(2018 midterm assignment)

Sample Student Midterm Answers 2018

#3: Web Highlights
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LITR 4328
American Renaissance
 

 

Jasmine Choate

Three Different Paths to Sublime

          When reading through the copious amount of Model Assignments, I was initially overwhelmed. However, my experience turned into something entirely different from what I had expected. In the end, I was taken down three different paths to one very important term, Sublime. One student’s clever title stuck out to me immediately and begun my journey. This was Ronni Abshier’s clever nod to the band Sublime; Sublime: Not Just a Scary Good Band Name. I found it completely hilarious, and it really drew me into clicking on the short analysis essay. After reading the essay, I found myself fascinated with what Ronni had to say. This essentially led me to search for other essays that focused on interpreting the term ‘Sublime’. Before I knew it, I had read several others, but found myself especially interested in Kimberly Hall’s The Sublime: A Study in Emotional Contrast and Victoria Narcisse’s Sublime: The Beautiful, the Terrifying, and the Ridiculous. I enjoyed these three the most, and found it quite interesting how they all took a different approach in analyzing the same term.

          In Ronni Abshier’s essay, I found the first path to Sublime. In which I was led to learn about the beautiful yet terrifying aspect of the term. I found myself relating to the fact that I had also never thought of the word sublime as more than a band name before taking this course. In the essay, Abshier analyzes how Poe and Irving both use the elements of sublime to display a sense of something beautiful yet terrifying in their writing. I agree with Ronni when they mention that both these authors were talented in the fact that they could take a complex idea of something being sublime, and make it understandable and relatable to the reader even years and years later. “Edgar Allen Poe and Washington Irving intertwine the concepts so well with their stories, making the concept easy to grasp and develop understanding.” (Ronni Abshier, Midterm Short Essay 2017)

          In Kimberly Hall’s essay, I was led down my second path to Sublime. One that focused on the more emotional aspects when reading something with a sublime element. Their initial connection to the term was vastly different than mine or Ronni’s in the fact that they thought more of the fantasy and science fiction aspect of it all. Hall’s essay shines a light on the true fact that sublime text typically evokes contradictory feelings within the reader. I agree with Hall on the fact that the element of sublime can transform something ordinary into something greater through the use of contrasting emotions. I also felt a sense of personal connection to Hall when they spoke about the impact that Romanticism left on their life. “…I realized that the sublime was not just asking me to feel on a grand scale- it was asking me to move out of any comfort zones and take in the most pleasurable and terrifying scopes of human emotion at the same time.” (Kimberly Hall, Midterm Short Essay 2016)

          In Victoria Narcisse’s essay, I waltzed onto my third and final path to Sublime. One that highlighted three different aspects to the term all within one story. The beautiful, the terrifying, and the ridiculous sublime elements of the mountains in Rip Van Winkle. I agree with Victoria’s description of how the sublime can make you envision and imagine scenery vividly without having had to experience firsthand in real life. I really commend Victoria in being able to analyze three completely different tones within the mountain range in the story, especially the ridiculous. I do not think I would have thought to include that aspect if I had been analyzing the term. I think Narcisse does a great job displaying and defending their idea that there are many different aspects to sublime, not just the ones we are accustomed to thinking about. “…sublime…it is not limited to only one way for it to be used, it can be used in many different ways.” (Victoria Narcisse, Midterm Short Essay 2012)

          Although these three essays took me down different paths, they all meet at the same ending, the sublime. It was incredibly fascinating to see how three students from different years all took a look at the term and saw something unique. I learned that sublime is a complex and at times contradictory term that elevates a text through emotion and perspective. I feel as though I have been allowed a glimpse into the perspective of three other people, and have been given their information to learn and be able to form my own view of the elements of the term sublime.