LITR 4232 American Renaissance 2010
Student Midterm Samples

2. Short essay (4-6 paragraphs) on 1 of 2 options (or combinations as inspired) :

  • Highlight and analyze a passage from our course readings--your best textual experience  in comprehending course contents (terms, themes, objectives, class discussion)

  • Favorite term, objective, concept in course + explanation & application to 1-2 readings

Brittany Fletcher

2A. The Headless Boxer

          All the stories of ghosts and goblins that he had heard in the afternoon now came crowding upon his recollection. The night grew darker and darker; the stars seemed to sink deeper in the sky, and driving clouds occasionally hid them from his sight. He had never felt so lonely and dismal. He was moreover approaching the very place where many of the scenes of the ghost stories had been laid. In the centre of the road stood an enormous tulip-tree, which towered like a giant above all the other trees of the neighborhood, and formed a kind of landmark. Its limbs were gnarled and fantastic, large enough to form trunks for ordinary trees, twisting down almost to the earth, and rising again into the air.”

          Washington Irving’s passage from The Legend of Sleepy Hollow left a lasting and hypnotic impression on me. After I read the story I could not help but reminisce on many memories I have as a young adolescent and the many lengths I went to in order to scare myself. I realized by reading this story that I am still in love with finding opportunities to scare myself. The Legend of Sleepy Hollow has been around for many years and the story of Ichabod Crane and the headless horsemen is still immensely popular today, but why? Why the story is so popular still remains as a question today. I became fascinated by this question and it, along with the language used, is why this story and particular passage made such an impression on me. The language and connections made from The Legend of Sleepy Hollow are a few of the many reasons the headless horsemen still continues to “ride” through literature today.

          One of the popular reasons of the timeless story of The Legend of Sleepy Hollow is its language use. The whole text is filled with a successful mixture of Reason and Romance. For the purpose of the passage I selected, the language is filled with Gothic elements. The passage takes place in a “haunted space”, the woods. The “Wilderness Gothic” really plays into the passage by use of description when Irving writes, “the night grew darker and darker” which brings that sense of fear of the unknown where we cannot see what lies in front of us. The forest is a dark place from the shade of the trees and large trunks and the language of this particular passage brings out the Gothic use in the overall work. There is a great sense of imagery in the beginning of the passage, “All the stories of ghosts and goblins that he had heard in the afternoon now came crowding upon his recollection.” This sentence also shows the meaning of the term correspondence where a thought can either be born in the mind or affected by the outside environment around a person. The thought of being afraid begins in Ichabod’s mind. He is in the woods late at night and the thoughts of evil creatures come creeping into his consciousness and kidnap rationality. Although the headless horsemen appears and comes after Ichabod, the fear comes from Ichabod because he thought of evil things beforehand. Correspondence is the connection between thought and the atmosphere around. This passage gives great description into the “thought” that gives birth to fear first. The passage’s language use gives justice to the Gothic imagery and satisfies the addictive fear that I tend to crave and look for since childhood.

          I can relate personally to correspondence as it took place for me very recently when I spent the night over at a friend’s house. We had spent time earlier in the evening watching The Sixth Sense for some random reason. Around 2:00 in the morning I woke up and began to hear rattling and creaking noises. Almost immediately my mind began to wonder in the darkness of the room where in the world that noise was coming from and what was making it. I began to wonder maybe if I was going to start seeing dead people! As ludicrous as this thought may seem, the fear became very real to me. The noise continued and it was there in the dark of the night that I decided I was going to run to the other room and wake up my friend. I counted to three and as I was rounding the corner I then found my friend's very large Boxer, Maggie, eating the empty pizza box that was ordered for dinner earlier that evening!

          Although, I fortunately did not disappear like Ichabod Crane from my friend's “headless canine,” the fear had been born inside my thoughts first. The story of Sleepy Hollow becomes addicting because of the rich everlasting language that evokes the fear we all have in one form or another. We love the thought of being scared until we are actually consumed by fear so badly that it becomes regrettable. These stories, like The Legend of Sleepy Hollow, portray our ways of vicariously being a part of that fear without having to actually endure it ourselves; we just feel it through memories or fantasies. I connected with the passage because I enjoyed the gothic elements and the classic feel the story gave. 

The reason the story of Ichabod Crane and the headless horsemen is so captivating is because it lives on even in the title, The Legend of Sleepy Hollow. Legend means an old story that has been passed down for generations and presented as history even though it is most likely untrue. Irving knew that this one story would stick with people because it is so entrancing in the gothic language use and ideas.