(2013 midterm1 assignment)

Sample Student Midterm Answers 2013

Long Essay [Sample 2]

LITR 4333    
American Immigrant Literature

[Sample 2] 

Cassandra Rea

7th October 2013

Crossing the Invisible Boundary Between Immigrant and Minority Literature

            [R1] As an individual of mixed race coming from immigrants and the dominant culture, it was important to me that I look at the big picture of the New World now known as America, broken down from these cultural narratives to understand not only my past but others as well. Immigrant and Minority narratives are cultural narratives that can help connect the reader to what life was like when they came to the New World. Although they seem similar at first glance such as they both are not written from the dominant culture and they present their struggles within the dominant culture, they do indeed have major differences between them including immigrants chose to come to the New World as opposed to the minorities who were either forced or were already present, immigrants wanted to go after “the American Dream”, and minorities resisted assimilation within the New World. Despite their differences, they share a bond of telling their defining story of trials and tribulations about coming into the New World.

            [R2] The “standard” immigrant story is a story of escaping the Old World, the journey to the New World, the culture shock and exploitation of discrimination from the dominant culture, assimilating to the New World and its dominant culture, as well as the reawakening of ethnic identity. Despite some best efforts, assimilation did not come easy such as Anzia Yezierska in Soap and Water.

She never looked into my eyes. She never perceived that I had a soul. She did not see how I longed for beauty and cleanliness. How I strained and struggled to lift myself from the dead toil and exhaustion that weighed me down. She could see nothing in people like me, except the dirt and the stains on the outside. (Pg. 5)

Anzia’s dean of her college could only see the differences that separated them such as her appearance. But Anzia worked night and day just so she could finish college to become a teacher. No matter how hard Anzia worked between her job and school, all her dean could see was how they did not match. She came to the New World with the hope of a better life and instead she just kept getting stepped on and road blocks being put in her way. Anzia’s narrative is a prime example of believing in this so called dream but no one had ever expressed in the past how hard that it would be. All she wanted to do was assimilating to the dominant culture but could not due to her appearance.

            [R3] Another example of an immigrant narrative is Nicholasa Mohr’s The English Lesson, which is about immigrants getting the opportunity to learn English so they can communicate with the dominant culture. But what is different from this narrative compared to Soap and Water, is that Mohr gives the reader an insight to an immigrant named Diego Torres who had no desire to assimilate to the dominant culture. A previous student stated in his midterm from 2009, that Diego “is one of the characters in the story, which make the story standout and pop.  I do. Mohr describes an immigrant narrative that involves an immigrant that has no interest of being an American citizen.” (Sample Student Essay-The New World: A Land of Opportunities or Nothing But Pure Torture, Struggles & Obstacles). With Mohr having a character like Diego, she presents a peek into a minority because even though Diego was an immigrant, he had no desire what so ever to assimilate.

            [R4] Even though immigrants and minorities both struggled within the New World, the key difference between the two is that minorities did not choose to come to the New World or in the Native Americans case, they were already present within the Americas. The two major minority groups discussed thus far are African Americans and Native Americans. Both races did not have the notion of “the American Dream” but rather the “American Nightmare”. They each had their own version of hell with African Americans being forced to the New World through slavery such as Olaudah Equiano who was kidnapped from his village in Africa and was forced into to slavery. He stated in his narrative that he “constantly grieved…wishing for death rather than anything else.” (CH. 3 Par. 2) Equiano’s life in slavery was so horrid that he longed for death so he could escape the fate of being a slave forever. At the time he saw no way out, any desire to assimilate to the white man but rather give up his life because slavery was ultimately worse than death.

[R5] Unlike African Americans who came to the New World through slavery, Native Americans were already present in the Americas and were constantly uprooted from their homes and relocated because they were in the way of the dominant culture. Not only were they forced out of their homes but they fell into tragic living situations because they basically fell to the bottom of the barrel. A trend that I found amongst the Native American narratives is that they talked about how the white man came to their land. Handsome Lake of the Seneca Tribe wrote his narrative entitled, How the White Man Came to America describes his version of events of the his world becoming the “New World” to the white man. He explains that a preacher from across the ocean stumbled upon a book and sought out God who told him that

Across the ocean that lies toward the sunset is another world and a great country and a people whom you have never seen. Those people are virtuous, they have no unnatural evil habits and they are honest. A great reward is yours if you will help me. Here are five things that men and women enjoy; take them to these people and make them as white men are. (Par. 5)

This quote above explains how the white man knew there were people already inhabiting the land but to go forth and put their beliefs on these people. To make them as the white man is Handsome Lake’s version of explaining the urge of the dominant culture’s attempt to assimilate the Native Americans. Towards the end of the narrative it is revealed to the priest that it was the devil and not God who tricked into looking for the “New World” and now the native people suffered. Chrystos is also a Native American who used poetry to describe how he did not choose to have the dominant culture invade his land and the refusal to assimilate. He makes it clear in his poem that the Native Americans did not “sign no treaty, WHAT are you still doing here, go somewhere else…” (Lines 13-14); he is adamant and forceful by saying with conviction that it was their land first and they choose not to assimilate to their ways so why are they still on their land. It is very clear that the Native Americans are indeed angry with the white man and the dominant culture because they invaded their home and refuses to leave.

            [R6] Another term that can get confused within the cultural narratives is the model minorities. Even though they are given the title of minority, they are in fact an immigrant who fits the pattern of an “ideal immigrant”. The model minority tends to assimilate in the dominant culture values such as hard work, the need for an education, family stability, and socioeconomic progress in STEM fields (science, technology, engineering, and mathematics). What sets the minority model from other immigrants is that they just do not settle, they go above and beyond to be very successful but still hold on to some things such as religion and language. The first model minorities were Jewish immigrants and now Asian Americans have become the model minority. Sui Sin Far wrote her narrative about a man who brings his wife and child from Asia to America. But at the check point the baby is not allowed into the country because of some paper work issue. The parents assimilate to the dominant culture by trying to follow the rules and procedures to get their child back even though it takes months. Another immigrant narrative that shows success and assimilation amongst the Asian race is Gish Jen’s, In the American Society. Her father came to the country and took over a pancake house in which he became very successful. He was successful enough that her father had already had money put back for college for his two daughters. In this part of the narrative, this shows the drive and determination and going beyond the minimum to be prosperous. With having money, their mother wanted to assimilate by joining the local country club. She wanted the need to fit in with the dominant culture and used all her resources to try but failed. This narrative had all the ingredients to represent what the model minority looked like or is supposed to look like. But the tricky thing about the model minority is where does it fall into place amongst the other narratives? To me, it seems to have a sub category of its own because even though it indeed falls under the immigrant story, it is different than others, which is why it has its own special title.

            [R7] It is important to remember that these narratives do not tell the whole story of immigration but shows bits and pieces into the lives of different individuals. In any of these narratives, a reader can find many different purposes such as Anzia’s hardship in America or Chrystos’s hate towards the white man. They all serve a purpose to show different kinds of feelings and ultimately to recount a personal story of their life. I feel that it depends on the person as to how they can or cannot identify with a narrative. Personally, I was able to identify with Anzia’s narrative the most because of the flow of her words. She spoke with so much defeat and sadness that at points in the narrative, I felt her pain along with her. I feel that it does not matter what part of life you come from but the immigrant and minority narrative can tell us a lot about how America came to be. Even though there has been a dominant culture through the white man, it is the immigrants and minorities who are shaping this country into a melting pot of different cultures that maybe one day, there will no longer be a dominant culture. All in all, they teach the reader an outlook of the famous “American Dream” as well as the horror stories that went along with it and to me that is what they have most in common, is the fact that they give us a peek into the true reality.