LITR 5731:
Seminar in American Minority Literature
University of Houston-Clear Lake, fall 2001
Poetry Presentation Index
"Those
Winter Sundays" by Robert Hayden
Discussion Leader: Jill Reioux
Discussion Recorder: Philonis Stevenson
I started the class
off with a brainstorm activity to get them into the mood of winter Sundays.
Overall, the class was on track with their suggestions, but a few times they
suggested words that wouldn't relate to the poem such as "football."
There are a lot of connotations when we think of the word "winter."
Some examples are: cold, dreary, snow, fires, cozy house and bed, family
gathered inside, dry and cracked skin, and chapped lips. Some examples of
connotations to "Sunday" are: sleeping late, no work or school, a day
of rest, go to church, and family gatherings. It is beneficial to think
about these ideas as you read the poem.
The following is an
example of how the class's discussion proceeded:
Jill- The poem begins like a "my Daddy's
so nice" poem, but then the tone shifts in line 5 when it says "No one
ever thanked him."
Student- Notice in the third stanza,
line three where the boy has only one pair of good shoes. It is in
relation to Objective 2a "class remains identifiable through signs or
markers of power and prestige or their absence."
Student- There is an absence of
emotional love by the father but there is provisional love. However, the
child needs emotional love, but he doesn't seem to get it.
Student- The father never seems to get
any thanks, either from his job or his son. But in the third stanza, last
two lines we see the son as an adult reflecting on his ignorance.
Student- There is chronic anger
symbolized in the coldness of the house The father has to dress quickly,
but the son rises slowly.
Student- The father has driven the cold
away by the time the son gets out of bed. He's done everything for the
son, but he doesn't appreciate it.
Jill- This demonstrates the generational
differences between the father and son.
Sunday is a day of
sleeping late, but the father did not. He had to get up early as if it
were any other day of the week. The blueblack cold is interesting in many
ways. One way is that it could be a mark of the black ethnicity of the
characters. Another is the alliteration it provides. But also it
brings imagery-- blue for cold and black for the darkness before dawn. In
line six, the focus is changed from the father to the son. I like in this
line how you can hear the cold "splintering, breaking." It's a
good use of onomatopoeia and change up of rhythm. Line seven has
alliteration: "when the rooms were warm." It's also interesting
how the son doesn't have to endure the cold like his father did, and that the
father seems to be taking the place of the mother figure. Is there no
mother in this household? Another interesting question is what are the
"chronic angers" mentioned in line nine? One student suggested
it was the cold places in the house where the residents knew not to walk, but
other students seemed to believe they were the emotions and relationship of the
father and son.