LITR 4328:
American Renaissance
        

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Final Exam Essays 2018
(final exam assignment)

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B: poetry & styles of Poe, Whitman, and Dickinson

 

Calyssa Rosene

They’ve Got Style: A Discussion on the Differences of Poe, Dickinson, and Whitman

          According to the course website, style in a literary definition is the manner of expression characteristic of a particular writer, or of a literary group or period. When one thinks of Edgar Allan Poe, we think of dark tales such as The Raven or even The Tell-Tale Heart, works that can be told as a spooky story around Halloween or around a campfire late at night to frighten some of the children. Emily Dickinson often wrote melancholy poetry that depicted narrators experiencing bouts of sadness, depression, or even madness. Finally, Walt Whitman wrote works that no one in his time had seen before, and he was a pioneer of American literature as he experimented with styles and topics that no one had yet touched. All of these writers have differences within their personal styles; however, all of them paved the way for writers ahead of their time and provided great examples of what a creative mind can accomplish.

Edgar Allan Poe focused on writing primarily in formal verse as well as writing in a lyrical verse at times. Not at all surprising, Poe has always focused on the gothic elements that lie within romanticism, and most of his poems surround the reader with darkness, startling sounds, and even death. This is why his poem The City in the Sea is quite easy to pinpoint as his work. The first line contains “Death has reared himself a throne”, and envelopes the reader in the dark setting about this city that has been engulfed by hell. Poe’s formal verse style ends almost every line of the poem with a rhyme scheme, with pairs such as town and down, to graves and waves. His musical like writing is easy to spot along with his usual rhyme schemes. His romance narrative focuses primarily on desire and loss. The ending of this poem, along with many others written by Poe, end with a note of darkness as he writes “And when, amid no earthly moans, down, down that town shall settle hence, Hell, rising from a thousand thrones, shall do it reverence”. This darkness produces a great amount of imagery for the reader, as through those lines we can imagine the city settling as the bottom of a dark pit while hell surrounds it. Through his rhyme schemes, his work is usually easy to memorize which appeals to the reader.

Walt Whitman was one of the original great-American poets to write using free verse, discussing topics that we see in every day life and focusing primarily on the realism of the world versus the romanticism, although he does show elements of the romantic within his writing. Compared to Poe, Whitman’s style is the very opposite of all that Poe encompassed. Whitman threw out the old-time rhyme scheme that scholars grew to be familiar with, and he took everyday objects and people and turned them into something of beauty within his poetry which is not always a simple task. While Poe focuses on the dark imagery of the gothic, Whitman wrote with sexually suggestive imagery as well as used identification and inclusiveness. In his poem When I Heard the Learn’d Astronomer, the first four lines contain a repetitive element as the word ‘when’ begins each new line back to back. If we split the poem in half, we can read the first four lines as the Astronomer, and the last four as Whitman, the student. The idea of the repetitiveness of the astronomer allows the reader to understand the dull speech of his, before we transition into the colorful dialogue of Whitman in the second half. He writes “I wander'd off by myself, in the mystical moist night-air, and from time to time, look'd up in perfect silence at the stars”, as the student has walked away and began his own fascination with the stars. Alisha Blue said something that describes Walt’s writing in perfection as she writes, “The beauty in Whitman’s writing, and specifically this poem, portrays the very essence of his style: the need for imperfection in art, and how to not question it, but appreciate it”. I truly believe that was Whitman’s goal in his work, to allow the reader to stop thinking about the idea of beauty and start appreciating what was in front of them.

When we admire the work of Emily Dickinson, there is a lot to be said. Most of her work accounts the life of a sad narrator, or someone struggling through a difficult time as she writes multiple metaphors on the idea and action of death. According to the course website, Dickinson wrote with a formal base, but informal, or free verse stanzas. Like Poe, she dabbled in the gothic variation of romanticism quite often, using characteristics from the gothic such as a contrast of light and darkness, death, and mysterious or startling sounds. She never relied on a rhyme scheme along with Whitman, but occasionally you could see the rare rhyme in her work. She also had a habit of leaving the endings of her work as open-ended, which led the reader to have to analyze the work with their own thoughts and create an ending of their own. This open-ended habit only added to Dickinson’s mystery as a writer. In the poem I Heard a Fly Buzz When I Died, the usage of dashes is strong as there is 13 dashes used within the 16 lines of the work. The dashes in her poetry are often used to signal a change in the rhythm or a pause, changing meanings with each new dash that is issued. Her use of the gothic characteristic can be seen as she talks about death within the first line of the poem. She writes, “I heard a fly buzzwhen I diedThe stillness in the Room was like the Stillness in the airBetween the Heaves of Storm”. The stillness can also be perceived as the gothic as stillness can often times be uncomfortable or eerie.

Between Poe, Dickinson, and Whitman, I believe that Dickinson and Poe are closely related in their writing based on their use of the gothic, but that Dickinson and Whitman are closely related based on their personal writing style as they both refrain from sticking to any type of rhyming scheme. However, while they have similarities, they are all three still vastly different from one another based on what topics they focus on. I have always associated creepy stories to the works of Poe, while I have associated tales of struggles with mental illness to the works of Dickinson. Much to my surprise, I never encountered much work by Whitman until the beginning of this course and seeing as he is revered as one of the greatest American poets, I feel as though his work should be sampled through literature courses more frequently.

It is important to understand the differences of each poet, not only to understand the depths of their work, but to appreciate it. It is also important to see the similarities between works, because if you can understand the depth of the metaphors from Dickinson, you can decipher the usage of them in the work of Whitman or Poe. It isn’t a matter of choosing which sub-genre you enjoy more. For example, I highly enjoy the gothic and everything it is composed of, but I can see why Whitman is put on such a literature pedestal. There are so many points of interest that one needs to discover within each author to see the importance of each piece of work. When you look at Poe, Dickinson, and Whitman in this order, you can see the transition from a strict and rhyming formal verse, onto a more lenient free verse with formal tendencies, and finally stopping at the usage of a pure form of free verse. From the naked eye, you may not be able to locate many differences or similarities when you are plainly looking at the work of each author, but once you look up close and take the time to analyze them, you will find that many work in romanticism or the romantic period are intertwine, and it is important to see that.