LITR 4328:
American Renaissance
        

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Final Exam Essays 2018
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B: poetry & styles of Poe, Whitman, and Dickinson

 

Anne Ngo

The Distinct Styles of Poe, Dickinson, and Whitman

          Edgar Allan Poe, Emily Dickinson, and Walt Whitman represent the notable poets from the American Romantic era. Each poet has their own distinct style, allowing their poetry to be recognizable just by examining its characteristics. For example, Poe is the most formal out of the three, working with fixed forms and regular rhymes and rhythms. Meanwhile, Emily Dickinson incorporates both formal and free verse in her poetry, using some fixed form, but no regular rhymes or meter. On the other hand, Whitman writes almost exclusively in free verse, consisting of no fixed forms, rhymes, or regular meter. However, despite the different styles, each poet uses romantic features in their own ways.

          Poe’s “The City in the Sea” features the characteristics of formal verse. The poem consists of four stanzas and a fixed rhyme and rhythm, indicating that the text is formal. Its rhyme scheme and rhythm contribute to the poem’s musicality, a characteristic of Poe’s personal style. For instance, the meter and rhyme in “But light from out the lurid sea / Streams up the turrets silently” create a musical effect to the poem (2.3-2.4).

Furthermore, Poe’s use of alliteration, such as “The viol, the violet, and the vine,” also signifies poetic sounds and musicality of his work. As Alisha Blue writes in her essay, “Poetry in the American Renaissance,” the poem’s form “allows for a reading of sing-songy lines” that can be “told like a folktale or story.” Similarly, compared to Dickinson and Whitman, Poe’s use of musicality is distinct to his style. And the musicality of his poetry allows readers to recite his poems from memory, more so than the works of other poets.

In addition, Poe presents a common subject matter in his works: the gothic style. More specifically, he uses the gothic through the “Babylon-like walls” and “shadowy long-forgotten bowers” of a seemingly ancient ruin under the sea (2.7-2.8). Furthermore, the “turrets,” “kingly halls,” and “Babylon-like walls” are reminiscent of a romantic image of a castle, indicating the romantic aspects of the poem (2.4-2.7).

          Meanwhile, Dickinson’s “I heard a fly buzz when I died” uses aspects of both formal and free verse. The poem’s formal elements include a characteristic of her personal style— the use of quatrains throughout the piece. In addition, the poem features some rhymes, hinting at its formal verse. The slant rhyme in “Room” and “Storm” and the true rhyme in “Me” and “See” illuminate the few rhymes that Dickinson includes in the poem (2-4; 14-16).

However, she incorporates elements of free verse to her poetry, such as the ability to create odd juxtapositions in the poem. For example, in the line, “And then the windows failed,” she juxtaposes “windows” and “failed” to create an uncommon pairing (15). Compared to Poe’s formal poetry, these juxtapositions are characteristic to Dickinson’s personal style, showing that the free verse in her poetry allows her to create seemingly odd pairings.

Furthermore, the subject matter of the poem, death, is characteristic of Dickinson’s style. The use of everyday items, like a window, symbolizes the romantic’s “spiritual and mystical dimensions of everyday life” (Comparative Study of Poe, Whitman, Dickinson: Course Webpage). Therefore, when the “window failed” to gather no more “light,” the poem suddenly ends with the narrator not being able to “see” (14-16). The abrupt ending suggests the mysterious dimension, death, that Dickinson commonly uses as her subject matter. Thus, Dickinson incorporates elements of both formal and free verses, different to Poe’s mostly formal style.

          Compared to Poe and Dickinson, Whitman writes almost exclusively in free verse. As seen in his poem, “When I Heard the Learn’d Astronomer,” there is no fixed rhyme or form. Furthermore, the poem features a characteristic of his personal style: the anaphora. For example, the first four lines start with the word, “When,” creating balance to the poem, especially when comparing to the last four lines (1-4).

          Additionally, the use of catalog appears in the poem, an indicator of Whitman’s style. He writes: “the proofs, the figures, were ranged in columns before me; / . . . I was shown the charts and the diagrams, to add, divide, and measure them” (2-3). Listing the data, figures, and charts suggest an overwhelming feeling for the narrator, becoming “tired and sick” soon after (5). Thus, unlike Poe and Dickinson’s styles, the use of catalog is distinctive to Whitman’s.

          In comparison to the other two poets, the subject matter of Whitman’s poem deals with an aspect of everyday life: an astronomy lecture. The poem’s subject matter reflects the everyday, romantic image of the narrator, looking “up in perfect silence at the stars” (8).

          Thus, each poet is different from one another: Poe writes formally, Dickinson incorporates both formal and free verses, and Whitman uses free verse in his poetry. However, despite their different styles, Poe, Dickinson, and Whitman all reflect the characteristics of Romantic literature, particularly in the romantic themes oftheir subject matter. It shows the vast range of styles that Romanticism encompasses in the American Renaissance.