LITR 4328
American Renaissance
        

Final Exam Essays 2015
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Elizabeth Myers

The Lyrical Attributes of Poe, Dickinson, and Whitman

          A significant aspect of Dr. White’s American Renaissance course has been the study of lyric poetry. As discussed in Dr. White’s notes and lectures, lyric poetry is a popular genre of poetry, and one regularly described when individuals discuss “poetry.” Lyric poetry is frequently recognized due to it remaining a prominent art form throughout history since its emergence in antiquity. Lyric poems are primarily a subjective form of expression because they “. . . are usually short verbal expressions . . .” of “simple or mixed” emotions that were originally sung in ancient times “before writing became widespread . . .” (White, “Lyric Poem”). This form of poetry maintains its historical musical connection in modern times due to lyric poems still demonstrating musical qualities, like rhythm, melodies, and rhymes even when read silently or aloud and with contemporary songs being examples of lyric poetry (White, “Lyric Poem”). Moreover, the popularity of lyric poetry is due in part to how it appeals to readers and listeners. Individuals enjoy lyric poetry because of its intensive and impulsive nature, evocative imagery, and the poems’ words and structures creating a musical ambiance (White, “Lyric Poem”). Edgar Allan Poe, Emily Dickinson, and Walt Whitman are three American Renaissance writers who wrote lyrical poetry that continues to resonate with readers. Poe, Dickinson, and Whitman’s lyrical poetry demonstrate the unique approaches each took when creating their literary works.

          Due to the distinctive topics and writing characteristics associated with each of the three aforementioned authors, it is easy for readers to differentiate between the writers when reading one of their lyric poems. For example, out of Edgar Allan Poe, Emily Dickinson, and Walt Whitman, Poe’s poems are the “most formal and musical or lyrical” due to his poetry’s “traditional or fixed verse forms . . .” (White, “Comparative Study of Poe, Whitman, Dickinson”). Poe’s use of fixed verse forms would cause his poetry to have consistent rhymes and meters, which emphasize his poems’ musicality for readers. In addition to Poe’s use of fixed verse, his subject matter also distinguishes him from Dickinson and Whitman in that he primarily focuses on dark topics that align with Romanticism’s gothic themes such as death, horror, and the juxtaposition of desire and loss (White, “Comparative Study of Poe, Whitman, Dickinson”; “Poe Style Guide”). Moreover, Emily Dickinson is similar to Poe in that she too utilizes formal verse in her poetry, but she also differs from him because of her using an informal, free verse form in some of her other poems as well (White, “Comparative Study of Poe, Whitman, Dickinson”). Dickinson’s free verse is categorized by her use of “improvised punctuation, line shifts, half-rhymes or off-rhymes” (White, “Comparative Study of Poe, Whitman, Dickinson”). The subject matter in Dickinson’s poems include gothic elements of Romanticism like death, the significance of domesticity, and a transcendentalist-like mystical view of nature, household settings, and ordinary life occasions (White, “Comparative Study of Poe, Whitman, Dickinson”; White, “Dickinson Style Guide”).

Unlike Poe and Dickinson, Walt Whitman is the “least formal” of the three American Renaissance writers due to his predominant use of free verse in his poetry (White, “Comparative Study of Poe, Whitman, Dickinson”). Although Whitman writes in free verse, his poetry still utilizes poetic conventions such as alliteration, anaphora, and “occasional or interior rhymes” (White, “Comparative Study of Poe, Whitman, Dickinson”; White, “Whitman Style Guide”). All of these poetic conventions can influence his poems’ lyrical natures. Furthermore, the subjects in Whitman’s poetry may include a celebration of everyday life and the individual and discussions about the changes occurring in how people connect to nature, the universe, and other individuals (White, “Comparative Study of Poe, Whitman, Dickinson”; White, “Whitman Style Guide”). Similarly to Poe and Dickinson, Whitman’s poetry has aspects of Romanticism like the importance of nature and the adoration for individualism, while also differing from the other two poets due to his poems including significant features of Realism such as his “. . . attention to city life . . .” and the realistic particulars of human life (White, “Comparative Study of Poe, Whitman, Dickinson”). Whitman’s use of Realism within his poems resonates with readers because they can relate with his subject matter.                            

By reflecting on the poetry of Poe, Dickinson, and Whitman, readers can gain a greater understanding on how these poets’ works conform to the conventions of lyrical poetry. Poe’s poem, “The City in the Sea,” is an example of a lyrical poem because of his descriptive words invoking an intense and mystical vision of death ruling over a silent foreboding city of the dead. Poe states in stanza one that death “has reared himself a throne/ In a strange city lying alone” where all individuals no matter the depth of their morality reside eternally once they die (1.1-1.5). In addition to Poe’s powerful diction aligning with lyrical poetry’s imaginative use of words, his poem utilizes a formal verse form that promotes a lyrical rhythm when read aloud or silently. For instance, most of Poe’s stanzas are arranged in deliberate end-rhymes as is seen in the aforementioned stanza one lines discussed previously. Moreover, Poe’s use of anaphora, alliteration, and parallelism further provides a lyrical rhythm within his poem. In stanza two, Poe uses anaphora and parallelism when he describes how the light from the sea creeps “up domes-up spires-up kingly halls-/ Up fanes-up Babylon-like walls-” (2.6-2.7). Alliteration is also seen in stanza two in the line “The viol, the violet, and the vine” (2.12). Besides the poem’s musical nature, “The City in the Sea’s” theme of death, darkness, and horror aligns with both the gothic characteristic of Romanticism, and Poe’s other poems such as “The Raven.”

Emily Dickinson’s poem, “I heard a fly buzz, when I died,” is another example of a lyrical poem. Similarly to Poe’s “The City in the Sea,” Dickinson’s poem is predominately an example of formal verse in poetry and is written in an English ballad form. “I heard a fly buzz, when I Died” is written in four line quatrains with every alternating line being iambic tetrameter or iambic trimeter. Dickinson’s use of formal iambic meter produces a resonating lyrical rhythm within her poem. Differing from Poe, Dickinson does not use a vast number of end-rhymes in her poem. In fact, Dickinson only uses one end-rhyme, and that is in her last quatrain. This is seen when the narrator states in the last quatrain “Between the light-and me-” and “I could not see to see-” (14 & 16). Although Dickinson does not have a definite rhyming rhyme scheme in her poem, she does have some internal rhymes such as “. . . me be” and slant-rhymes like “. . . Room” and “. . . Storm-” within her poem (2-10). “I heard a fly buzz, when I died” not having a definite end-rhyme rhyme scheme, but utilizing iambic meters, natural sounding internal rhymes, and slant-rhymes, illustrates Dickinson’s incredible writing skill, and it is reminiscent of modern writers. Moreover, Dickinson’s poem has another similarity to Poe’s “The City in the Sea” because her poem also aligns with how lyrical poetry provides readers with intense experiences. Like Poe’s poem, Dickinson’s poem includes a gothic element reminiscent of Romanticism. Despite her poem being much more concise than Poe’s poem, Dickinson’s words give readers an intense view of what death looks and feels like. Dickinson accurately depicts an individual’s last moments surrounded by her bereaved family members. The narrator’s thoughts interposed with dashes emphasizes how her thought process is deteriorating the closer to death that she becomes, and the last dash placed at the end of the last line symbolizes the narrator’s death. “I heard a fly buzz, when I died” is an example of how a lyrical poem’s imagery, rhythm, and intensity can leave a lasting impression for readers.                   

          Walt Whitman’s poem, “When I Heard the Learn’d Astronomer,” has several similarities to Poe’s and Dickinson’s previously discussed poems. Whitman’s free verse poem is another example of a lyrical poem. Like Dickinson, Whitman’s work is a concise example of lyrical poetry. Whitman carefully chose his words when writing his work, and this causes the poem to give an intense description of a man who undergoes a transcendental experience. The narrator in the poem succinctly describes how he overcomes his disappointment in an astronomer’s lecture when he went out and “Look’d up in perfect silence at the stars” (8). Whitman’s words illustrate the value Romanticism places in nature and how nature can teach individuals truths about the universe far better than men can. Like Poe, Whitman’s use of anaphora and parallelism helps his poem have a lyrical rhythm. The first four lines of “When I Heard the Learn’d Astronomer” all begin with the word “when,” and one example of parallelism is seen in line three. The narrator states, “When I was shown the charts and the diagrams, to add, divide, and measure them;” (3). Unlike Poe and Dickinson, Whitman’s subject for his poem does not concern death, but instead focuses on human beings relation to the world around them.

          The three poems by Poe, Dickinson, and Whitman are all great examples of lyrical poetry. All three authors’ poems displayed the rhythm, intensity, and imagery associated with lyrical poems. The poems had several similarities. Poe and Dickinson both discussed death within their works, while Poe and Whitman used several of the same poetic conventions that helped increase their poems musicality. The differences in each of the poems forms and in Whitman’s subject, demonstrates how lyrical poetry could be unique expressions of authors’ thoughts and feelings. By analyzing these three poems, readers gain a greater understanding of lyrical poetry, and how each author individually approached this genre.            


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