(2016 midterm assignment)

Sample Student Midterm Answers 2016

#3: Web Highlights

LITR 4328
American Renaissance
 

 

Burgundy Anderson

Peer Reviews: A Challenge of Notions

I chose to review one long essay, one short essay, and one research project. The long essay was Karin Cooper’s “American Romantic Literature: Not the Lovey Dovey Mush You Might Expect,” the short essay was Britini Pond’s “The All-Encompassing Romance,” and the research project was Stephanie Taylor’s “Looking through the Lens of the Romanticist: Examining Sexuality and its Transcendence over Time.” I chose these essays because I found the titles interesting, and actually reading these essays gave me some insight as to how I would best structure my own essays.

Karin Cooper’s essay was very thorough, and I really liked the way it was structured. I particularly enjoyed the organization of the essay. Karin focused on the gothic, the sublime, childhood innocence, and connections with nature. Each focus had a unique textual example, which helps make the focus connected to the student’s experience. Cooper seems to be able choose the exact right textual moments to highlight his points. My favorite of Karin’s examples was the gothic. The moment chosen to illustrate the gothic was from The Legend of the Sleepy Hollow when Ichabod is riding home after the party and hears an odd sound that he cannot explain. Unfortunately, I think Karin might have missed the mark on the sublime, leaving the definition at a simple, “moments that take your breath away.” To me, this just does not encompass the full meaning behind the sublime; it must be something that is deeper. The sublime is better defined as something that inspires both beauty and pain.

I enjoyed reading Britini Pond’s essay about Romance. She starts by saying that she thought she understood the genre, having read it most of her life. Britini is able to skillfully pull selections of romance that transcends a simple “woman’s love story” to help the reader understand why crossing romance with other genres is so important. I particularly enjoyed what Britini wrote about The Lamplighter. She observes that this could have been a work of realism based on the fact that Gerty is an orphan left alone on the streets. But then Britini is able to defend the first two chapters as a work of romance because of True’s actions to save the girl. I had not thought about the story in the light, simply because this is a non-typical romance. I love that Britini was able to expand my horizon with The Lamplighter, and I honestly enjoy the story itself more, now. I think she also did a great job talking about how loss relates to the romantic. I enjoyed her thoughts and insights on the Romantic.

Stephanie Taylor’s research project was the last piece I read. The title, “Examining Sexuality and its Transcendence over Time,” caught my eye. She starts by stating that literature is a type of looking glass into the social and cultural norms of the past. The bond created between the author and reader is a unique relationship. Stephanie says Walt Whitman was best able to create this bond using sexuality. Stephanie even claims that eroticism itself was introduced to Literature within the Romantic Era. I am not entirely sure I agree with that point; there are plenty of erotic scenes within stories before the time period. However, I do think it is fair to say that Eroticism was used very heavily during the Romantic Era. I particularly enjoyed Stephanie’s organization and that she used three examples to talk about how Eroticism has stayed relevant today. It was a bit unexpected, to me, that she brought up Sharon Olds, simply because I am not familiar with her work so I think she seems out of place when surrounded by Walt Whitman and Florence Welch. Altogether, I enjoyed her project and thought it was really well done.

By reading these essays I was able to clarify not only my own ideas and thoughts about the class, but also gain new insights to what other students are thinking about the class. I think each essay challenged by own thinking about the different terms. Particularly, I think I now better understand my own definition of the sublime, and will be able to better consider the concept with further readings. I also liked being challenged on my own ideas about what constitutes Romanticism, and how other elements play into the genre. I think reading the research project made me think again about how I view Eroticism in literature and how we find it. The best thing about reading other students work is watching them go through the journey of learning and being able to articulate their own thoughts, even when they challenge my own.