(2014 midterm assignment)

Sample Student Midterm Answers 2014

#2a: Short Essay (Favorite Passage)

LITR 4231
Early American Literature
 

 

Elizabeth Sorensen

Ann Bradstreet

            My favorite passage from the course so far is Anne Bradstreet’s poem, “In Reference to her Children.” Reading and discussing this poem with the class made an impression on me because I felt a strong connection to the text and also because I appreciate the use of metaphor throughout Bradstreet’s writing.

            Bradstreet begins her poem by telling her readers how many children she has then she writes, “I nurst them up with pain and care, No cost nor labour did I spare.” Her word choice tells a reader the depth of her dedication to raising her eight children which is something almost every mother can relate to. I felt an instant connection to the poem after these lines because I am a mother and these words perfectly describe the pure dedication I feel towards my son. The eighth and ninth stanzas were another piece of the poem I felt a strong connection to. She writes, “If birds could weep, then would my tears let others know what are my fears…” Every day since I found out I was going to be a mother, I have felt a fear unlike any other fear. It is a fear of any harm coming to your child that only a parent would understand. The writing in these stanzas describes this kind fear and longing in such beautiful words.   

            The use of metaphor throughout the poem took Bradstreet’s writing to a completely new level. “I had eight birds hatcht in one nest,” this opening line tells her readers that the birds she talks about in the poem are her children. This is very important because even though she is talking about her own children, a reader can easily place their own children into the poem and easily relate to it like I did. She goes further and discusses her children “taking flight” and “leaving the nest”. These metaphors are important because they tell readers that her children are grown and moving on with their own lives. I think the metaphor she uses throughout the poem paints such a beautiful picture for any reader who enjoys this type of figurative language.  

            In my opinion, this poem is timeless. Bradstreet’s word choice and use of metaphor makes her poem relatable to anyone, especially mothers. I could even argue that being someone’s daughter and reading this poem helped me relate because I know my mom feels the same way about me that Bradstreet feels about her children. For me, literature is easiest analyzed and discussed when there is a connection, and this poem worked well because I felt a connection and I also enjoy metaphors.