Sample Student final exam answers 2018

(2018 final exam assignment)

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LITR 4340    
American Immigrant Literature
 
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Tammy Tran

Metaphors for the Dominant Culture

“Whites” is an umbrella term used to categorize diverse groups of people whose ancestors generally emigrated from Europe. Similar to other races, White people are usually packed into one box and have their share of stereotypes. Three of many other fellow students decided to unpack the generalization in order to complicate the commonly used umbrella term. Interestingly, Zack Thomas’ “Invisible Majority” essay, Dorothy Noyes’ “What is “White” and Why?” research report, and Jennifer Robles’ “Iceberg Domination” essay explore this topic with the help of metaphors, including paint (brushes), boxes, and icebergs. These comparisons help illustrate the complexity of the dominant culture.

Thomas’s use of paint in his introductory paragraph immediately caught my attention. He compares immigrants to bright, bold colors (as opposed to the plain style of the dominant culture) because there are marked characteristics that immigrants bring to the U.S. However, when these bright colors are applied, they become dulled out because of the thick, white paint already on the canvas. Thomas explains, “This white paint, while intriguing and seemingly-absent, caused the dark colors to run less deep. In fact, it sets the trajectory of the portrait and where it will end up” (para. 1). The white paint is supposed to be a metaphor for the dominant culture, because they dominate the land when immigrants arrive to the U.S. Thomas suggests that in order to understand the immigrant narrative, one must understand the various groups that make up the dominant culture that influences these narratives. Distinguishing the various strokes of white paint that make up the background of the painting then becomes the metaphorical focus of his essay.

Noyes uses paint strokes in a different way and nearer the end of the paper. Exploring the concept of Whiteness, Noyes introduces song lyrics that complicate the label of “White” by stating, “The broad brush of labeling is evident in this song as the rapper shows us that though dominant, the Caucasian race is also misunderstood and equally discriminated against” (para. 7). She briefly uses the metaphor of a broad brush stroke in order to characterize what people tend to do with labels. Noyes combats the act of putting diverse people into boxes by researching the dominant culture’s various groups. In fact, Noyes declares, “Unlike all the descriptive choices given on the census forms, the box I check on all of those forms simply reads ‘White’” (para. 1). She suggests that the census forms put everyone of European descent in a single box as opposed to the plethora of diverse characteristics available to check off in social categories other than race. Despite the sporadic usage, Noyes chooses these metaphors in order to better illustrate the concern of hastily overgeneralizing diverse groups of people.

Utilizing the dual meaning of “White,” Robles applies the metaphor of an iceberg to complicate the dominant culture’s image. Robles explains, “This image of the dominant culture is definitely the tiny tip of the iceberg we can all clearly see, but does not touch on the magnitude of the dominant culture’s elusive presence hidden beneath the surface” (para. 1). She states that most people know about the tip of the iceberg that they can see, but there are hidden characteristics that are not generally discussed. Robles explores the formation of the iceberg through the dominant culture's history, namely its waves of immigration. Through this investigation, she identifies what the iceberg’s concealed piece consists of, including the enslaved people that create wealth for the dominant culture and the economic distinctions among Whites. People do not realize how slavery in history economically affects the dominant culture; some are left richer and some still poorer. Robles’ iceberg becomes a tool to see the entirety of the dominant culture.

It is truly fascinating how the students’ metaphors encourage them to add more depth to their arguments. Thomas’ use of paint fittingly describes the interaction of immigrations and the dominant culture, setting the scene for his information on the dominant culture. Noyes’ use of brush strokes and boxes help emphasize the nature of generalization and its injustice to the diversity within the dominant culture. Robles’ use of the iceberg maintains the reader’s attention throughout the paper and digs deeper into the unseen parts of the dominant culture. In short, metaphors allow writers to make thoughtful and profound arguments, not to mention encouraging them to shoot for the stars. Metaphorically.