Literature 4232: American Renaissance
University of Houston-Clear Lake

Midterm Samples 2003--"Identify & Signify"

Assignment:

Choose and analyze a passage from our course readings—and make it matter!
·        Choose a passage. First, try consulting your memory: Which page or moment in our texts reminds itself to you? Ask yourself why, and explain why you’ve chosen it. Some reasons may be personal, but make the passage’s appeal or significance as universal as possible. The passage does not need to be one we went over in class, but it should connect to one or more of the course objectives or themes. You might treat two passages as long as they’re intimately and directly connected to each other.
·        Analyze. Midterm samples can provide examples of this process. Describing how the language works to create meaning, to appeal to readers, and to develop themes or ideas. You analyze the textual passage on its own terms, but meaning can also develop by comparing it to other texts.
·        Make it matter. Why or how does the passage speak to literary and/or cultural issues in and beyond this course?

 Sample Answers:

[complete answer from in-class midterm]

Of the many interesting passages read and discussed this semester, a particularly striking passage comes from the reading, "Sojourner Truth, the Libyan Sibyl". On page 2533, Truth relates her transcendent experience in meeting God. On page 2533, Truth says, "Well, jest as I was goin' out to git into the wagon, I met God! an' says I, 'O God, I didn't know as you was so great!' An' I turned right round an' come into the house, an' set down in my room, for 't was God all around me. I could feel it burnin', burnin' burnin' all around me, an' goin' through me".

Truth's experience touches a chord that runs through the history of the United States. There has always been an undercurrent of religious sentiment running through public and private life in America. Such sentiment has often changed the context of the most difficult issues the country has had to face.

War and peace, slavery and freedom- all of the issues were often cast in the light of religious revelation. In Truth's own particular example, she could relate this story to a white audience to build common ground through religion [in order] to cross racial barriers. The evangelicalism of 19th century Protestant America influenced every group attempting to gain entry into public life.

Since the Reformation, Protestants have regarded their relationships with God as direct [and] without need of a human intercessor. Martin Luther effectively destroyed any barriers the church erected to block the direct revelation from God to [the] individual. Truth probably never knew of Martin Luther. But he provided an important vehicle for individual freedom and self-expression.

The near-universal recognition of this type of religious experience at this point in American history brought a sense of the sublime to both free men and slaves. Freedom was both "up" and "out". Freedom was "up" in that heaven awaited both slaves and free men dedicating themselves to some adherence to divine law. Freedom was "out" in that Christians of varied backgrounds could see each other as equals in spirit if not in body. This belief gave fuel to abolitionist sentiments among white Protestants of the era.

The romantic notion of divine recognition of the universal equality of man came later in Truth's speech on page 2533 when she commented, "Dar's de white folks that have abused you an' beat you an' abused your people-think o' them! But then there came another rush of love through my soul, an I cried out loud, 'Lord, I can even love de white folks!' Truth speaks in this passage of the transcendent quality of love through the prism of religious sentiment. Truth, in both passages, frees herself spiritually from the bondages of oppression and mistrust. According to her beliefs, she is a child of God and by birthright is as free and equal as any other human being. [DG]

 

[complete answer from email midterm]

            This passage from Emerson is full of examples of the things that we have been studying in this class throughout the semester. This passage contains the gothic, the sublime, correspondence, and it resembles the romances' resolution.

            The gothic in this passage is perhaps not very apparent, but look at Emerson's words in the following passage: "The sun illuminates only the eye of the man, but shines into the eye and heart of the child. The lover of nature is he…"  Here we have light and darkness, though darkness is not specifically mentioned.  The sun is the light, but the darkness is in those who do not have the eye of the child.  Then there is the child in nature, children personifies the innocent, whom is pierced to the heart by the light, in nature.  Here I see a gothic scene: An innocent child, standing in the light of the sun, while those around him are surrounded in darkness because the light of the sun doesn't reach their hearts.

            Immediately following this example of the gothic is an example of the sublime. "In the presence of nature, a wild delight runs through the man, in spite of real sorrows." The sublime is also in the following: "I am glad to the brink of fear."  These are sublime because of the contrasting of the two emotions: delight and sorrow, glad and fear. Emerson here is trying to use words to describe his experience of the sublime while in nature.  

            Also in this passage are two great lines that show how correspondence works. This passage: "…but every hour and season yields its tribute of delight; for every hour and change corresponds to and authorizes a different state of mind, from breathless noon to grimmest midnight.", is so great an example for correspondence that it actually uses the word "corresponds"! This reminds me of Ichabod in the forest (2097, 2107-08), "every sound of nature at that witching hour, fluttered his excited imagination; all the stories of ghosts and goblins . . . came crowding upon his recollection.  The night grew darker and darker."  The stories that he had heard corresponded to the dark experience in the woods, and it provoked him to fear.  In Emerson's example, in his saying that nature has a corresponding response to everything that we think and feel, makes us that much more unified, and corresponding to nature. 

            I also think that Emerson's writing here resembles a romance, because it definitely has romantic feeling; what he is describing is like a romantic ending – the romantic resolution.  Here we have a journey to a place, nature, that one can only find and appreciate by "retaining the spirit of infancy" or by regaining it. It is the final destination of a great journey it seems.  Emerson's place in nature transcends, it gets away from it all and rises above it all, just as Cora and Uncas do after their death when they're in the eternal hunting grounds of the sky (343-44).  Though Emerson's "Nature" isn't a story, this passage to me shows a great resemblance to the destination/resolution of a romance with its transcendence. [KV]

[complete answer from in-class midterm]

I chose the first paragraph and a half of the Declaration of Sentiments by Elizabeth Cady Stanton to analyze. To being with this work is couched in language that is reminiscent of the Declaration of Independence—a document familiar to all Americans young and old, black/white/red, literate or not. The first paragraph resonates with feeling and sentiment that is attached to patriotic notions. This similarity would have helped lend credibility to Stanton’s prose.                         She starts off with “[W]hen in the course of human events[…]” and this appeals to all classes and colors of people. We are all human and no one is excluded, despite the fact that this was as document expressing the need for women’s right. Any group who felt left out of the “created equal” scheme could relate.
    The D.O.S. was the response to the World Anti-Slavery Convention’s decision not to include and seat women. That day the voice of women was suppressed, despite the fact that they were present for anti-slavery convictions—not their own concerns.
   
This work is both classical and representative. The style is refine and would have appealed to elite minds. Yet, it also would have appealed to mundane minds, and minorities. The purpose and reason behind the work helped make it representative. It is aimed at a specific group of individuals, it represents their sentiments. It can be adapted though to suit any number of populations. 
    This three-page document matters because it was the beginning of the American women’s voice. In this reasonable, articulate, and beautiful prose is found centuries of injustice laid bare. Elizabeth Stanton once expressed anguish at the fact that her mind was confined within a house with no one but children and servants for company. She worried that aspirations and ambitions would be stifled, but they weren’t. She penned the Declaration of Sentiments and it has soared higher and further than she might have ever dreamed. Her sentiments are still culturally significant today because society still grapples with freedom for all and the equality of people. No student, no American, can fail to take pause to consider her stirring words. Patriotic words. Words that make you think about what you think about. [LE]

[complete answer from email midterm]

The passage by Frederick Douglass in “Narrative of the Life of Frederick Douglass, an American Slave” when he is standing on the banks of the Chesapeake Bay is extremely moving.  In this passage, he is looking out at the boats coming and going at will and wishing he could do the same.  However, he is bound both literally and figuratively by the chains of slavery.  This passage has a universal appeal due to the visual journey that Douglass is taking.  For this moment, he has left the here and now and his focus is on a better life.  Although not the chains of slavery, we all, at some time in our lives, wish we could break our chains and dream of something better.  For some, the chains could be those of abuse, homelessness, or even financial burden.  We all take that visual journey and dream of something more.

              In the romantic style of the gothic, Douglass uses the contrast of light and dark.  The terms he uses are necessary to gain sympathy from the white community for whom he is writing.  Several times throughout the passage he appeals to the beauty of whiteness.  The Chesapeake Bay’s “bosom was ever white with sails”, the boats were “robed in purest white”, and “you are freedom’s swiftwinged angels”.  The things that are white are so desirable to Douglass, but also sadden him by reminding him of the situation that he is in, that he is not white.  He uses these elements of whiteness or lightness to describe everything that is, to him, unreachable.  In contrast, Douglass uses descriptions of darkness to describe the horrible situation that he is in.  He states that he moves “sadly before the bloody whip”, he is “confined in bands of iron”, and he is “left in the hottest hell”.  This also appeals to the white community in that he vividly describes in “dark” terms that there is nothing good about being a slave.  There is nothing bright or happy or attractive about the conditions of slavery.  It is a place where the white people would never dare to journey.  Although literarily romantic in nature, this passage illustrates, through his visual journey, that this is Douglass’s reality. [KM]

            [complete answer from email midterm]

Gothic and sublime elements are present throughout Irving’s The Legend of Sleepy Hollow.  The passage that I am focusing on is on pg. 2108 in the second to last  paragraph where Ichabod is riding by Major Andre’s Tree.  The gothic and sublime nature of this passage works to depict a scene that horrifies as well as creates beautiful imagery.  The description of Major Andre’s Tree brings to light the gothic element of nature telling story and having a morbid past.  The idea is that superstition brings the tree to life and gives spiritual significance to nature.  This passage converts the natural beauty of the forest into a scary, dark and mysterious layer.  The sublime aspects of this passage are presented when describing the tree.  “ Its limbs were gnarled, and fantastic…twisting down almost to the earth, and arising again into the air.” By pairing the adjective gnarled (which means deformed and grotesque) with the word fantastic the image of the tree becomes a strange awe-inspiring piece of nature. The rising of the limbs from the ground alludes to the idea of the tree co-existing between two worlds: one, which is “earthy” and natural and the other eerie, and supernatural. The mystery and intrigue surrounding this tree alludes to the idea that the tree itself may be alive or dangerous in some way.  Objective one deals with popular versus classical text, this passage is written with beautiful imagery as well as suspense making it both classical and popular.  Keely Coufal had an interesting comment in her 2001 presentation she said, “ People derive a pleasure from being scared.” She is correct and because of this desire stories such as The Legend of Sleepy Hollow continue to circulate and become an established part of American culture.  [JN]

[complete answer from email midterm]

This passage is taken from the end of Harriet Jacobs’ Incidents in the Life of a Slave Girl.  There are several factors in this passage that are significant to this course.  First, Jacobs is writing a representative narrative, as described in Objective One.  She wrote about the experiences of a slave girl and reached the innermost souls of both her fellow slaves and the unaware Northern White public.  Women are “delicate flowers” and should be taken care of.  Jacobs’ narrative describes a woman, with all of the qualities any woman possesses, being forced to do unthinkable deeds and live a life in bondage along with her children.  This passage acts as a closing remark to leave the reader aware of the pain and sacrifice slave women had to endure.

            In addition, this passage contains a few gothic elements.  For example, she speaks of “gloomy recollections” then refers to grandmother as “light, fleecy clouds” and ends with the analogy to slavery as a “dark and troubled sea.”  The use of light and dark definitely has gothic qualities.  The reader is left imagining a dark and gloomy ocean with no hope, but looking up and seeing bright hope-filled clouds guiding toward happiness and freedom.  Despite the dark imagery, the use of the clouds could almost be interpreted as sublime.  When Jacobs is almost completely without hope, she can look to one person and feel better.  The powers of her grandmother (the fleecy clouds) had to have been nothing short of incredible, a force within her which carried her through the darker days. [SR]

[nearly complete answer from email midterm]

When I first read Concord Hymn, by Ralph Waldo Emerson, I was touched by the poem’s beauty, sentiment, and classic style. However, as I continued to study other works, I realized that the themes of Concord Hymn are reflected in other texts.

            The poem begins by transporting the reader to the past. These are the first moments of a battle when the soldiers, who are only trained for farming, are flying their flag and preparing to fight for their country. The second stanza brings the reader back into the present, explaining that everyone died in this battle long ago and the landscape has changed. The third stanza speaks of a memorial that is being raised to the heroes of the war and exhorts the reader as well as future generations to always remember. The last stanza speaks to the spirit, I believe it is a reference to God, who gave these soldiers the desire for freedom and the ability to be brave. The spirit is asked to allow nature and time to treat the memorial gently so it will last forever.

            As with many classical texts, this poem is simple and direct but it has a deeper meaning. The changing landscape refers to more than the erosion of time; it refers to the changes in America that occurred due to the independence that these soldiers fought for. Furthermore, the gentle treatment of the memorial refers to future generations that should never forget the sacrifices made by these soldiers.

            Another classical element is the orderliness and balance of the poem. Completeness is achieved through iambic rhythm with 4 set of stresses per line, 4 lines per stanza, and 4 stanzas in the poem. The rhythmic pattern is exemplified with an ABAB CDCD EFEF GHGH rhyme pattern. There is alliteration that begins with a stressed syllable in the phrase “long since in silent sleep.” There is imagery as Emerson paints a picture of the bridge connecting the two armies. There is irony in the subject of war and the peacefulness of death. The tone of the poem is serious and reverent showing the importance of the heroes’ sacrificial death, while the atmosphere is peaceful and sober reflecting the graveyard where the heroes now lie. There is an aesthetic beauty to the poem as it offers the reader a beautiful description of nature but compares this to the sacrifice made by the soldiers. Nature must be kind with the passing of time, allowing the memorial to survive. This anthropomorphic attitude toward Nature was discussed by Douglass Carey in his presentation on February 6, 2003. Ironically, Nature is always with us and begs to be noticed with the passing seasons, but we must have a reminder to the heroes who enabled us to be free. Emerson is asking Nature to stand aside because the sacrifice made by the soldiers is greater and deserves to be remembered. . . . [SB]

 

[nearly complete answer from email midterm]

Identify: The passage I chose was the introduction to Emerson’s  Nature. I chose this particularly passage because I can identify with its meaning. Emerson asking the simple question: why? Why are we supposed to study the great works of the past and deconstruct them? Why can we not make our own history, our own works of nature, or own poetry instead of having to rely on the works of the authors past. I guess I identify so strongly with this passage being that I aspire to be a writer. I aspire to climb the rings of the literature until I find myself counted as one of the writers of the past. In a conversation with a friend last night I wrote something along the lines of: I would rather be the one writing works of art that others deconstruct instead of deconstructing what I can not write. Like Emerson I want to be the one who creates. In particular, creating works of art that are reflections of present day ideas, aspirations, dreams and surroundings.

Analyze: Emerson starts off the passage to Nature using our appeal to romantic views. He wants to bring us back to the wilderness, back to the ways of old writers but saying that we too can write like the old writers. We can and will be able to write like they do: “The sun shines to-day also.”(1516). He pleads with us to transcend our “groping with the bones of the past” and  to act “proportioned to nature”. It becomes a romantic quest inspired by the challenges of his words to act instead of digging around works of dead poets and prepare the future by writing about it. His words are clear and concise and his intentions are as well. It compels the reader to dream romantically of the past while at the same time transcending it and, bringing it to the present. In the same context the passage itself can transcend the time period it was written and apply directly to our present day. We as students study works of the past in history, literature, and religion but, can we transcend from the past to the present by writing our own romantic works of art or, are we confined to the living in the past? . . . [RA]

 

            [complete answer from in-class midterm]

On this green band, by this soft stream

We set today a votive stone;

That memory may their deed redeem,

When, like our sires, our sons are gone.

Spirit, that made those heroes dare

To die, and leave their children free,

Bid time and Nature gently spare

The shaft we raise to them and thee.

(“Concord Hymn,” Emerson, pp.1603)

Ralph Waldo Emerson composed “Concord Hymn” as a memorial to the Revolutionary War battles of April 19, 1775.  According to our text, it was widely known, being circulated in popular newspapers and even sung by schoolchildren.

            What is significant about the selected quatrains is the expressive desire to remember the loss and sacrifice associated with our ‘nation’s’ first great accomplishment.  In the greater context of our readings in this class, the idea of memory as important or desirable in our developing society and culture is largely lost.  Strikingly, in Emerson’s only slightly later published work, Self-Reliance, he boldly challenges the value of memory and the past, as he questions, “Why drag about this corpse of your memory…?”  He continues in exhortation to the reader, urging that the past should be brought “into the thousand-eyed present” and that we should “live ever in a new day.”  He contends “a reverence for our past act or word” would hold us back from the daily transcendence that he experiences.

            Between the lines of these two published works and between the space and time that separates them, it is interesting how one can observe a marked shift in attitude towards the idea and value of memory.  In the scope of historicism it is significant to note the shifting attitudes in the ever-changing, ever-moving New World. [CL]