(2016 midterm assignment)

Model Student Midterm answers 2016

#1: Long Essays (Index)

LITR 4328
American Renaissance
 

 

Clark Omo

The American Renaissance: A Tale of Enlightenment

My journey through the American Renaissance has been an enlightening one. The knowledge I have received during the course of this class has rejuvenated and further deepened my understanding of the literature this nation has produced. It has provided a more in depth understanding of how the mechanics of Romanticism and Transcendentalism employed by the authors we have so far studied (Emerson, Whitman, Poe, Cooper and so forth) and how they defined these genres for America. Furthermore, it has also explored areas of literary mechanic I did not know before. Particularly in regards to the “correspondence” in Transcendentalism and Romanticism. Before coming to this class, I had never heard of this mechanic, not in grade school or anywhere else. I understand (or at least I hope I do) now how the Transcendentalists drew parallels among the body and nature. I also gained a broader definition of what Romanticism is, particularly with its use of the “dark lady and fair lady” dichotomy. I had never heard of this aspect either, but I’m glad I have. I certainly saw the examples that existed in the literature we’ve read, and I also can see it in current literature, if I look close enough.

I also might add I gained some insight into the art of teaching, since I plan on being a teacher myself one day. I saw how discussion and the allowance of student participation in the administration of course material aided in the exploration of our topics. Discussion helped me, personally, see some things that I had never thought and probably never would have thought of (at least not in a focused amount of time) had we not brought them up in class. The example of this that struck me the most was the discovery of the pumpkin in The Legend of Sleepy Hollow serving as no more than a method of whitewashing gory material. Now my belief in the legend has been forever punctured, but not quite deflated. Furthermore, discussion promotes an environment that encourages growth. It helps one see things never thought of or perhaps were thought of before, but not explored in any great detail.

And through the use of discussion, I believe I have formed a definition, or at least my definition, of the American Renaissance. The American Renaissance was the equivalent to the Age of Exploration for American authors. At their time, America was still a budding nation. It was a totally new idea, never before explored by any other nation in the Old World. Because of this, our nation not only had to create a government and a set of laws that would unite the people as a single nation, but also had to create a culture that would set us apart from the world around us. The American Renaissance furthered this goal tremendously, for, as history has shown us, a good deal of the knowledge humanity possesses regarding its past comes from the written record. A hundred years from now, after America has suffered the soon to be nuclear-induced zombie apocalypse and the survivors finally emerge from the ashes, they will look for the remains of what America once was. Undoubtedly, they would find the works of the authors we have studied. The works forged in the American Renaissance defined us as a people. They created a unique style, a distinct realm of literature that belongs to America and America alone. This is particularly true with Cooper in my opinion. The dark and forbidding wilds, the struggles of man as he tries to make his future in a new land, and the core of American ruggedness and strength that is Hawkeye are just a few of the examples in Cooper’s work that serve to distinguish American literature from the rest of the world.

Romanticism also played a big part in how I now define the American Renaissance. I have seen the themes, motifs, and mechanics that are prevalent in many of these works that I have studied that relate them to the Romantic form of literature. I have seen how Transcendentalism works as a genre. Particularly in the essay “I Sing the Body Electric” by Whitman did I see the most apparent examples of Transcendentalism, which in of itself is a guise of Romanticism, though certainly not the darkest. The way in which Whitman draws parallels between everyday acts, such as “the march of firemen in their own costumes” with the Transcendental theme of an ethereal nature, such as within the same line “the play of masculine muscle through clean setting trowsers [trousers] and waist-straps”. Here, Whitman has created a sort of linkage between the simple and unadorned mundane with that of something ethereal, just by watching a line of firemen march down the street. However, the greatest examples of Romanticism that I found in this class were in the works of Edgar Allan Poe, specifically in Ligeia. Ligeia contains some of the most powerful images that aptly display the power of the Romantic, particularly the Gothic: Poe’s drawing of the contrast between the “dark lady” Ligeia with that of the “fair lady” Rowena, the narrator’s meeting with Ligeia in “some large, old decaying city near the Rhine”, and his description of Ligeia possessing “a lofty and pale forehead”, skin that “rivalled the purest of ivory” and “raven-black, the glossy, the luxuriant and naturally-curling tresses” that form Ligeia’s hair. And of course, there is the vision, resurrection, or opiate-induced hallucination of Ligeia’s body through that of the dying Rowena.

From here, I think that a few comments on the quality of this writing are deserved. True, America has neither the traditions nor the histories of many of the European countries of which she is the offspring. Nonetheless, she has definitely made her mark on the world, and the literature studied in this course perfectly demonstrates that. The pure music that Poe plays while writing these poems is phenomenal. And, although the critics may rend it to bits, The Last of the Mohicans displays a fine quality as well.  The Mohicans contains, as D.H. Lawrence put it, “Pictures! Some of the loveliest, most glamorous pictures in all literature.”. And even after Mark Twain observed that “There are nineteen rules governing literary art in the domain of romantic fiction . . . . In Deerslayer Cooper violated eighteen of them. . . .”, he nonetheless concluded, as I have, that “Counting these out, what is left is Art. I think we must all admit that.” The authors we have so far studied, critics aside, regardless of genre or classification, each fulfilled their purpose in American Literature well, and that purpose was, in the first place, to create such a thing as American Literature.

Overall, I have so far enjoyed my educational journey through the American Renaissance. I have examined things in closer detail, particularly the musicality of Poe’s writing, than I have in previous readings and experiences. I experienced new terms that I never knew of prior to entering this course, and I also have seen some authors that I did know of either. Yet, out of all the authors we have read so far, I particularly liked the works of Poe. He has definitely earned his place in the pantheon of American writers. And, though I agree with some of the criticisms Twain has brought forward regarding Cooper, I do not hold any of them against the author or his creations. Cooper had a purpose when he wrote. I think he fulfilled it. So far, the experience I have had in this class has been a treat, and I look forward to walking the future paths this course will light for me.