LITR 5439 Literary & Historical Utopias


Final Exam Submission 2013 (assignment)
Essay 1 on Oryx & Crake

Kristine Vermillion

July 5, 2013

Atwood: The Genre-Splicing Genius

"Only that which is itself developing can comprehend development as a process."

M. M. Bakhtin

            Raccoons in and of themselves are interesting animals. A lot can be said about them. They are nocturnal. They eat garbage. They are cute but rascally. For some reason, they think that the pier at my lake is a latrine. I disagree. They don't care. It's gross. C'est la vie. Skunks are interesting too. These are the relevant facts concerning skunks: they are black and white and stink something fierce. The existence of these two wild little animals merits observation, study and questions. One of the main questions that comes to my mind is: Why? Things get a little more interesting, however, when a science genius, just for the fun of it, decides to see if he can combine the two and make a "rakunk." This new creature is interesting. Others then have fun for awhile making new combinations of animals for varying reasons: "pigoons," "wolvogs" and "snats" to name a few. However, splicing gets even more intricate when the ultimate mad genius, the splice king, uses his knowledge and doesn't just combine two animals together but combines several parts of a large variety of breeds to make a new race of humans. The creation of "Crakers" is pure splicing brilliance.

            This picture of animals and the art of splicing can be used as an analogy to describe what has happened within the realm of utopian fiction since its official inception almost five hundred years ago. The original Utopia by Thomas More is a pure breed utopian genre—a raccoon if you will. It is not a novel. It is not even a short story. It is the original utopian work and is worthy of reading and study for this reason alone. An understanding of the original helps us to appreciate what happened next. Gillman's Herland and Callenbach's Ecotopia are products of splice experiments, i.e. "rakunks," and are great specimens in the study of the development of the genre. Each manifests elements of maturation as literary techniques have developed over time. Gilman attempted to write a short story utopian piece, and Callenbach combined the novel and utopian fiction. In the progression we see great development in character and plot lines. Oryx and Crake exhibits an advanced stage of development. It is a bona fide "Craker," and Atwood is the genre splicing queen.
            Atwood is an extremely skilled writer. To borrow from a chess analogy, she knows all the various pieces on the board and can play them all competently with great foresight and panache. In terms of genre, Oryx and Crake is a dynamic novel that contains a fabulous hybrid of some of the strongest elements and tools in the literary toolbox. It is utopic and distopic at the same time as well as a mix of speculative fiction and a literature of ideas. It contains scathing satire and good old fashioned humor. One of my favorite lines in the book comes after the jaw-dropping ends of Oryx and Crake. Jimmy is limping and needs a cane to help him walk. When he finds a suitable stick he thinks, "Good thing about sticks, they grow on trees."  The insertion of humor at this extremely intense moment in the book is a nice little gift to the reader. Little moments like this are given all throughout the book, and they make a big impact.

            The intertextuality of the work is surprising. We noted in class the allusions to Robinson Crusoe, Huckleberry Finn, and Frankenstein. I am certain there are many others. Atwood's work is talking with and to other pieces of literature; a quality Bakhtin describes as the special language of the novel. "The language of the novel is a system of languages that mutually and ideologically interanimate each other" (Bakhtin 47). Atwood takes these literary images and phrases and integrates them into her own work, tweaking her specimen with the unique qualities of others.

             The multi-layered dialectical component within the work is also worth mentioning. Jimmy is a walking contradiction, and since we are told the story through his point of view, we get to see all these parts of Jimmy interacting with the other parts. He literally goes back and forth with himself in a quasi stream of consciousness way that shows a complex synthesis of character. This correlates with Bakhtin's observation of the novel's strength in characterization. "One of the basic internal themes of the novel is precisely the theme of the hero's inadequacy to his fate or his situation. The individual is either greater than his fate, or less than his condition as a man.... There always remains an unrealized surplus of potential and unrealized demands.... There always remains an unrealized surplus of humanness" (37). Jimmy's complex and utterly flawed character is a necessary component of the novel.

            The elongated conversation between Jimmy and Crake is also an important element for several reasons. It establishes the passage of time and the development of characters. "Time, as it were, thickens, takes on flesh, becomes artistically visible; likewise, space becomes charged and responsive to the movements of time, plot and history" (Bakhtin 84). The dialectic conversation that takes place between Jimmy and Crake at different points along their adolescent years and young adulthood establishes the "chronotope of the road" that aids the progression of plot. The interchange between Crake and Jimmy also serves as an integral feature of the utopian pulse of novel as well.

            The conventions of utopian literature are relatively simple, and Atwood nails down every single one of them with creative accuracy. Jimmy is the traveler. Although he is a compound kid, because he is a word person, he is always on the outside circles. He really does not belong there. He is also not a pleebland man. Any which way he goes he is a "traveler". The pleeblands and the compounds can be labeled either as utopias or dystopias but neither are sold as such, it just depends on how you look at it. In either land, Crake seems to be the guide. Throughout the story, Crake is the guide and the conversations and experiences the two have are the dialectical and Socratic interchanges that are fundamental to the utopian genre. Jimmy challenges Crake, but Crake rarely gives in and there is no synthesis of ideas—but it does give the reader a tour of the envisioned utopian land.

            Crake is also the wanna-be creator of a utopia. He, like More's Hythloday, wants to solve the problems of mankind. The first book of Utopia lays out the case against England. The second book offers the utopian solutions. A clear cut distinction exists between the two parts. Oryx and Crake also offers these two elements, but they are scattered throughout via the storyline. While More's storyline lacks plot and dynamic characters, Atwood fully develops the two and the Socratic conversation element coined in More's work is integral to both plot and character development in Atwood's. While More's attempt is rife with truncated character development, a choppy, almost non-existent plot, and excess verbosity, in comparison Atwood waxes eloquent in every area. Jimmy's humanity and Crake's god-complex mixed together in a tale of friendship amidst the mysterious parental question and the resulting angst makes for quite the novelistic triumph.   

            Oryx and Crake contains all the elements of the utopian genre: the judgment against society as it is and a desire for betterment, the millennial event, the traveler, the guide, the garden and the wilderness, the love interest, and we even get to walk in Crake's proposed utopian community with Jimmy. The Crakers are multi-colored and beautiful. They live communally. They are vegetarian and have a sustainable food source. They don't need clothes. They don't have marriage of family units. Property and ownership are not an issue. They've no need for hospitals for they take care of each other with their purring mechanism. They grow up fast and die early therefore taking care of the problematic years of childhood, old age, and population problems. The sex problem has been hardwired out and now they mate only at specific times for the purpose of procreation only. They're essentially non-violent, generous and kind. All of the issues that utopian fiction takes on are dealt with in Crake's utopian creation, yet the dystopian pattern is also at the forefront.         

            Jimmy alone gets to experience what it is like to live in the created utopian community, and he offers three observations of them that lead the reader to see that dystopia is lurking in the bushes. First Jimmy comments that they are "placid, like animated statues. They leave him chilled" (Atwood 100). Then he describes how they kill the fish for him, as a group "That way the unpleasantness is shared among them and no single person is guilty of shedding the fish's blood" (Atwood 101). This would be great and all but later when Jimmy's mother is killed by a firing squad, the same rational is given and it is unnerving to imagine how this could play out with the Crakers in the future. The other statement that is telling is when Jimmy describes the Craker's curiosity towards him. "... the Crakers can't help peering. The spectacle of depravity is of interest even to them, it seems, purified by chlorophyl though they are" (Atwood 101). This is exactly what Jimmy and Crake were doing all those afternoons after school, and as Crake says: "Those were definitive times" (Atwood 300).  They were captivated by the "spectacle of depravity" and for Crake not to have hard-wired that predisposition out just screams future ill-will.  

            The benefit of including Oryx and Crake as the last reading on the syllabus is that it is an excellent example of the morphology of the utopian genre, and it is a good example of current trends in literature, such as the stylistic short chapters with subdivisions. It is so different, and yet at the same time it is so similar. It cultivates and propagates all the elements in new and surprising ways. It is truly an example of pushing boundaries and creating something new. I have argued elsewhere that this genre yields power in its influence upon society. All our work looking into the historical utopias shows that it is not a literary phenomenon alone, but utopic action also takes place in the here and now in the social engineering constructs. People literally implement ideas into their lives and society. Bellamy's progressive vision has been influential over the past century as the social gospel has spread like wildfire. Bacon's scientific vision is in full swing. Modern scientists are literally trying to solve all the physical ills that mankind suffers from.

            Dystopias are also quite helpful, because they are the place where the potential ramifications of actual movements might lead. Speculative fiction might be a tool to help reign in the experiments. Therefore Jimmy's commentary on the catastrophic situation in the book is particularly insightful. "Already the weeds are thick along the curbs... a clutch of shrubs, unpruned and scraggly, flares with red and purple flowers. Some exotic splice: in a few years they'll be overwhelmed. Or else they'll spread, make inroads, choke out the native plants. Who can tell which? The whole world is now one vast uncontrolled experiment—the way it always was, Crake would have said—and the doctrine of unintended consequences was in full spate" (228). Though talking about the natural vs. the spliced vegetation, this thought is totally applicable to the few remaining survivors and the Crakers. Anything could happen, and I can't help but wonder what's going to happen between the two in part three of the series. Regardless, the reading of the first installment Atwood's trilogy has really enriched the study of utopian literature as well as the development of the novel.

            I mentioned in my first research post that Sir Francis Bacon is Crake's great-great grandfather. Upon further reflection, this might be where the first splice began because more than being an ancestor of Crake, he is also the father of Science fiction. The world of utopian fiction and science fiction were spliced together way back in the early 1600's. There is an eerie connection between Bacon's The New Atlantis and its imaginary innovations in science and Crake's experiments. In Atwood's fiction, mankind has tried and done all that Bacon envisioned, and still the world is not a utopia because of man and his passions and drives. This is the same premise that Gilman was working with in Herland, and it is why she imagined a world without the male gender. How else could the problem be solved? Atwood's utopic vision takes it to the next level by erasing mankind as it is and recreating the human race via science. There seems to be an inherent connection between utopian and science fiction. While actual social experiments and social changes happened as a result of Callenbach's and Bellamy's utopic works, I hope Crake’s utopian experiment is never tried in real life. A general benefit of including this study is that it might lend to ethical and practical conversations about the current trends in science and where they are leading us.

Works Cited

Atwood, Margaret. Orxy and Crake. New York, Anchor Books, 2003.

Bakhtin, M. M. http://coursesite.uhcl.edu/HSH/Whitec/xcritsource/theory/BakhtinDialogic.htm