(2015 midterm assignment)

Sample Student Midterm Answers 2015

#2a: Short Essay (Favorite Passage)

LITR 4328
American Renaissance
 

 

Michael McDonald

Time Changes Everything

            [31] There was, as usual, a crowd of folk about the door, but none that Rip recollected. The very character of the people seemed changed. There was a busy, bustling, disputatious tone about it, instead of the accustomed phlegm and drowsy tranquillity.  [modernization]  He looked in vain for the sage Nicholas Vedder, with his broad face, double chin, and fair long pipe, uttering clouds of tobacco-smoke instead of idle speeches; or Van Bummel, the schoolmaster, doling forth the contents of an ancient newspaper. In place of these, a lean, bilious-looking fellow, with his pockets full of handbills, was haranguing vehemently about rights of citizens*—elections—members of congress—liberty*—Bunker’s Hill*—heroes of seventy-six*—and other words, which were a perfect Babylonish  [pun on Babel, as in Tower of Babel?]  jargon to the bewildered Van Winkle. [* = references to American Revolution]

            Rip Van Winkle returns to a familiar place, yet her seems lost. He sees faces of people he has no recollection of and they all stare back at him with the same uncertainty. His home once a quaint and quiet village has become a bustling and busy town. He longs to find some kind of familiarity in this place, but he can find none. He longs to see the faces of his friends, but in their place find only more unfamiliarity.

            The most prominent concept in this passage, as noted, is that of modernization. This plays a large role in much of Romanticism. Modernization often times combats with the desires of the romantic narrative. Modernization directly combats with nature as civilization, like Rips village, grows; nature dwindles.

            Much like in Rip Van Winkle modernization happens in our current era in an instant. For instance, the iPhone is only eight years old. It took Rips’ village twenty years to grow to a point that it was unfamiliar to him, and today in our society the original iPhone is considered ancient. Simply put our society and culture is expanding at an exponential rate, so much so that I believe if Rip Van Winkle were to fall asleep in our present day and wake up twenty years in our future, the world wouldn’t simply be unfamiliar, but almost entirely unrecognizable. Think of how quickly things are built today and begin to reflect on how much the society that you grew up in has changed.

            Modernization appears to be a positive in our society, but to look at it through romantic tinted lens we have almost completely rejected the nature that we should embrace. This is why it is important to note that Rip Van Winkle, though owning a farm, never tended to it simply because he did not feel the connection with the land he was entrusted to keep. So when the world became unfamiliar to him the one place that he longed to return to was the very farm and land he neglected.