(2016 midterm assignment)

Sample Student Midterm Answers 2016

#3: Web Highlights

LITR 4328
American Renaissance
 

 

Clark Omo

Analysis and Response: Web Reviews

American Romance has nothing to do with actual lovemaking or savage passion as Karin Cooper makes clear in her essay “American Romantic Literature: Not the Lovey Dovey Mush You Might Expect”. In this essay, Cooper examines the themes prevalent in the literature of the American Romance era, as well its many characteristics and signature attributes. She begins with stating that the themes that make Romantic Literature Romantic are ubiquitous in many of the entertainment mediums that currently inhabit our society’s social sphere. She differentiates the definition of Romantic from the more commonplace term, romantic. Finally, she spends time explaining and summarizing several characteristics of Romantic Literature (the sublime, child innocence, and connection with nature). She ends by reinforcing her above idea that these themes are still alive and well in our world with the following statement: “this literature written almost two centuries ago was the foundation of many of our stories that we all still enjoy today.”

First, Miss Cooper identified some very key ideas that we have discussed in extenso throughout our time in this course. The fact that Romance still slakes our lusts for entertainment is most definitely true. She does a good job of bringing each of these terms she has selected into focus and making them substantially more accessible in terms of understanding their mechanics. I found this especially true in her explanation of the “sublime” characteristic of this literature. However, I do have reservations about this piece. Most are grammar issues, some of which hindered the rhythm of the piece so much so it became more of a staccato than it had to be.  But overall, she did an excellent job of examining and catalyzing her points down to the tiniest grain. She provided a useful viewpoint, and made the mechanics inherent to American Romantic Literature more accessible to the average reader.

In her essay “Romance: It’s Not What You Think”, Miss Glidden finds herself in much the same state of mind that Miss Cooper was in while writing her essay. Like Cooper, Glidden did not know how to react to American Renaissance Literature. She says she wasn’t sure what the American Renaissance was, but then connected the term “Renaissance” with its meaning of a period of growth or rebirth. She goes on to further explain how the course changed her outlook on the American Renaissance and how the material greatly expanded her previous notions of many of the terms and mechanics discussed in the class. She goes on to identify essential characteristics of the Romantic genre and identifies her struggle to separate the definitions of “romantic” and “Romantic”. She comments on how the resources provided in the class, including the style sheets, deepened her understanding of the material. Lastly, she comments that she had an excellent experience in the course. She learned a good deal of new things and now possesses a more honed ability to identify the characteristics of Romanticism that currently and overwhelmingly permeate today’s entertainment.

As with Cooper’s essay, I appreciate the growth the two authors record in regards to their knowledge of the American Renaissance. Both authors, as evidenced by these essays, clearly learned something. Much so in Glidden’s case. She has gained an essential analytical skill in taking this class: the ability to identify common themes, even if it’s restricted to literature. That is what I like most about this essay. Glidden displays her development very well, and has clearly gained the ability to break down Romanticism’s themes in literature. I also liked how she defined Romanticism: “It envelop[e]s everything from true love to bloodied revenge.” This comment is very true indeed. Again, there were some grammar issues, and some of the sentences and points didn’t fit well together. But, overall, Glidden developed her ideas well and included some very interesting observations that I did enjoy.

Zach Thomas brings an interesting point to light in his essay, “Romanticism Feeding Realism”. In this essay, Thomas examines the relationship between the literary styles of Romanticism and Realism with his words, “Realism is the structure that holds the story together while Romanticism is the free-spirited details that make the story enticing to read.” He goes on to explain the dynamics of this relationship by using Emerson’s essay “Nature” with the chosen line: “But when a faithful thinker, resolute to detach every object from personal relations, and see it in the light of thought, shall, at the same time, kindle science with the fire of the holiest affections, then will God go forth anew into the creation.” Thomas explains that Romanticism “masks” the presence of Realism in this work.  He goes on to use the story of Rip Van Winkle as another example of this linkage between Romanticism and Realism by asserting that the world around Rip is that of a Realist, while Rip himself is a relic of the Romantic age. Thomas finds this relationship again in The Legend of Sleepy Hollow through the challenge Ichabod Crane faces in conquering the affections of the Van Tassel girl. While Ichabod imagines his quest as that of a Grecian adventurer’s, in reality it is an “uphill battle” with a thousand odds that are not in his favor. Thomas also mentions The Last of the Mohicans as an example. Cooper’s balancing of a Romantic narrative with actual historical backgrounds brings to the literary mouth a flavor that is both Romantic and Realistic. He uses Poe’s “Ligeia” as an example as well, but, as Thomas acknowledges, the Realist narrative is not overtly (perhaps not even covertly) present in this story. Finally, Thomas binds this all together with reminding us how Romance provides the sunlight to the story while Realism provides the dirt.

Overall, I enjoyed the thesis of this essay. It is one I overwhelmingly agree with. Realism and Romanticism work well together as they dance across the page. Romanticism provides the sweeping adventure, the amazing scenery, and the sheer power that a story needs to reach its full potential. Realism reminds the reader that these stories are often reimagining the world around us. However, that is not to say that they must work hand in hand. A story can be purely Realistic or it can be inviolably Romantic. But Thomas’s theory still works. On the negative side, again grammar is a primary issue with this essay. Also, some of the paragraphs were not properly transitioned, and some of the ideas could have used a little more development. Concluding, the idea behind this essay’s argument was, for the most part, well put. It just could have been carved with more finesse.