(2018 midterm assignment)

Sample Student Midterm Answers 2018

#3: Web Highlights
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LITR 4328
American Renaissance
 

 

 

Virginia de Leon

Correspondence: A Space for the Haunted Mind 

          One of the most interesting topics for me this semester has been correspondence. Before this course, I had never heard of correspondence in its romantic literary meaning. According to Dr. White, correspondence can best be described as “a broad state or condition in which one thing exchanges, shares, or agrees with another” (course site). In other words, correspondence mirrors, or reflects internal emotions into the outside world, or vice versa. In romanticism, especially gothic literature, correspondence is a recurring theme in a majority of texts. The student submissions I have chosen to review all correlate to correspondance: Jessica Zepeda’s Nature’s Correspondence (2017), Rebecca Dyda’s Correspondence highlighted through model assignments (2017), and Melissa King’s You Can Rain on my Parade (2010).

          In Jessica Zepeda’s Nature’s Correspondence, she explores correspondence in a variety of romantic texts. However, one of the most captivating moments of her essay was her analysis of in Susan B. Warner’s The Wide, Wide World. Because this was one of my favorite texts in the semester thus far, I quite enjoyed reading Zepeda’s commentary. I connected to Ellen’s character on a very deep level—for the love I have for my mother is just as intense. When little Ellen’s mother informs her that she must go away, I felt their sorrow, “Ellen had plenty of faults, but amidst them all love to her mother was the strongest feeling her heart knew” (Warner). Zepeda goes on to identify some of the correspondence in the text.

Zepeda finds the beauty in such a heartbreaking tale by writing about its romantic elements, “The Wide, Wide World depicts a great example of correspondence between nature and man” (Zepeda). She continues by quoting the following passage from the text “as if somebody was saying to her, softly, ‘Cheer up, my child, cheer up; things are not as bad as they might be; things will get better’” (Warner Chapter 2). At this point Zepeda goes on to beautifully elaborate about the correspondence between Ellen’s released feelings as she “gazed out the window above her at the bright sky” (Zepeda). According to our course site, romantic writers use correspondence to describe “cognitive psychology, in this case how the individual mind interacts with its surroundings”. Because Ellen was such a young child, her mother’s absence in her life has caused great trauma. Warner’s romantic writing highlights this emotional turmoil.

Furthermore, Rebecca Dyda’s Correspondence highlighted through model assignments and Melissa King’s You Can Rain on my Parade both mention correspondence in The Legend of Sleepy Hollow. Washington Irving’s classic tale of a headless horseman haunting individuals “in the gloom of night” continues to fascinate us to this day. The following passage from the text represents both gothic and correspondence elements: “The dominant spirit, however, that haunts this enchanted region, and seems to be commander-in-chief of all the powers of the air [Ephesians 2.2], is the apparition of a figure on horseback, without a head. It is said by some to be the ghost of a Hessian trooper [German soldier fighting for Britain], whose head had been carried away by a cannon-ball, in some nameless battle during the Revolutionary War [app. 40 years before story’s publication], and who is ever and anon [now and then] seen by the country folk hurrying along in the gloom of night, as if on the wings of the wind” (Irving).

Irving’s romantic writing embeds correspondence into the story by taking a land that has been ravaged by war and giving it a haunting, paranormal element as consequence. Both Dyda and King place emphasis in their writings on the effects of correspondence in the romantic texts. For instance, king focuses on mood, “Authors can use correspondence to set the mood for a particular scene in a piece of literature. This is perhaps most seen in the realm of the gothic. Washington Irving uses the projection of Ichabod’s mood onto the environment to create a very unnerving setting”. On the other hand, Dyda choses to analyze a previous assignment focusing on attitude “Here, it seems as though Jackie has interpreted correspondence between the attitude that Ichabod Crane had towards the woods and the events that transpired at the end of the story. She explains that since he viewed the woods as a scary and dark place due to the scary stories told prior, the woods then became a scary and dark place”. Both students have dived deep into the realm of correspondence.