LITR 4328:
American Renaissance
        

Final Exam Essays 2015
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B: poetry & styles of Poe, Whitman, and Dickinson

 

Karin Cooper

American Renaissance Poetry: A Comparative Examination of Poe, Dickinson, and Whitman

          Emily Dickinson, Walt Whitman, and Edgar Allan Poe are all three poets from the American Renaissance period. Each of these poets had different styles, and things that made them unique. However when comparing their work side by side there are many characteristics that can be found in common. All three poets wrote poems that are considered lyric poetry, and that is a place to start our comparison. In this essay we will look at three lyric poems from three American Renaissance poets, and see how well they fit the definition of lyric poem, while comparing them to each other.

          Poetry during the American Renaissance is termed lyric poetry. The American Renaissance does not hold the monopoly on lyric poetry, but the poems we will discuss from that period will all be lyric poems. The poems we will be examining are from Edgar Allan Poe, Emily Dickinson, and Walt Whitman. According to the course website this semester a lyric poem is what most of us think of when we think of poetry. The webpage also states that lyric poems were originally meant to be sung, but in recent times can refer to any short poems that are divided into stanzas. The course site mentions that lyric poetry often has these four features: imagery, impulsiveness, sensory beauty, and intensity. Lyric poetry romanticizes things. It lets the imagination of the poet have free reign to pursue its own pathways. Poe as a lyric poet is a great example of letting the poet's imagination pursue its own course.

          The lyric poem by Poe we are focusing on today is "The City in the Sea". Poe in "The City in the Sea" is very dramatic. One of the characteristics of Poe's poetry according to the Poe style sheet is excess. An example of a typical Poe excessive line from "The City in the Sea" is: "Where the good and the bad and the worst and the best" (Poe 1.4). For Poe there really is no gray area, no in-betweens found in Poe's work. Poe is nothing if not excessive. The extremes in Poe's poems put the reader in awe, and wonder of what is being described.  Awe, and wonder are most certainly found in this poem. This poem's imagery also places it as a lyric poem. Poe describes a beautifully sublime city that in details is full of sensory beauty. "The City in the Sea", is peppered with alliteration, rhymes, and sounds melodic when it is read aloud. Which is another feature of lyric poetry. As stated in the comparative style sheet on the course site, Poe is the most formal of the three poets we are analyzing. The formality of Poe is a characteristic which makes his poetry considered lyric poetry. As far as the brevity sometimes found in lyric poetry Poe does not use that as a way to heighten the intensity of his poetry. Poe does not need brevity to heighten the intensity of his work. Poe's descriptions are intense, and breathtaking, even though they are more lengthy than those found in the examples today from Whitman, and Dickinson. As the comparative style sheet states, Poe is classic romanticism. With Poe, you are never in the present realistic moment. Compare this to Dickinson, and Whitman who tend to have a more realistic element to their poetry, according to the Comparative style sheet. Poe requires the reader to use their imagination, and that definitely places "The City in the Sea" as a lyric poem. 

          Emily Dickinson in "(I heard a Fly Buzz When I Died)" requires less imagination than Poe's "The City in the Sea", however it is not completely realistic, and it still falls into the category of lyric poetry. Dickinson's poetry tends to be more brief, and less formal than Poe's work. Dickinson's poems often are broken up into stanzas, but do not always rhyme. The reader is more likely to find half rhymes in her work that almost tease the reader. An example of a half rhyme in "(I Heard a Fly Buzz When I Died)" is here: " The stillness in the Room/ Was like the Stillness in the air—/ Between the Heaves of Storm—" (Dickinson 1.2-4). Room and storm almost rhyme, but it is not quite there, this is a typical thing to find in Dickinson poetry. In this entire poem there is actually only one true rhyme in her four line stanzas. Her style really places her in right in between Whitman, and Poe as far as formality. Poe being very formal, and Whitman being much less formal.  Dickinson, like Whitman is more brief in her writing. The lyric course site mentions brevity as one of the ways to make a lyric poem more intense. When you read Dickinson you have to focus to follow what she is saying in each, and every line. One thing that really stands out, and separates Dickinson from Whitman, and Poe is her use of unusual punctuation, and capitalization. Dickinson puts dashes, and capitalization where they normally would not be. This adds an extra depth to her poetry, putting focus on those places where there otherwise might not be. The Dickinson style sheet mentions that this is partly because of the isolation in which she wrote. If she had editors going over all of her work there might be more formal punctuation, and capitalization. However, maybe something would be lost in Dickinson's work if that were the case.

          Walt Whitman is considered America's greatest poet, but not because he uses more traditional punctuation than Dickinson does. Whitman is the father of free verse; however just because he does not write in standard stanzas, and rhymes does not mean his poems are not still considered lyric poetry. Whitman uses sensory beauty in his poetry, such as the alliteration found in "When I Heard the Learn'd Astronomer": "In the mystical moist night-air" (Whitman 7). This alliteration as well as the first four lines beginning with "When" is just one of the things that make his work lyric poetry. Like Dickinson, Whitman uses brevity to his advantage in his poetry making every line count for the reader.  This use of brevity is one of the things that contributes to making "When I Heard the Learn'd Astronomer" at only eight lines, a lyric poem. Whitman, according to the comparative style sheet, focuses on more realistic subject matter than both Poe, and Dickinson. "When I Heard the Learn'd Astronomer" is about a lecture on astronomy. Subject matter does not get more mundane than a lecture. As opposed to Poe who wrote about a sublime city in the sea, and Dickinson who wrote about death which is one of life's greatest mysteries. Whitman uses similar devices to Poe in his use of alliteration, and elevated language even though he does not write as formally as Poe does. Part of Whitman's power in his poetry is that he can write an eight line poem about a classroom lecture, and still end on a note of transcendentalism in his poem "When I Heard a Learn'd Astronomer" the speaker finishes with,: "Look'd up in perfect silence at the stars" (Whitman 8). By line eight of this poem the reader is brought up out of the classroom, to ponder the stars which is a subject that is still beyond true understanding to this day. Whitman takes his realistic subject matter, and makes it more romantic than one would have previously imagined, and that also makes his poems lyric in genre.

          Whitman, Poe, and Dickinson all gave us many lyric poems. All of their work unique to their own styles, yet still having the characteristics which put them in the shared category of lyric poetry. This topic could fill at least one book if not more, so my feeble attempt to compare the three poets must be excused for its brevity. Each of these poets has given America a gift through their poetry. Their poetry styles vary in subject matter, and style, but they are three of the greatest poets that came out of the American Renaissance period. A lot can be learned about poetry during the American Renaissance by studying Poe, Whitman, and Dickinson.


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