on the very brink of eternity, and that the next step will not be into another world….Unconverted men walk over the pit of hell on a rotten covering, and there are innumerable places in this covering so weak that they will not bear their weight.” This passage is written beautifully, and the language is laudable. But, unlike in The Federalist, the language is not the only thing at work to make this text enjoyable. The subject matter of Sinners in the Hands of an Angry God is gripping. Edwards has a passion for his speech and it comes through like fire on the page; the language only adds to the captivating subject matter.

    Narrative of the Captivity and Restoration of Mrs. Mary Rowlandson is a very different text from the others discussed thus far. This text is written quite plainly, but is full of dialogue and action. Rowlandson jumps right into the thick of things in the opening, and you’re immediately drawn into this text: “there was who running along was shot and wounded, and fell down; he begged of them his life… but they would not hearken to him but knocked him in head, and stripped him naked, and split open his bowels.” This text is packed with action, and it becomes something difficult to put down.

    These three texts have different combinations of action, dialogue, and writing styles, and you can plainly see how these combinations affect the reception of the work. A work with all ornate writing style, and no dialogue and action is enormously boring and difficult to read for pleasure alone, as with The Federalist. A text with elaborate writing as well as a wealth of action becomes much more interesting, as in Sinners in the Hands of an Angry God. And a text with both action and dialogue is certainly captivating, as in Narrative of the Captivity and Restoration of Mrs. Mary Rowlandson. So it appears that through the combination of action, dialogue, and writing style, it is not enough to have one of these traits to make an entertaining work; in order to make a text pleasurable, it must be written with at least two of these qualities.