American Literature: Romanticism
 
Student Midterm Samples 2015

midterm assignment

1. Long Essay

Niki Bippen

March 23, 2014

“Defining American Romanticism: The Problems with Labels”

            For as long as I can remember, I have always been fascinated with literature.  When other children were out running around and playing games, I could be found curled up in a tree (I was an avid climber and outdoors woman) with whatever book I could get my hands onto.  Before I went to bed each night as a child, I would force one of my parents or my brother to read to me until I fell asleep so it was no surprise to anyone when I majored in literature.  While I had a deep appreciation for all genres and subject matter, I was always drawn to American literature, particularly the Transcendentalists and Romantics.  I was fascinated with the idea of forging a path for myself and getting back to nature.  I was also engulfed by the dark, haunting works of Edgar Allan Poe and Hawthorne but I suppose this is due to the fact that my brother is twelve years older than me and refused to read me “Clifford the Big Red Dog”.  Instead, he took immense joy in reading me Stephen King in hopes I would have nightmares.  I should however thank my brother because it was these books that would later lead me to Edgar Allan Poe, Emily Dickinson, and H.P. Lovecraft, all of whom I deeply admire.

            When I was first introduced to the Transcendentalists and Romantics I was in high school and was instantly hooked.  I longed to go back to nature and found myself in the woods.  While I sat devouring everything the teacher said and promising myself to find more of these glorious texts, I realized that an overwhelming amount of students hated what was presented to them.  I also found that many did not understand the idea of going back to nature or why a lot of the dark texts were considered romantic.  “Stupid tree huggers” and “how is this creepy dude describing the death of a loved one a romantic text” were often overheard.  I assumed it was just because we were in high school and the students were much more worried about what their friends were doing later.  However, this attitude lingered even in college when students would groan out loud upon finding out that American Romanticism was a required course.

            American Romanticism stretches itself to encompass a wide variety of themes and it can be difficult to say what exactly is or is not romantic.  We have elements of nature, wrath, gothic, and the sublime all floating around under the label.  This can make it tricky to distinguish what is considered Romantic.  We are presented with texts that encourage self-reliance, simplicity, and a love for nature while also being presented with works that tell us that “the wrath of God burns against [man], their damnation does not slumber; the pit is prepared, the fire is made ready, the furnace is now hot, ready to receive them” (Jonathan Edwards, “Sinners in the Hands of an Angry God”).  The issue then becomes what connects Jonathan Edwards and Ralph Waldo Emerson?  Why are they both considered romantic?  The answer to this is the fact that they both incorporate elements of the sublime into their pieces.  American Romanticism houses sublime, gothic, nature, individualism, and an appreciation for the human soul.  All of these terms/themes are what ultimately defines American Romanticism. 

Another problem that arises is most students tend to think of love stories with Fabio on the cover when they hear the term but this is not always the case as Emily Dickinson, Edgar Allan Poe, and Nathaniel Hawthorne demonstrate with their texts.  Their works are dark, probing, and macabre.  How is that “the pale fingers became of the transparent waxen hue of the grave... I saw that she must die” by Edgar Allan Poe considered in the very least Romantic?   After all, that line is probably not one you would want to use on your lover during Valentine’s Day.  The answer is because works like this effortlessly latch onto the sublime, nature, and obviously the gothic.  All of these terms define American Romanticism.  Just like previously stated, American Romanticism incorporates a wide variety of themes to define itself.  The works presented, regardless of how different they appear on the surface, all incorporate these values.  Ralph Waldo Emerson’s line “[7] of this pure nature every man is at some time sensible. Language cannot paint it with his colors. It is too subtle. It is undefinable, unmeasurable, but we know that it pervades and contains us. We know that all spiritual being is in man” is a perfect example of sublime and deserves to belong in the American Romanticism canon just as much as Edgar Allan Poe.

A nitpicky issue that a lot of students seem to have as well regarding American Romanticism texts is the fact that they tend to find the material dry and boring.  While most everyone tends to adore Edgar Allan Poe, many simply do not like the wordiness of Walt Whitman or the essay styled writings of Emerson.  The texts are not exciting, action-packed, or easily read in some instances.  They require your full attention, demand concentration, and force you to take a look at the bigger picture.  American Romanticism makes a plea with the soul and begs it to open its eyes.  If you are reading for mere pleasure and not a deeper meaning, the works can completely pass you by.  Edwards, Thoreau, Emerson, and Poe all implore the reader to seek individualism and define themselves according to the longings of their soul; not society.  Unless you are prepared to go on this spiritual journey with one of the writers as your guide, you will likely fall short of understanding and fully appreciating the works. 

The problem thus becomes how do you get students to not only appreciate these works but to like them?  While most can at least accept the material for what it is and also understand that it contributed to literature as a whole, many struggle to like the authors presented.  Dickinson is hard to understand, Emerson and Thoreau are dry, tree hugging hippies, Edwards was not hugged enough as a child, Whitman was wordy, and the list goes on and on.  Unfortunately, there is no clear answer.  The way this class is broken up and structured is probably the best shot anyone has at convincing students that this stuff is good.  Presentations, class discussions, background information, breaking up the dry texts with exciting authors like Poe, and a focus on terms/themes is a great approach.  All of this helps students gain a deeper understanding and appreciation of the texts.  When given authors like Thoreau as a presentation, the presenter can showcase the material in a lighter manner, breaking up the essay-like approach he tends to take and make it easier to understand. 

In short, I think the American Romanticism label can be misleading to many students who assume that what they will be presented with is love stories.  I think bringing that general lack of knowledge to the class hinders their experience greatly and the fact that it covers such a broad range of themes can be overwhelming; especially to someone who has a general distaste for literature.  As for those who do enjoy literature, Romanticism can be difficult to appreciate because the texts do tend to bounce around between themes and the texts can be admittedly dry (aside from Edgar Allan Poe who everyone seems to appreciate). These works tug at our heartstrings and awaken our soul to new ideas; we just have to be ready to take the next step and allow the text to speak to us as something more than just words on a page or required course.  After all, it was Thoreau and Emerson who helped me discover Panentheism and I have never looked back.  Without them, I would have continued to feel like an outsider who could never find the right niche in religion.