LITR 4328:
American Renaissance
        

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Final Exam Essays 2018
(final exam assignment)

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B: poetry & styles of Poe, Whitman, and Dickinson

 

Lauren Kruse

Poets of the American Renaissance

          Among the most recognized American poets, especially of the American Renaissance, or Romantic Era, are Edgar Allan Poe, Emily Dickinson and Walt Whitman.  With each one bringing their own unique styles and forms, they left many works to be enjoyed and studied for generations to come.  While I was not very familiar with these authors at the start of the semester, I soon began to recognize elements unique to each; such as Poe’s attraction to the gothic, Dickinson’s often ambiguous meaning and Whitman’s fascination with nature.  In the following, I will explore several poems (The City in the Sea – Poe, I Heard a Fly Buzz, When I Died – Dickinson, When I Heard the Learn’d Astronomer – Whitman) and how each one reflects the author’s style. Also addressed, are the technical aspects of each poet, such as their use of form, rhyme and meter.

          Poe is possibly the most identifiable of all the poets.  Per his constant fascination with the gothic, Poe immediately goes to images of death and despair in The City in the Sea, “Lo! Death has reared himself a throne / In a strange city lying alone…” He goes on to describe the chilling scene through his use of Romantic rhetoric, employing superlatives to provide imagery, ever in excess.  Visions of the “lurid sea,” “Babylon-like walls,” “gaping graves,” and “luminous waves,” are a common occurrence among the works of Poe.  Relying on the macabre and gothic, Poe leaves his readers with vivid images floating through their imaginations, yet instead of warm content, he leaves a certain chill in the air. 

          Similar to Poe, Dickinson writes often of death, yet through her own unique approach to poetry.  While Poe writes in great detail, leaving a vivid image, Dickinson’s works are often short and fairly ambiguous.  One is never quite sure of her intended meaning, which is perhaps why so many find her fascinating.  Between the little known biographical information of Dickinson, and her short lifespan, there are few resources available to provide any hints as to her intended meaning.  I Heard a Fly Buzz, When I Died approaches the matter of death even in the title, describing the view as one who lies dying surrounded by grieving onlookers and ending with the somber lines, “And then the windows failed – and then / I could not see to see.” However, before death calls sight away, Dickinson interposes a blue, buzzing fly between the failing eyes and the light of the window, leaving a somber moment devoid of final peace.

          Compared to the dark, ambiguous and perhaps confusing tensions of Poe and Dickinson, Whitman’s work was the most enjoyable for me to read.  Often seeming more like prose than poetry, Whitman focuses on images of nature; reveling in the peace of the outdoors and the beauty of simplicity.  Combining elements of Realism and Romanticism, When I Heard the Learn’d Astronomer, tells of a man listening to an astronomer.  As he tires hearing of proofs, figures and charts, the man wanders outside to simply watch and enjoy the beauty of the stars above.  Thus, moving from the analytical facts of Realism, into the mystery of the Romantic.  Whitman’s enjoyment of nature and the simpler things leaves the reader pondering the deeper meanings of life, while providing a comfortable air to do so.

          The technical side of each poet varies, as Poe is by far the most formal of the three, and Whitman is the most relaxed.  As noted by Diane Alonzo in her essay The MVPs of Poetry, “[Poe’s] ballad-like formal verse, that makes his poetry musical, is seen by his use of fixed meter and rhyme.” Throughout The City in the Sea, and in many of his works, Poe uses a semi-regular rhyme-scheme, such as the A-A, B-B, or A-B, A-B, allowing the words to flow along the page.  Dickinson uses formal verse techniques, interspersed with free verse, as her words do not always have an obvious rhyme or meter.  For example, I Heard a Fly Buzz, When I Died offers little rhyme at the beginning and falls into a more formal pattern in the final lines.  Whitman could easily be mistaken for a writer of Romantic prose, as he wrote almost exclusively in free verse.  Whitman’s use of anaphora in When I Heard the Learn’d Astronomer, helps identify him as a poet, if not already known by the reader. “When I heard…/ When the proofs…/ When I was shown…/ When I, sitting…” here, each successive phrase builds the tension of a man frustrated with reality, seeking inner peace found in the simplicity of nature.

          Throughout this course I have come to appreciate the works of these three poets, while becoming more familiar with their unique styles.  While the poetry of Poe is full of despair and gloom, he is an excellent study on the use of the gothic themes, Romantic rhetoric, and vivid depictions.  Dickinson displays the ambiguity found among great poets, allowing her readers to develop their own understandings, while also experimenting with rhyme and meter.  Lastly, as my personal favorite to read, Whitman wrote of reality, while offering the hopes and dreams of the Romantic; reminding his readers that life is not merely facts and figures, but that there is a space for simple awe.  Overall, each Poet brought their individual strengths to the page, leaving the literary world just a bit richer.