LITR 4232 American Renaissance 2010
Student Midterm Samples

2. Short essay (4-6 paragraphs) on 1 of 2 options (or combinations as inspired) :

  • Highlight and analyze a passage from our course readings--your best textual experience  in comprehending course contents (terms, themes, objectives, class discussion)

  • Favorite term, objective, concept in course + explanation & application to 1-2 readings

Velma Laborde

Passage Analysis:  The Woman of Sleepy Hollow

          This short essay will focus on the following passage from Washington Irving's The Legend of Sleepy Hollow:

"All these, however were mere terrors of the night, phantoms of the mind that walk in darkness; and though he had seen many specters in his time, and been more than once beset by Satan in divers shapes, in his lonely perambulations, yet daylight put an end to all those evils; and he would have passed a pleasant life of it, in despite of the Devil and all his works, if his path had not been crossed by a being that causes more perplexity to mortal man than ghosts, goblins, and the whole race of witches put together, and that was - a woman.

This passage is significant it is a good example of the gothic and the sublime; romantic terms that were commonly used during the American Renaissance.  It is also important because of its connection to the paragraph before it and the one following it.  In the previous paragraph Ichabod's walk through the woods is described and in the following Katrina Van Tassel is introduced.  These paragraphs not only use the gothic and sublime to describe specific things like the woods and Katrina, but it lends the gothic and sublime to the bigger issues facing America during this time period such as, the women's movement and the beginning shift from the ideal country life toward the new modern society.  America is like a woman: scary, changing and caught between the past and the future.  Similarly, the woods, an otherwise common place of refuge, solitude and beauty change into something sinister and scary like the old country opposed to modern society.

          The entire passage could be described as gothic and sublime.  In the previous paragraph (18) he describes the woods using gothic language like, "fearful shapes and shadows beset his path" and the "dim and ghastly glare of a snowy night."  The darkness, shadows, and glare in the woods are all gothic images.  He describes the "trembling ray of light streaming across the waste fields from some distant window!"  Even the light is in fear of the darkness.  He uses extreme words in his description of the woods and of the feelings it elicits are sublime; "waste fields," "curdling awe," and "complete dismay."  Yet, in paragraph 19, the horror and terror of the woods is completely pushed aside by the even more horrific woman.  The happenings in the woods are "mere terrors of the night."  They are still scary, but only "mere" compared to a woman.  The shapes and shadows in the woods are, "phantoms of the mind that walk in darkness."  These are all gothic and sublime images.  Darkness is full of terror and phantoms walk there in your mind.  Yet, it is still less fearful than a woman because "daylight put an end to all these evils."  The contrast between light and dark is an example of the gothic.  The images of extreme terror that are contrasted with the beautiful language of the passage are examples of the sublime.  All of these gothic and sublime examples are romantic because they push the image of the woods and of women to a transcendent place; a place beyond what is considered normal and real.  The woods and even the devil himself, as scary as they are, are no match for Katrina. 

          Katrina is described as a "being."  That one word is gothic, sublime and transcendent.  She is not even a person; she is something else that does not have a word.  She is a thing "that causes more perplexity to mortal man than ghosts, goblins, and the whole race of witches put together."  "Mortal" is man, but she is a "being."  The ghosts, goblins and witches are gothic.  The entire line is sublime because the "perplexity" she causes is beyond all of those mystical things "put together."  All of it transcends what is real and puts Katrina, as a woman, beyond any concrete understanding.  In paragraph 20, it becomes clear why Katrina, a woman, is described in such a fantastic and scary manner.

          Here is where she becomes the symbol of America.  She is fresh and beautiful, "plump as a partridge; ripe and melting and rosy-cheeked."  Her description does not seem so scary at first.  However, the subtle element of the sublime appears as the description goes on.  She is "a little of a coquette," and the way she is dressed "was a mixture of ancient and modern fashions, most suited to set off her charms."  She is tempting and alluring, which can be beautiful but also scary.  The words chosen in this description "coquette," "ancient," and "charms" are all gothic.  The "ornaments" she wears are old from her great-great-grandmother, and her bodice was from the "olden time", yet this is contrasted with the "provokingly short petticoat," which represents the new and modern.  She is full of the old world charm but a scary temptress because of her new modern ways.  Katrina is a contradiction between the old and the new America.

          America is moving from the beauty and safety of the country to the tempting and alluring modern world.  Earlier in paragraph 17, the women are sitting around chatting and they are mentioning the "marvelous tales of ghosts and goblins."  The old forms of folklore are described as "marvelous" and a "delight."  But when the conversation shifts to more modern thinking it is described with words like, "alarming" and that they were "woefully" frightened by it.  These few paragraphs underscore the ideal notion of a beautiful old country America contrasted with the new scary modern America that is taking shape.  The woman is chosen as the symbol of America's change because this is the time of the woman's movement and she, along with the landscape, way of life, and way of thinking, are moving in a direction that is scary and beyond understanding.  Not all of America is ready.