American Literature: Romanticism
 
Student Midterm Samples 2013

midterm assignment

2. Short Essay
2b. Choose a previously-read literary text, American or otherwise, Romantic or otherwise;
apply course terms & themes / objectives; comparisons-contrasts, connects-disconnects, learning outcomes.

Meryl Bazaman

Anthem’s Prometheus as Byronic Hero 

In all that was left of humanity there was only one man who dared to think, seek, and love. He, Equality 7-2521, came close to losing his life because his knowledge was regarded as a treacherous blasphemy…he had rediscovered the lost and holy word  -I. - Ayn Rand, Anthem

How can the gothic Byronic hero construct be applied to modern dystopian literature? Do aspects of the construct perpetuate the same aspects of this gothic function in romanticism or does the construct mutate to incorporate novel phenomena?  Applied to Ayn Rand’s dystopian novelette Anthem, the character Prometheus (born Equality 7-2521) appears to best encompass the Byronic hero. Consistent with the known attributes of the Byronic hero, Prometheus possesses distinguishable physical and mental traits, internal torment and active compulsion for the forbidden, and shares the role of the benevolent outcast shunned despite his all too apparent exceptionality. However, Rand’s Prometheus also modifies current Byronic hero qualities. Whereas, the Byronic hero is typically portrayed as dark and handsome; this Byronic hero is punished for his exceptional height and knowledge. Furthermore, while the Byronic hero can possess any number of combinations exhibiting his compulsions, searching behaviors, and sins, reason and logic drive Prometheus’s psychology and behaviors. In addition, the separateness of Prometheus stems not only from societal perception but how he (Prometheus) perceives his role as an individual in a collectivist society, with the very structures of that collectivist dystopia amplifying that distance. Unlike other variations of the Byronic hero, any intention or good will Prometheus could have is inextricably bound to the destruction of the collectivist society; ergo, Prometheus, in spite of his well-intentioned appeals and ability, could only entertain the notion of standing apart because his acceptance into the society would ultimately mean the destruction of said society.            

Yet, before this destructive aspect of the Byronic hero can be assessed, let us observe how Rand’s Prometheus redefines Byronic hero physicality. As Byronic hero, Prometheus should possess physical features that mark him as extraordinary. However, Prometheus never indicates explicitly if he has the Byronic  “dark, handsome appearance” (Dr. White notes). Instead, he articulates the Byronic hero’s physical extraordinariness by noting how his height is exceptional accordingly: “We are six feet tall, and this is a burden, for there are not many men who are six feet tall“(Rand, 18). Clearly, while Prometheus’s height alone does not mark him as beautiful, it does mark him as distinguishable from his immediate peers.  That is through this simple consequence of a distinct physicality; Prometheus is immediately set apart from his early community. Through his height, Prometheus exemplifies how extraordinary he is by standing above and apart from his peers with a height that has grown beyond (exceeded, my addition) his brothers’ bodies (18).

            This distinguishing growth, however, is not the only Byronic hero marker that allows Prometheus to stand above and apart from his dystopian society. Rather, Prometheus is marked by a “brilliance” (Dr. White Notes), which if read through the norms and moirés of his society, is blatantly “self-destructive” (Dr. White Notes) if the self must only consider what is good for the collective. That is when divulging his intellectual capacities; Prometheus reveals the following:

… learning was too easy. That is a great sin, to be born with a head, which is too quick. It is not good to be different from our brothers, but it is evil to be superior to them. (21)   

That is in the collectivist society of Prometheus’s youth, the simple existence of his individualistic brilliance made him deviant. Unable to control his quickness or ease of learning, Prometheus disrupts the uniformity necessary for the collective to function. If the collective must maintain sameness to function, Prometheus’s variability destroys any possibility for maintaining the requisite sameness; hence, by possessing brilliance and an aptitude for knowledge, Prometheus chips away at the validity and applicability of having a collective self.

            Furthermore, Prometheus also exhibits the Byronic hero traits of being “haunted and tormented by a secret sin” and capitulating to the “allure of the forbidden” (Dr. White’s notes); however, Rand’s text modifies these traits by having them driven by reason and logic. During his existence among the collectivist society, Prometheus demonstrates how logic and reason frame the relationship between his disposition and mens rea as such:

We were born with a curse. It has always driven us to thoughts, which are forbidden. It has always given us wishes, which men may not wish. We know that we are evil, but there is no will in us and no power to resist it. This is our wonder and our secret fear, that we know and do not resist. (18)

Interestingly, while Prometheus’s brilliance, allows him to understand the relationships between his “sinful” disposition, thoughts, and actions, he still capitulates to what is considered by law in his collectivist society “forbidden.”  Therefore, as a Byronic hero in a dystopian novelette, Prometheus demonstrates how reason and logic can function in a similar capacity to secret sin and desires for the forbidden, resulting in the hero to act in a way that contradicts the law of society. Driven by this “cursed” disposition, Prometheus forms intrusive thoughts that propel him towards destructive action “… And questions give us no rest.” We know not why our curse makes us seek we know not what, even and ever” (24).    

            Yet, despite Prometheus’s visible and mental distinctions, his flawed mind, restlessness, and risky behaviors, the character attempts to plea with the society that he is not accepted or rewarded by. Upon his discovery of electricity, Prometheus recalls the following interaction between the scholars of his society and himself:

‘We give you the power of the sky!’ we cried. We give you the key to the earth! Take it, and let us be one of you, the humblest among you. Let us all work together, and harness this power, and make it ease the toil of men. Let us throw away our candles and our torches. Let us flood our cities with light. Let us bring a new light to men!’

But they looked upon us, and suddenly we were afraid. For their eyes were still, and small, and evil.  (70-71).    

Like the Byronic hero, Prometheus “appeals to society by standing apart from society” (Dr. White’s Notes) only to be proven “superior yet wounded or unrewarded” (Dr. White’s Notes).  Despite his offer of a resource that would ultimately benefit the plight of men in his community, Prometheus’s work is openly shunned and disregarded by the scholars with their “still,” “small” eyes, eyes directly in opposition to Prometheus’s own tall stature and dynamic energy. Then, not only is Prometheus physically and characteristically different from these scholars; he functions at a higher reasoning level.  Able to fully reason how his individual progress can actually elevate the society as a whole, Prometheus is directly at odds with the scholars, whose primary concerns are based on maintaining the appearance of an equalitarian society, despite the realities that the status quo is inefficient and restrictive. Although Prometheus’s individuality is considered abhorrent by the collectivist scholars, Prometheus’s individualism actually reveals itself to truly embody the best interests of all individuals within the society.  However, despite his offering of an innovation that can provide “the power of the sky” and “key to the earth”, Prometheus’s noble intentions are discounted because of law, communal order, and communal expectation. Prometheus, unable to surrender to this limiting groupthink first by exhibiting anxiety and later through the action of abandonment, finds that he unequivocally “stands apart from society” despite being its “superior”.    

            In appearance, aptitude, and action, Rand’s character Prometheus exemplifies the Byronic hero. By applying this gothic construct to Rand’s work, the pervasive influence of romanticism character expectations are made apparent based on the consistency between the original Byronic hero definitions and how these original definitions remain applicable in Anthem. Furthermore, innovations to romanticism are evidenced in Anthem through the application of Prometheus’s new psychological markers, modifications to themes of individualism, and reevaluation of distinctive heroic appearance and temperament markers.  While these modifications further broaden what constitutes the Byronic hero, they also broaden the construct. However, despite this broadening, the Byronic hero does an acceptable job unifying old definitions with new. Still, despite the innovations, the Byronic hero remains distinct, rebellious, and inspiring. The Byronic hero continues to offer a romanticist construct beneficial for evaluating the role of characters in a modern, dystopian text.