LITR 4332: American Minority Literature

Sample Student Poetry Presentation 2002

 Reader: Todd Wielichowski

 Respondent: Sara Curtis

 Recorder: Valerie Lawerance

 “Travels in the South”

 By Simon Ortiz in UA pp.278-281

Biographical Information:

Simon Ortiz was born in Albuquerque, New Mexico. He was raised in the Acoma village that spoke the Acoma language. Ortiz attended many colleges throughout his life. He attended Fort Lewis College in 1962-1963, the University of New Mexico 1966-1968, and the University of Iowa in 1968-1969. Ortiz taught at San Diego State, the Institute of American Indian Arts, Navajo community college, University of New Mexico, And Sinte Gleska College. Ortiz who is a full-blooded American Indian learned English as a second language. While in school he and his classmates were reprimanded by their teachers if they were caught speaking their native language.

Ortiz began writing in the 1960’s when there was a focus on equal rights and social injustice. Dennis Clifford from the last fall presentation states that “ Ortiz is not just a Native American writer but the Native American writer”. This statement seems to be true. Ortiz is easy for readers to read and understand because his poems have a sense of realness and power to them.

Course Objectives:

Objective 3b) Loss and survival: The Indian tribes not being Known, who or where they are. The Native Americans struggle to survive on their new land “the reservations”.

Objective 4) Assimilation or resistance: Become an American or stay an Indian, Keep the long hair like my grandfather had it. Birds and squirrels being seen as brothers.

Objection 5a) To discover the power of poetry and fiction to help other hear the minority voice and vicariously share the minority experience: I had a hard time in Atlanta, I though it was because I did not have a suit and tie, George Wallace against somebody.

Questions:   1) How does the objectives listed above relate to the poem.

                     2) What does the passage mean “ when I passed the Huntsville State pen I told the Indian prisoners what the people said and thanked them and felt humble? Also is their a certain style that you picked up on in the reading.                                    

Class Discussion:

 Jerry: Loss and Survival comes up. Evan the tribe names have been lost, but remain in place, but the people do not even remember who they are.

Todd: It is a foreshadowing to the concept. It was their land, but know no one knows who or where they are.

Jerry: He knows, but the white park ranger does not know.

Todd: Loss and Survival come up a lot throughout the poem.

Dr.White: There ain’t much they don’t try to take comes up a lot to in the poem.

Todd: Both tribes move a lot. The Coushatta were split into two reservations in the East and in the West.

Dr. White: They survived

Jerry: American Indian creation stories involved turtles. He had to cut off a turtles head and severe the ties of his Indian people.

Todd: Resistance is also seen several times. He refuses to cut his long hair and kept like his grandfathers is resistance.

Todd: He also uses illusions and imagery with the white crumbs the bread.

Dr White: Biblical Imagery. *

Sara: The white crumbs could be a race issue. The bird is red like Indians are referred to and the crumbs of the white bread could be the white men giving the Indian crumbs of their land.            

(*Matthew 25. 22A Canaanite woman from that vicinity came to him, crying out, "Lord, Son of David, have mercy on me! My daughter is suffering terribly from demon-possession."
23Jesus did not answer a word. So his disciples came to him and urged him, "Send her away, for she keeps crying out after us."
24He answered, "I was sent only to the lost sheep of Israel."
25The woman came and knelt before him. "Lord, help me!" she said.
26He replied, "It is not right to take the children's bread and toss it to their dogs."
27"Yes, Lord," she said, "but even the dogs eat the crumbs that fall from their masters' table."
28Then Jesus answered, "Woman, you have great faith! Your request is granted." And her daughter was healed from that very hour.)