(2013 midterm assignment)

Sample Student Midterm Answers 2013

#3: Web Highlights

LITR 4232
American Renaissance
 

 

Mickey Thames

What a Wonderful World- The Sublime All Around Me

“Through nature especially, readers could rise up and be close to something larger than themselves, whether that be their own personal gods or just more enlightened understanding. Ralph Waldo Emerson is the perfect example in our reading that illustrates this aspect. He takes the readers outside of themselves through his works, and makes them view the world around them, the same woods that have always bordered their backyards, in a way they never had before.” - Dorothy Noyes

“Yet, the scene also emits a feeling of motion.  The vines in the tree "threw" their shadows over the brook.  Not only are the shadows thrown over the brook, but they are "cavernous" giving the feeling that they are endless.  The sublime as something grand, large or extending generally gives a feeling of movement outward or forward.  Sometimes movement is not necessarily forward, but a change.- “
Velma Laborde

“Emerson, a Transcendentalist writer, uses the sublime when describing the sense of reverence people should feel when viewing nature.  In chapter one of Nature, Emerson says that at twilight while under a cloudy sky he has experienced “perfect exhilaration.”  The use of exhilaration leads the reader to understand that the speaker is experiencing more than just a passing thrill.  This strong noun hints that the reader is leaning towards the sublime.  In the next sentence Emerson says that he is glad “to the brink of fear” which is a classic depiction of the sublime.  He continues with the unnerving descriptions by comparing a man to a snake shedding his slough.  Emerson uses these examples of sublime to show how all people should feel about their experiences with nature.  In this passage, Emerson is describing how twilight experienced in a treeless town square still inspires in him a profound sense of awe.”-Kat Henderson

    In each of these excerpts from midterms, one thing is repeated- change. Whether that change be the transcendence of the reader, the feeling of movement, or the profound transformation that occurs after a harrowing experience, each of the above passages is about change. So, in a way, American Romanticism could say to be obsessed with change.

Dorothy was the one who helped flesh out the idea in my head of a sublime that returns the reader or observer to a state of appreciation for their own surroundings, a change very much in line with the idea of transcendence. My short response essay used this idea as a springboard for the sublime aspects.

Velma’s description of “movement” again touches on the transcendence, but not necessarily being focused on enlightenment. Her view of movement of any kind that the sublime initiates could be seen as a transcending one was a unique interpretation, reminiscent of Ovid’s Metamorphoses. And I know how those old Romantic writers just loved their pagan gods.

Kat brings up what I like to call “big” and “little’ sublimes. So often the sublime is thought of as massive mountain ranges, huge valleys, and other wonders of nature, sprawled out to me marveled at. But Kat reminded me of the little sublimes, with the description of the treeless town square at twilight could instill just as strong a reaction as a rolling thunderhead. Romantic writers would have covered both of these phenomenon, and it also serves as a reminder not to miss the tree in front for the forest around us, again reflecting an idea of transcendence. Two for one, not bad Kat.

That I chose three passages pertaining to the sublime was no accident, as it was my favorite part of Romantic writing thus far. These three passages served as very good reminders of the directions I could take that favoritism, without it getting stale.