American Literature: Romanticism
 
Student Midterm Samples 2013

midterm assignment

3. Web Highlights

 

Meryl Bazaman

The Sublime, the Other-Worldly, and Gothic Colors

 

Kyle Rahe’s “Walt Whitman’s Children” Web Review

Rahe does an admirable job relating the common man romanticism of Walt Whitman to the poetic works of beatnik poets Jack Kerouac and Allen Ginsberg. By demonstrating Whitman’s influence on Keroac’s “appreciation of the common and working people of America” and in Ginsberg’s “focus on dialect and the language of the common man,” Rahe successfully conveys examples of how each poet’s themes and employment of poetic language are derived from Whitman’s initial romanticist influence. While portraying Whitman as “a spiritual godfather” that unifies each beatnik poet, Rahe manages to demonstrate how romanticism is an “ever evolving part of the American canon.” Unfortunately, Rahe’s parallels between the Beats and Whitman are a bit too limited in that they primarily focus on the more transcendental aspects of romanticism by focusing on how the Beats integrated theories, language, and people. Rahe does not address how the Beats also incorporated elements that could be construed as the sublime aspects of romanticism.  

             This is best represented in Rahe’s description of Ginsberg’s poem “Howl.” While Rahe focuses exclusively on how the poem represents the common man by incorporating “the ‘other America’ with its portrayal of gays, drug-users, and hipsters,” Rahe fails to take advantage of the sublime experience the poem offers in its references to soaring over and through the city or the terrible awesomeness of its representation of Moloch. By focusing exclusively on the more transcendental aspects of Ginsberg and Keroac’s work, Rahe, then, only offers a partial application of romanticism. Furthermore, Rahe’s descriptions of Kerouac’s poems barely address even the possibility of there being more sublime moments accessible in how Kerouac encounters “the struggle of modern life.” Therefore, while I believe Rahe’s use of Whitman, as a unifying force of romanticism, in the works of Ginsberg and Keroac, is applicable to a transcendental romanticism theme; it manages to ignore the possibility of fully investigating sublime romanticism themes.

Cristen Lauck’s “What’s Real, Anyway?” Web Review

I was drawn to Lauck’s essay because it tackles the question of how to unify romantic texts. Lauck poses this question accordingly: “What is the underlying theme at the root of Romanticism?” Her resolution to this issue is that all works share an “unreal” quality, pitting them against realism. In order to investigate this hypothesis, Lauck applies the construct of the unreal to works that are considered transcendental and gothic forms of romanticism. This is best exemplified in how she demonstrates reality being overlooked in the case of transcendental poet James Wright’s poem “A Blessing,” and in her analysis of how the non-worldly is given preference in Irving’s tale “Sleepy Hollow.”

In order to evaluate the non-worldly in “Sleepy Hollow,” Lauck considers how Crane perceives the woods and trees. She weighs how much preference is placed on the “eerie surroundings and headless horseman tales” versus “rationalizing that the tree and woods are harmless and the horseman is not real.” By inquiring if logical rationalization plays a role and recording its infrequency, Lauck demonstrates that there is indeed an overabundance of fantastic in gothic versions of romance. She concludes that romanticism does the following: “It doesn’t rationalize what’s going on but instead asks for other, non-worldly explanations…” I find this application of the logic variable to be a very telling gauge of romanticism in that it does draw attention to what is given preference – the fantastic. However, how does the tale define the fantastic? If all of Ichabod’s education (even his knowledge on witches) is considered enlightened and grounded in rationality, could it not be considered, by the terms Irving sets forth, that Ichabod is logical – fantastic elements are a real possibility based on what he knows?

Also, Lauck claims how one goes about knowing can be flawed in transcendental works when its emphasis is escaping reality. This is an interesting assessment as it raises the possibility that some forms of perception and account are more valid than others, an argument not raised in class. When reviewing Wright’s poem, “A Blessing,” Lauck claims:

In the end, the narrator describes his feeling of being transformed into flowers because he is overcome with joy. This level of happiness is unrealistic because people see difficulties in the world. No one can say they have not seen harshness in life and therefore they know this kind of happiness cannot exist. 

Here Lauck critiques Wright’s experience of transcendentalism as one unreal and escapistic in that it denies confounding factors of “difficulties in the world.” Ergo, Lauck is asserting that a form, which conflates an aspect of human emotion, such as joy, is impossible because it does not take into the influence of other, harsher emotions associated more with realist texts. According to Lauck then, transcendentalist romanticism becomes unreal because it is something inaccessible and impossible for real individuals to obtain. That is if the spectrum of emotion is not addressed more concretely; it enters the realm of romanticism – a form and way of exaggerated intensity and the unreal.

Danielle Maldonado’s “Gothic Elements in ‘The Yellow Wallpaper’ Web Review

Upon first glance, I was immediately drawn to Maldonado’s choice of the words “Gothic Elements” in her title. Did her choice of the word “elements” mean that she would reveal simplified, crucial features that would allow me to easily identify the gothic? Would she be able to demonstrate how these gothic elements could improve my understanding of “The Yellow Wallpaper?” After a thorough reading, I believe Maldonado was able to accomplish a portion of these goals in her analysis by offering clear, simplified definitions of the features of the gothic. Yet, while she was able to demonstrate gothic elements simplistically based on her definitions of the gothic as “haunting imagery” gothic as “repressed desire” and gothic as a “fractured, dissociative self,” she immediately found that the text did not “necessarily fit the conventional definition of the gothic” when applied to gothic as “light and dark” color.

Instead of focusing on the contrast between “light and dark” colors, Maldonando claims the gothic can also be represented by how the color exudes a “menacing” quality or the “suppressed activity” of the character. That is in order for a color to be gothic; it does not have to be perceived in relation to another color (fair lady versus dark lady) or represented as a binary (colors representing good Wilson versus bad Wilson). According to Maldonando, a color can be gothic based on the singular response of how the individual is viewing it. Gothic colors then are more than bold contrasts between light and dark representing good and evil; a single color such as yellow, without a contrasting backdrop, can be gothic color, when it embodies the individual’s singular distorted perception of a particular color, in a way that represents a wide variety of problematic psychology and destructive behaviors in an individual. Gothic color then does not have to function in relationship to something to demonstrate the haunted or menacing. Rather, gothic color is color that itself becomes the impure, grotesque, and repulsive. Therefore, despite providing “elemental” terminology for the gothic, Maldonando’s explanation of color represents how application can be rather complicating by modifying what is initially defined.