(2016 midterm assignment)

Sample Student Midterm Answers 2016

#2a: Short Essay (Favorite Passage)

LITR 4328
American Renaissance
 

 

George Kelly

Sleepless in Sleepy Hollow

“All the stories of ghosts and goblins that he had heard in the afternoon now came crowding upon his recollection. The night grew darker and darker; the stars seemed to sink deeper in the sky, and driving clouds occasionally hid them from his sight. He had never felt so lonely and dismal. He was, moreover, approaching the very place where many of the scenes of the ghost stories had been laid. In the centre of the road stood an enormous tulip-tree, which towered like a giant above all the other trees of the neighborhood, and formed a kind of landmark. Its limbs were gnarled and fantastic, large enough to form trunks for ordinary trees, twisting down almost to the earth, and rising again into the air. It was connected with the tragical story of the unfortunate Andre, who had been taken prisoner hard by; and was universally known by the name of Major Andre's tree. The common people regarded it with a mixture of respect and superstition, partly out of sympathy for the fate of its ill-starred namesake, and partly from the tales of strange sights, and doleful lamentations, told concerning it.”

          The first time I ever encountered “The Legend of Sleepy Hollow” was Tim Burton’s adaptation on the silver screen. The effect it had on me was lifelong and left an indelible sense of terror when going through the woods at night. When I finally read the story written by Washington Irving so long ago, it had quite a different effect on me. There is much more to Sleepy Hollow than meets the eye. This tale serves as a deeper look into the human mind and reveals our fears. Three attributes that have impacted me the most are the gothic settings, the grotesque descriptions, and the incidences of psychological correspondence found in Irving’s short story.

          The first apparent attribute of this story is how well it represents the gothic style of Romanticism. It is no longer a mystery why I was so scared as a child. Tim Burton had excellent source material to create a macabre film from. The fact still remains that when I am in the forest, I am usually scared out of my wits. I often observe the manner in which trees spiral and contort like the tulip tree mentioned in the story. As darkness falls and one cannot even see a hand in front of their face, one can just imagine these twisting forms coming to life and grabbing you from where you stand. This fear is irrational and is an impediment to my progress as an individual.

          The second attribute is the grotesque imagery that underpins most of the characters and scenery throughout the tale. The main character, Ichabod Crane, is described as having a long, snipe-like nose perched on a small head with glassy green eyes. The near-mythical antagonist, the headless horseman, is said to search the wilderness on horseback every night looking for his dismembered head. The tulip tree and the surrounding trees are grey, decaying, and distorted. These descriptions sound more like the fringe thoughts of an obsessive compulsive maniac. The grotesque influence fades and I realize how delicious the imagery is in this story. I am inspired to write more often and paint an exquisite picture with my words. Writing about my fears is cathartic and can alleviate my anxiety for a time.

          The third and most profound attribute is the recurring correspondence that appears from beginning to end. Ichabod constantly projects his inner demons and the superstitions that poison his mind onto the surrounding setting. “‘All the stories of ghosts and goblins that he had heard in the afternoon now came crowding upon his recollection.’” As a person who has been diagnosed with generalized anxiety disorder, this attribute is the most poignant. I cannot even recall how many times I have plastered my worries onto my surroundings and in turn rendered myself paralyzed with fear. I frequently experience correspondence in my daily life. How frequently can we say that literary devices apply to reality? That is why this attribute is the most profound. I believe we can learn so much about ourselves when authors dig into the human psyche. The fear of the unknown poses quite a stumbling block for the advancement of our species. We can discriminate based on outward appearance, wring our hands with anxiety, and let fear run our day-to-day lives.

          The three attributes of “The Legend of Sleepy Hollow” that have impacted me the most are the gothic settings, the grotesque descriptions, and the incidences of psychological correspondence. I went from dreading this legendary tale as a child to respecting it as an adult. Correspondence, is similar to what people with anxiety disorders experience. Stories like these could aid society in taking people with mental disorders seriously. I sometimes wonder what the world would be like if I didn’t have irrational thoughts and fears that I project onto reality. As someone who suffers from anxiety and depression, this story reveals part of my experience.