(2018 midterm assignment)

Model Student Midterm answers 2018

#1: Long Essays (
Index)

LITR 4328
American Renaissance
 

 

Kyle W. Abshire

10/3/2018

Romance, a Driving Desire

            Before signing up for this class I had never heard of American Renaissance literature or seen a compiled list of these authors grouped together. I found myself looking at the reading list and asking myself: What in the world does Edgar Allan Poe have to do with Walt Whitman? To make things more confusing, the term romanticism was introduced as interchangeable, for renaissance. In the beginning, I was completely at a loss of what to expect from this class. However, I have come to learn a lot about romanticism and its authors, many of which I have read before but now have a deeper appreciation of their styles. Gothic, sublime, Correspondence, and transcendence are all strong characteristics of the romantic period. Through close inspection of course material we will discuss how these themes shape stories into romantic pieces.

            Often when reading poetry, we expect that the full meaning of the poem won’t be immediately revealed to us. It is not uncommon to need multiple read-throughs to fully understand the work’s meaning. However, it is common for poetry to speak on multiple levels, with the surface level being the most obvious. The person, place, or situation being described is there for us to grasp but the lower level of the piece usually takes more effort. The lower level is a hidden treasure, waiting for us to uncover its knowledge.  Walt Whitman’s, I Sing the Body Electric uses the sublime to reach depth not possible in basic descriptions. On the surface, Whitman is describing people. The entire work is basically a description of men and women. However, he strives to find a deeper truth, than just the physical. We can see this in the over-zealous way that he uses descriptions. “As I see my soul reflected in Nature, / As I see through a mist, one with inexpressible completeness, sanity, beauty, / See the bent head and arms folded over the breast, the Female I see (Whitman 5). On the surface, he describes a woman, who is maybe hunched over, folding her arms. However, digging deeper shows us that the woman is almost inconsequential. He is not speaking about a woman, but more likely all women, or all people. Whitman compares his own soul to that of nature, immediately invoking a spiritual meaning and continues to describe a woman with unbelievable attributes. The use of words like “inexpressible’ and “completeness,” gives us the understanding that he is not talking with a rational mind. Nothing and no one, is perfect, yet he describes this woman as so. The sublime language that Whitman uses, takes us from a conversation about a single woman and transforms it into a spiritual conversation about the entirety of existence.

The sublime is a powerful tool in evoking deeper meaning, in a literary piece. However, it is not the only tool. Gothic writing can achieve the same effect, with a slightly different route.  Gothic writing is best characterized as dark or macabre. If the sublime uses over embellishments to describe perfectness and beauty, gothic does the opposite. It often relies on over describing darkness or unpleasantness to evoke a deeper feeling. Edgar Allan Poe is famously renowned for being a gothic writer. One work of his uses the gothic style to evoke feelings of love. Poe’s, Ligeia, depicts a man who has lost his wife to illness, unhappily remarried, and now faces the death of his second wife as well. “And again I sunk into visions of Ligeia—and again, (what marvel that I shudder while I write,) again there reached my ears a low sob from the region of the ebony bed. But why shall I minutely detail the unspeakable horrors of that night?” (Poe 25). The main character’s second wife has died, and he sits by her bedside mourning, while simultaneously remembering his first wife. While he thinks of Ligeia, the corpse on the bed seems to be in the process of reanimation. Poe has used an overwhelming sense of despair to force the reader to feel for the character, beyond a basic understanding of his situation. The character at this point seems to be going mad from loneliness. His despair from losing Ligeia, is only magnified by the death of the lady Rowena. Her love was only a place holder that consequently made the man’s despair grow. At the death of the lady Rowena, he can only think of Ligeia. However, this incredibly dark and twisted set of affairs does not make us dislike the main character for using Rowena. It gives us a deeper understanding for his desire to be reunited with his true love, Ligeia.  The gothic forces a feeling of uneasiness, on us and makes us experience things that we would rather ignore.

Correspondence is used in romanticism to express one’s deeper feelings, through their surroundings.  The Legend of Sleepy Hollow uses correspondence to show us that the story is not about the small town or Ichabod Crane, but really about desire. Ichabod’s sole motivation, in the story, is to act upon his desire of love. He is caught in a love triangle, of sorts, with a wealthy bachelorette and the local show off. The settings of nature almost always seem to reflect Ichabod’s mood. We see this correspondence most clearly when Ichabod rushes away from the party, after being rejected by the wealthy woman. “It was the very witching time of night that Ichabod, heavy hearted and crest-fallen, pursued his travels homewards, along the sides of the lofty hills which rise above Tarry Town, and which he had traversed so cheerily in the afternoon. The hour was as dismal as himself” (Irving 55). Nature is directly mirroring Ichabod’s mood. Ichabod is scorned and upset, as he leaves the party, and views the world as such. Not only are we told that the world has taken a dark hue with Ichabod’s mood, but were also told that the same setting was cheerful before the party, as he was cheerful that he might get to spend time with his desired. The setting changes to reflect the mood of the character because we are not experiencing a physical world, at least not wholly. We are experiencing a world based on emotion. Ichabod’s emotions control nature, which emphasizes to us that the story’s true objective is to express desire and emotion, rather than tell a narrative.

This leads us to transcendentalism. It is the last tool of romanticism that we will discuss. Transcendentalism is a philosophical approach to viewing the world. Ralph Waldo Emerson explains to us his view of the world in an essay titled Selections from Nature. The essay discusses the world and its different forms. However, it speaks of the physicality of the world, as a mistranslation of its attributes. This is made resoundingly clear in the chapter accurately named, Nature. “The charming landscape which I saw this morning, is indubitably made up of some twenty or thirty farms. Miller owns this field, Locke that, and Manning the woodland beyond. But none of them owns the landscape” (Emerson 9). Emerson is speaking about a large area of land and explains that some people may own parts of the land, but none can own its beauty. Transcendentalism attempts to transcend past the world that we see through social structures and see the world as a spiritual place. A place of beauty that cannot be controlled by man. As in every other tool of Romanticism, we have discussed, Transcendentalism wants us to leave the world behind and enter one driven by the spirit or emotion. A world not run by logic or reason, but one that takes place outside of our control and pulls us with desire.

            Romanticism is an incredibly diverse genre of literature. The writings span from gothic scenes to transcendental essays. However, despite their differences, the goals are all to similar. The sublime strives to evoke emotion through words and over description. Whitman’s, I Sing the Body Electric expresses an over the top form of beauty so well that we are forced out of an earthly realm and into the ethereal. The Gothic style expresses unpleasantness so overwhelmingly that the reader can not help but feel the deepest of emotions. Poe’s, Ligeia takes us down a dark and deceitful path, with a mourning widower. Poe’s story uses dark imagery to push us into an uncomfortable state of mind, so that we become disheveled and closer to the character’s mindset. Therefore, we are much more likely to connect and understand the stories emotion led conclusion. Correspondence uses the surrounding world to reflect that of a character’s feelings. Irving’s, The Legend of Sleepy Hollow depicts Ichabod Crane’s surroundings based from his inner emotions. If we are only able to understand the world through Ichabod’s emotions, we are not experiencing the physical world. We are experiencing Ichabod’s emotional response to certain situations. Lastly transcendentalism works to explain that we do not see the world for its true worth. It strives to deconstruct the social weight that we have placed on arbitrary agreements and explains that these agreements are far less valuable than the spiritual significance of the world. Emerson’s, Selections from Nature calls out our acceptance of agreements like land ownership and explains that we can own land, but we cannot own that lands beauty. Romantic writing strives to pull us from our default understanding of the world and pushes us into an emotion filled spiritual world that cannot be summed up with facts and figures, but changes with each person’s experience.