LITR 3731: Creative Writing
Sample Student Email Draft Exchanges

[Initial email from Robin Stone to 8 other students]

Hi everyone,

 
Here is the first fiction piece for my email draft exchange. I know it needs a lot of work, but could you especially let me know if the story flows and if you pick up the ending well.
 
Please remember to hit reply all to send your comments.
 
Thanks!
Robin