LITR 4232 American Renaissance 2010
Student Midterm Samples

2. Short essay (4-6 paragraphs) on 1 of 2 options (or combinations as inspired) :

  • Highlight and analyze a passage from our course readings--your best textual experience  in comprehending course contents (terms, themes, objectives, class discussion)

  • Favorite term, objective, concept in course + explanation & application to 1-2 readings

Victoria Narcisse

2b. Sublime: The Beautiful, the Terrifying, and the Ridiculous

          My favorite term thus far in American Renaissance has been sublime because it is not limited to only one way for it to be used, it can be used in many different ways. For example, there is sublime beauty in nature, sublime terror, and sublime in the ridiculous. There are many examples of this in “Rip Van Winkle”.

          For example, when Rip Van Winkle goes up to the mountains in paragraph 14, the narrator takes the time to describe the beauty of the scene through Rip Van Winkles eyes. It says “Panting and fatigued, he threw himself, late in the afternoon, on a green knoll, covered with mountain herbage that crowned the brow of a precipice. From an opening between the trees he could overlook all the lower country for many a mile of rich woodland. He saw at a distance the lordly Hudson, far, far below him, moving on its silent but majestic course, with the reflection of a purple cloud, or the sail of a lagging bark, here and there sleeping on its glassy bosom, and at last losing itself in the blue highlands.” Just the wording and the imagery alone captures your attention, draws you in, and make you imagine this wonderful, beautiful sight and takes your breath away without ever having seeing it in real life.

          On this same mountain there are aspects of it that make it a dark and foreboding place to be. In paragraph 15 there are key words and phrases that make it sublime in a terrifying way. For example, the narrator describes the scene: “deep mountain glen, wild, lonely, and shagged, the bottom filled with fragments from the impending cliffs, and scarcely lighted by the reflected rays of the setting sun. . . . evening was gradually advancing; the mountains began to throw their long blue shadows over the valleys; he saw that it would be dark long before he could reach the village, and he heaved a heavy sigh when he thought of encountering the terrors of Dame Van Winkle.”  With the scattered light that he has on the mountain in the forest, one wrong step and he could very well find himself  at the bottom of the mountain glen as a human porcupine  and if that wasn’t scary enough, after getting home he would most likely have to face the wrath of Dame Van Winkle.

          As for the ridiculous being considered as sublime, all we have to do is look at the scene of the party in the Catskill Mountains. Here, there are games and drinking but there is not a single smile on any of the faces that are partaking in this event. Liquor is being distributed and being imbibed but not a single one has lost his inhibitions. A party is supposed to be about fun, talking, and laughter, none of that is happening here. The narrator describes this as “the most melancholy party of pleasure that [Rip] has ever witnessed.” That in its self is an oxymoron. Pleasure is supposed to bring you happiness and feelings of joy, but it just seems that these apparitions are just going through the motions. Their dress was just as ridiculous as their attitude toward the party. The narrator describes one of the gnome-like figures as “a stout old gentleman, with a weather-beaten countenance; he wore a laced doublet, broad belt and hanger, high-crowned hat and feather, red stockings, and high-heeled shoes, with roses in them” (par.18).  From this description, it is just plain laugh out loud funny. But with further reading we see that this dress was common during the time when the Dutch settled in this area. But still, red stockings and roses in their shoes? Too funny.