LITR 4328:
American Renaissance
        

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Final Exam Essays 2018
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B: poetry & styles of Poe, Whitman, and Dickinson

 

Rudy Rios

Poe, Whitman, and Dickinson: Exemplars of American Lyric Poetry.

Three poets stand out as exemplars of American literature during the Renaissance period.  Their styles beg examination.  They are Walt Whitman, Emily Dickinson, and Edgar Allan Poe.  Their work bears examination, because each of their styles is unique.  This essay will examine how their styles compare, by looking at the authors’ lyric poetry. 

Let us first consider the term lyric poetry.  Homer’s epic poems are among some of the first works to be considered lyric poetry.  In Greek, the poems lend themselves to singing.  Although they are not quite ballads, they are metered and structured in a way that defines the essence of lyric poems.  American Renaissance authors, then, follow in a tradition of poetry rooted in antiquity.  According to Doctor White’s course site, the poems written by the aforementioned authors are full of imagery, sensory descriptions, and “Subjective feelings.”  Lyric poetry lends itself to Romanticism in that it dives into nature, the gothic, and the sublime.  It pursues the desire of the heart, or the darkness of a cluttered mind, while staying within the bounds of lyric poetry.  Poe is a poet whose love for form, imagination, and macabre fits well in the category of lyrical poet.

Poe is an author in whom the idea of too much comes often into the mind of the reader.  His poem, “The City by the Sea,” pulls the reader into a setting of overwhelming excess: “Lo! Death has reared himself a throne” (1.1), “Where the good and the bad and the worst and the best/Have gone to their eternal rest” (1.4-1.5), “There open fanes and gaping graves” (3,1).  These are but a few examples of Poe’s use of extremes.  Specifically, the good, bad, worst, and best are all crammed together in one lyric line.  Yet, in spite of this excess, Poe conforms to formal verse.  He maintains rhyme throughout the poem, varying only in pattern.  The formality and loquacity of Poe’s work stands in contrast to the works of Dickinson and Whitman, whose works tend to be compact, though loaded with imagery.   Poe does not surprise the reader with odd rhyme or untended form.  Rather, he, like the classic French writing, tends to over-describe the elements in “The City in the Sea.”  He is a romantic writer.  Karin Cooper, in her essay, “American Renaissance Poetry: A Comparative Examination of Poe, Dickinson, and Whitman”  says that, “…Poe is classic romanticism. With Poe, you are never in the present realistic moment.”  This opinion and my own correspond with the definition of American Renaissance lyric poetry.  

Emily Dickinson is in that fair middle-ground between the formality of Poe’s poems and the father of American Free-verse poetry Walt Whitman’s.  “I heard a Fly Buzz When I Died” is an example of the poetry that is lyric and free.  Consisting of only sixteen lines, the poem shows Dickinson’s love of imagery, but it also shows her lack of care in form.  Some scholars have attributed this imprecision in form to her homebody tendencies and her lack of editorial exposure.  As a result, Dickinson tends to capitalize nouns, mid-sentence, and she uses hyphens at the ends of nearly every line.  Her rhyme is almost nonexistent, relying on the last stanza for lyrical impact.  Her style is, nonetheless, Romantic and Gothic.  Sarah Hurt, in her essay, “Lyrical Poetry with Poe, Whitman, and Dickinson,” says, “…Dickinson lends more to a mystical or “ephemeral” [sic] (Dickinson Style Page) than the straight out [sic] gothic style of Poe.”  So, Dickinson shows the form of Poe and the free verse of Whitman. 

The poet who set loose free-verse upon the world, like the deluge of old, is Walt Whitman.  “When I Heard the Learn’d Astronomer,” is a model of wit and brevity.  Whitman writes here with no formal structure.  Unlike Poe, Whitman seems unbound from the conventions of the poetry of others that wrote before him.  This work speaks of the tiresome and sick work of exact science (5), and juxtaposes it to the, “… perfect silence …” of the stars.  The poem only quietly suggests lyrical style but shouts of the glory of nature over science.  The anaphoretic structure of the first four scientific lines are abandoned by the disarray of the last four.  Ronnie Abshier, in her essay, “Different Styles in romantic Poetry,” says, “Whitman also uses parallelism in this poem as well, developing line 2 in the same way as line 5 by reconfirming his meaning within the commas of the text.”  One can see that Whitman uses rhyming thought to convey his meaning, as opposed to using the strictures of formal verse.  Whitman’s use of beautiful imagery romanticizes the disappointment of scientific form by moving the reader from the lecture to the sublimity of nature.

From the formality of Poe, to the freedom of Whitman, and the middle ground provided by Dickinson, one can see the advent of American lyric poetry.  Each of these exemplars of poetic genius have different styles.  They plow the ground ceded unto them by their British kin and grow a renaissance.  Each of them gives readers, glimpses of the sublime and the transcendent.  They press their words into forms, they explode their words into an endless sky, and they keep their feet on the ground.