LITR 4328:
American Renaissance
        

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Final Exam Essays 2018
(final exam assignment)

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B: poetry & styles of Poe, Whitman, and Dickinson

 

Cynthia Cleveland

Varying Styles of American Renaissance Poetry

          Poetry can be a tricky genre, as it is often governed by rather rigid and confining rules regarding composition. However, every poet has a particular style that makes it easier to differentiate between them. Poe is known for composing poems that are often Gothic in subject and possessing a rigid, lyrical form. Dickinson is known to be less traditional, and only slightly adheres to established traditions of composition—such as her adherence to meter. Whereas Walt Whitman’s has essentially thrown out most notions concerning traditional composition and composes his poetry in whatever way suits his subject matter. In any case, each poet possesses a distinct flavor concerning their poetry, which may be distinguished by examining those essential elements of poetry—themes, styles, and forms.

          “The City in the Sea” is undeniably a composition by Edgar Allan Poe. The most obvious characteristic of any of Poe’s poems is the Romantic and Gothic style. The Gothic style of Poe’s poem is in the subject matter and the language—the poem itself is about a city that has been swallowed by the sea, only perceptible by the “open fanes and gaping graves / Yawn level with the luminous waves.” This particular style also lends itself to the sublime, which is yet another characteristic of Poe’s literary style. This use of the sublime is Romantic in style as well, as it presents the reader with a certain awe of nature. The sublime lies in the horror that a once beautiful city, with its “Babylon-like walls” and “bowers / Of sculptured ivy and stone flowers” could be so overcome by the depthless ocean. Another particularly interesting way to identify Poe’s romantic qualities is to consider the architecture that he chooses for his poems and prose, as Ronnie Abshier writes in her essay “Different Styles in Romantic Poetry”. Poe refers to towers and palaces which, Abshier notes, are not typical of American architecture. This is romantic in nature as it is an idealization of the past. This is an image that inspires awe as well as terror. Poe’s poem is also identifiable in its adherence to formal verse; it possesses a consistent rhyme scheme and meter with minor variations and maintains a rather rigid structure, giving it a distinct lyrical quality.

          Emily Dickinson’s poems on the other hand are slightly less rigid but maintain a semi-formal style of verse.” [I heard a fly buzz when I died]” is a good example of the fluid nature of Dickinson’s adherence to poetic form; its overall structure is rigid, as it is divided into four quatrains. The poem does not possess any particular rhyme scheme, but it possesses a very controlled meter, which is typical of Dickinson’s poems as she often composes lyric poetry. Each quatrain follows a pattern in which there are 8/6/8/6 beats per line, respectively. Another particular way of identifying Dickinson’s poetry is her use of em dashes throughout the poem, which contributes to the lyrical quality of her poetry, as it creates stoppages and emphasis on particular words. The subject matter of Dickinson’s poems is often identifiable as they deal with themes of death; another good example of this is her poem “[I felt a funeral in my brain]”, in which she describes a funeral, as the working title alludes.

          Walt Whitman’s poems often depict every day scenery that most people would often gloss over, and yet he brings a certain appreciation for that of the seemingly mundane. “When I Heard the Learn’d Astronomer” is a poem that is rather romantic in nature, as it describes a seemingly mundane activity—such as attending a lecture—in which the poet becomes weary of the talk of “proofs, the figures” and seeks to find himself out of doors “In the mystical moist night-air” to look up “in perfect silence at the stars.” This is romantic in its escape from society and his ability to find repose in nature. The style of this poem is also undoubtedly Whitman, as he uses several literary devices that are particularly characteristic of his poetry; one of these devices is his use of anaphora—which can be seen in the first four lines all of which begin with “When”. Another characteristic of Whitman’s poetry is his use of listing, which is present in line two and three of the poem: “the proofs, the figures”; “When I was shown the charts and the diagrams, to add, divide, and measure them.” These devices may also be found in any number of his poems, such as “I Sing the Body Electric”, there is more of the anaphora present and listing.

          Each of these poets have a distinct style and it would be difficult to confuse them. The subject matter of Poe and Dickinson are fairly similar, as they both deal heavily in themes of death and have a Gothic style. However, what distinguishes them from one another is their form and structure. Poe’s poems tend to be much longer and maintain a rigid form—they adhere to an established rhyme scheme. Dickinson’s poems, in contrast, often have no established rhyme scheme—and if they do, they are very loose rhymes—but maintain a lyrical meter with a lot of stoppages (em dashes). The most distinct poet of these three is Walt Whitman, as he does not follow any rhyme schemes and the structure of his poems are rather fluid. Whitman writes in free verse, which breaks those traditional rules governing the composition of poetry. This is why Whitman’s lines are often uneven and inconsistent, but the fact that he uses less formal verse and common language makes the poem incredibly easy to read.

          Each poet has their own particular style and characteristics regarding the composition of their poems. Some of their characteristics are similar to one another, but examination of their form, style and themes make it easy to differentiate between them. The themes of Poe and Dickinson tend to be similar, but examination of their execution creates a distinction: Dickinson’s poems are short, clipped and semi-formal; Poe’s are long, rigid and formal in verse; and Whitman is in another universe entirely.