Alana Nesteruk's questions for Kimberly Davis

"Two Faces"

1. I think the poem is about your children, am I correct?

2. I like the contrast, "night and day", "good and bad", etc. However, maybe you could describe the differences in more unique ways. It's kind of Cliche.

3. "An Angel to bless my life; A miracle to make it worth living."

I think you are talking about both children being angels and miracles. Maybe make that clearer and not so divided. For example: Two angels to bless my life; both miracles make it worth living.

"The Secret"

1. Who is it about? It sounds like it is about someone extremely close to you. Maybe a husband?

2. Was it just a dream?

3. "It's a promise between him and me."

There is a promise between the Lord and This person, right? So, was did that person have an agreement with God? For example, was this person very ill and praying to be taken away?