Student Midterm
submissions 2013

(2013 midterm assignment)

LITR 5831 World Literature


Colonial-Postcolonial

 

Marichia Wyatt

Like Minds Produce Different Insights

We have spent an ample amount of time on dialogue and intertextuality during the first half of the semester because you cannot read Robinson Crusoe and Lucy side by side without discussing how they relate to one another at length.  It is apparent that other classes have found this subject just as interesting as ours has in the number of students who chose to write about it in their midterm essays (myself included).  The three essays I chose to review all look at the dialogue within the two novels, and how they pertain to the class as colonial and post-colonial literature.  

Allan Reid’s essay engaged me with his ability to put so much of himself into his essay “Dialogue and How it is Used by Defoe and Kincaid.”  He clearly enjoyed the way this particular class merges history and literature, and took the opportunity to combine the two in his essay.  I especially enjoyed his incorporation of the term “pseudospeciation” followed by the explanation that “the definition denotes two things: us and the others; and we are always superior to the others.”  Not only was he able to teach me a new term, he was able to show me why it was relevant to Crusoe’s relationship to Friday:  “Never is there one thought of equality in the dialogue between the two.”  Although the majority of the essay is spent discussing the differences of two colonized characters, Reid is also able to provide his reader with similarities between “the submissive savage Friday and the rebel teen Lucy, and that is their reaction to religion.”  However, he is most compelling in his analysis over the differences in their reactions to the colonizers Crusoe and Mariah.  Although I did not agree with everything in this essay, it is impossible to disagree with his conclusion that “Friday, Lucy, Mariah, and Crusoe give us important insight into the thought of colonial and post-colonial people.”

I could not help but to be curious of Tim Assel’s midterm because he chose to write three separate short essays.  I found this approach to be straightforward and to the point; however I felt that since the three essays touched on the same materials it may have been better if he had combined them.  Regardless, Assel took a very interesting approach in the first essay “Colonial and Post-Colonial Dialogue:  Defoe and Kincaid.”  Assel brilliantly plays with the intertextuality of “A Small Place” and Robinson Crusoe by asking his reader “what if” questions in order to show how the narrative could have easily changed.  By using this approach, he is able to see past the limitations of the novel and wonder how race may “affect the dynamics of society and politics on Crusoe’s island for future generations.”  I found this to be the most intriguing one of his essays as he invited his reader to see the stories differently. 

Assel’s second essay, “The Role of the Novel in Individualism and Modernity” does a good job of expressing the importance of the novel as a “necessary element of modernity.”  While this essay is nowhere near as engaging as his first, Assel was able to incorporate the material clearly if not as thoroughly as one might hope.  I felt that this essay may have benefited by being combined with his others. 

In his last essay “Anglo-American Perspectives on Post-Colonial Issues” Assel addresses the historical aspects involved with Post-Colonial issues.  Much like Reid’s essay, the historical perspectives lead the reader to a deeper understanding of the texts:  “the difficulty Anglo-American society has with understanding post-colonial issues is caused by a tendency towards segregation that can be traced back to the early days of colonization.”  Again, Assel does not limit himself within the pages of Crusoe, and pursues “the potential for racial conflict in future generations.”  Even though this essay is well written, I believe he could have combined the three for a deeper analysis into the issues he addresses.  Assel has a lot of good material here, and I found myself wanting to know what he would have done in a longer essay.

I picked Melissa Hollman’s essay “American Ignorance to Colonialism” based on the title alone.  How could I not?  I was glad I did because her first paragraph was the best introduction I read.  It is absolutely captivating, and absolutely true.  I enjoyed this essay from the beginning to the end.  Her explanation of the class is so simply put, yet it is precisely correct:  “The study of colonial and post-colonial literature helps to tell the stories of people forever changed by the force of another.”  I found myself agreeing with her wholeheartedly over and over, especially her ideas of “the narrative...allows the reader the opportunity to empathize with his loneliness and find happiness in his successes.” The way she related the texts to each other was extremely well done, and was pleasantly surprised by how often we agreed in our essays.  Although I cannot say that we are of the same mind when it comes to the relationship between Mariah and Lucy, I thought the example she used proved the validity of her perspective. 

I believe that dialogue is one of the most important aspects of this class, and I chose these three students because they believe it as well.  I thoroughly enjoyed reading the different perspectives provided by all of their essays, and I feel as if I was able to learn something from each of them. 

  

The Power of The Novel

            Narratives and dialogue are a way of life; they exist in everything from the billboards on the sides of highways, to the legends passed down from one generation to the next; they are even present in that dirty joke you heard last week.  Of course they are also on television, the big screen, and every book and magazine Barnes and Noble could offer.  No matter where you live or who you are, stories surround and shape you as they are an inherently human characteristic.  The novel is the defining genre of modernity because of its ability to use narrative and dialogue to reveal and/or create the circumstances of the world at a particular point and time.  This is especially apparent in colonial and post-colonial literature.  By imitating the actual world, the novel perpetuates these stories through different characters with narrative and dialogue in order to reveal the societal issues through metaphor. 

As the first English novel, Robinson Crusoe has been taught great and wide.  The first time I read Robinson Crusoe I thought it was a romantic book about one man’s journey to find himself through his adventures at sea and being cast away on a deserted island.  I never once thought about it as a colonial fiction within the genre of realism.  This class has allowed me to see Crusoe’s island from a completely different perspective.  Of course the notions of romanticism are still present in the text (the sublime, grotesque, etc), but Crusoe is in fact a colonizer.  Defoe encapsulates modernity in his novel as Crusoe is breaking away from the traditional way of life and venturing out in a very capitalistic way.  He set out to make his fortune, being unhappy in his original circumstance, and indeed conquered the wild terrain by imparting his cultural attributes to the soil as well as the indigenous Friday.  Although it is very short on actual dialogue, the reader is given Crusoe’s firsthand account of colonizing the island.  However, with the lack of dialogue we are left wondering whether or not to trust the narrator as far as Friday is concerned.   

Through the narrative, the reader is given an account of Crusoe’s colony.  Since he has nothing but time, Crusoe cultivates his “kingdom” to resemble the comforts of home as much as possible.  Crusoe even makes Friday as English as he can through language, dress, and eventually religion:   I was greatly delighted with him, and made it my business to teach him everything that was proper to make him useful, handy, and helpful; but especially to make him speak, and understand me when I spoke” (Defoe, 14.25).  This colonialist approach of making the other resemble the self is mirrored in Jamaica Kincaid’s A Small Place when she says, “they should never have left their home, their precious England, a place they loved so much, a place they could never forget.  And so everywhere they went they turned it into England; and everyone they met they turned English.”  By reading these two texts together, the reader is able to use intertextuality to better understand Crusoe’s need to familiarize the other to the self.   Kincaid continues to say that “no place could ever really be England, and nobody who did not look exactly like them would ever be English.”  This is reflected in Crusoe’s own description of Friday:

[H]e had all the sweetness and softness of a European in his countenance… His hair was long and black, not curled like wool… The color of his skin was not quite black, but very tawny; and yet not an ugly, yellow, nauseous tawny, as the Brazilians and Virginians, and other natives of America are, but of a bright kind of a dun [dull brown] olive-color, that had in it something very agreeable... His face was round and plump; his nose small, not flat, like the negroes; a very good mouth, thin lips, and his fine teeth well set, and as white as ivory” (Defoe, 14.16).

Friday is presented to the reader as better than some, but not European enough to be equal to Crusoe. 

            Because there is so little dialogue in the novel, Friday’s actual feelings are rarely given in his own voice.  As Crusoe is the first person narrator, he tells the reader how he perceives Friday to feel paternalistic towards him: “for never man had a more faithful, loving, sincere servant than Friday was to me: without passions, sullenness, or designs, perfectly obliged and engaged; his very affections were tied to me, like those of a child to a father” (Defoe, 14.22).  There are a few points in the story where Friday is given a voice; however, the first words Friday speaks in the novel are only to set up how Crusoe plans to make his escape. Perhaps the most interesting scene of dialogue between Crusoe and Friday is during Friday’s religious education.  Because Friday was viewed as a savage, Crusoe took it upon himself “to lay a foundation of religious knowledge in his mind” (Defoe, 15.11).  Imparting religion upon the “savage” is a widely upheld tradition in colonization.  It calls to mind a poem by Phillis Wheatley entitled “On Being Brought from Africa to America:” 

‘Twas mercy brought me from my Pagan land,

Taught my benighted soul to understand

That there’s a God, that there’s a Saviour too:

Once I redemption neither sought nor knew.

Some view our sable race with scornful eye,

“Their colour is a diabolic die.”

Remember, Christians, Negros, black as Cain,

May be refin’d, and join th’ angelic train.

            As a common theme in colonial and post-colonial literature, religion is used to make the uncivilized, civil.  The colonized must conform in order to be “saved” from their hedonistic ways; they must denounce their false idols and worship the one true God. The other must be turned into the self.  Kincaid argues that in doing this, the English “made orphans:  [with] no motherland, no fatherland, no gods, no mounds of earth for holy ground…For isn’t it odd that the only language I have in which to speak of this crime is the language of the criminal” (Kincaid, 94).  This sentiment is again echoed in Kincaid’s Lucy. 

            Although worlds apart in time and place, it is amazing how well Robinson Crusoe and Lucy correspond when read together.  By drawing from her own transmigrational history, Kincaid presents a completely different aspect of colonization in Lucy.  Whereas Crusoe’s perspective was that of the colonizer, Lucy has left her colonized island and come to America.  It is incredibly interesting to see how well Friday’s and Lucy’s dialogue about Christianity coalesce.  Both characters ask such simple questions, and neither ever receives an actual answer.  Lucy’s mother shakes her head, and at first Crusoe pretends he did not even hear Friday, yet both are expected to overlook their questions and blindly believe in God.  According to Crusoe, Friday is able to let this slide and is “now a good Christian” (Defoe, 15.25).  Lucy cannot do this, and equates God’s “dominion” over the world to that of the people of her homeland being “minions” as they were “a dominion of someplace else”  (Kincaid, 37).           

            Lucy, as a very angry teenager, sees the world for what it is; she sees “the disappointment of reality” (Kincaid, 4).  She felt the need to move away from the tradition of home, and much like the modernity in Crusoe, searches for a new life elsewhere.  Lucy believed “that with my one swift act—leaving home and coming to this new place—I could leave behind me, as if it were an old garment never to be worn again, my sad thoughts, my sad feelings, and my discontent with life in general as it presented itself to me” (Kincaid, 7).  However, as the self-other relationship presents itself throughout the novel the reader sees that Lucy can only process her feelings of other people by relating them to her past.  This is an echo of turning the other into the self, yet it is less physical than in Crusoe, and is more apparent in Lucy’s inner dialogue.  Within her inner dialogue, Lucy is in a constant battle of trying to erase her past, yet incapable of thinking about anything else.

            Lucy is unable to react to situations without reliving a story from her homeland, yet her inner dialogue is constantly varied than her outward dialogue.  Coming from a place dripping with tradition, mostly passed down from the colonizers, Lucy wonders if she can put enough “miles” and “events” between her and her home, “would [she] not be free to take everything just as it came and not see hundreds of years in every gesture, every word spoken, every face?” (Kincaid, 31).  The answer is simple, she cannot.  Every person Lucy encounters is mirrored in one way or another to someone from Lucy’s home. Kincaid brilliantly blurs the lines of the self-other relationship throughout the novel.  This is most prevalent with her relationship to Mariah, as she sees her as a more modern version of her mother:  The times that I loved Mariah it was because she reminded me of my mother. The times that I did not love Mariah it was because she reminded me of my mother” (Kincaid, 58).  It is in her modern ways that Mariah is very different from Lucy’s mother; she does not hold her mother’s traditional views of woman’s place in the world and encourages her to read books of great women.  Mariah gets a divorce, where Lucy’s mother upholds tradition and stays married to a man who allows his mistresses to try to kill her and her children.  Mariah also allows Lucy to be friends with whomever she pleases, unlike her mother.  Yet Mariah was not her mother, Lucy is in fact their “visitor” who was “just passing through, just saying one long Hallo!, and soon would be saying a quick Goodbye” (Kincaid, 13).  Mariah was Lucy’s other, no matter how many times she associated her with her mother, they were different; Mariah was her employer.  However, through her relationship with Mariah Lucy is able to start understanding herself.  By turning Mariah into her mother, the other into the self, Lucy is able to gain the mother daughter relationship she did not know she always longed for; adding a touch of sentiment into the novel full of realism.   

            The novel is the defining genre of modernity because it can make the world anything it wants to through its power to reveal or create.  By mirroring the actual world, the novel can allow the reader to see the world through a different lens; the world can be as magical, horrifying, depressing, or joyful as the author makes it through narrative and dialogue.  Novels have the ability to transport people to different times and places, which is why they are so important for colonial and post-colonial literature.  Through Robinson Crusoe, A Small Place, and Lucy we have seen different perspectives of the world, with differing opinions on why the colonizers do what they do, and differing views on how the colonized react.  You cannot get that through a history lesson, you can only feel the journey through a novel.    

 

Research Proposal

After reading several research proposals I have chosen to do the research posts.  I was leaning towards this option but was undecided until I came upon Sarah DeLaRosa’s proposal that very accurately stated: “doing two smaller papers instead of a larger research project would work better for my life right now—at home with my baby it is easier for me to work in short spurts!”  I could not agree with her more.  I believe this choice will definitely make the assignment less daunting as I will be able break it up into two parts.

For my first post, I would like to start with a subject close to my heart by examining the effect The Trail of Tears had on the following generations of American Indians.  I would like to start with the text The Cherokee Removal:  A Brief History with Documents, and then possibly find other avenues to pursue from there. 

For my second post I would like to examine the lingering effects of slavery in the United States.  I have not completely decided on which approach to take with this subject, but I am leaning towards mirroring the two posts to cover the same material within the different cultures.