LITR 4328:
American Renaissance
        

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Final Exam Essays 2017
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B: poetry & styles of Poe, Whitman, and Dickinson

 

Diane Oneydy Alonzo

The MVPs of Poetry

The names Edgar Allan Poe, Emily Dickinson and Walt Whitman are staples of American literature. Anyone who has studied poetry in American schools has had experiences with all of these literary geniuses. Although their poetry is vastly different, they were all writers from the same era, the American Renaissance.

When I think of Poe, I think of dark, macabre poetry that excites the mind with ideas of mystery and lust. With Dickinson, I envision a ghostly transient experience in which you think you might understand, but abruptly find yourself lost in an abyss of confusion and beauty of the sublime. When reading Whitman, I think of the old country life of the working-class America that once was. These three writers had very distinct characteristics in their style and subjects matter. They took the themes of romanticism and realism, brewed them with their own life experiences, and created the famous poems we all love, but may have difficulty understanding. When I learned of how they lived and events that took place in their lives, I caught a glimpse into the foundation of their poetry.

When I read City in the Sea, I could automatically identify that this was Poe’s work. The poem is an ominous allusion of a purgatory-like city swallowed up by the sea of hell. The ideal characteristics of Poe’s iconic poetry is revealed from stanza to stanza. His ballad-like formal verse, that makes his poetry musical, is seen by his use of fixed meter and rhyme. His rhyme, although not a sequential rhyme scheme is still obvious. The ending of almost every line in the poem has a rhyme. Another ideal characteristic identifiable to Poe is his use of the European gothic style of romanticism. He writes about towers, shrines and thrones and uses phrases like, “sculptured ivy and stone flowers,” something we would not see in American, or wilderness gothic. Other phrases like, “strange city lying alone”, “resemble nothing that is ours” and descriptions like “melancholy waters” and “no earthly moans” give other gothic tones of loneliness and despair. Excess is another key to knowing that this is a poem by Poe. Exaggerating phrases like, “gaping graves” and “Babylon-like walls” show Poe’s use of superlatives to emphasize the grand scale of his images. Poe also uses the classic gothic colors red and violet to give the reader more macabre imagery.

Similar to Poe, Dickinson brings the reader into a world of death and madness. In I heard a fly buzz, when I died, we can see similar gothic tones like in City in the Sea. Like in Poe’s poem, Dickinson’s poem also begins with death. I could also automatically identify it was Dickinson’s poem by the quatrain and the amount of dashes she uses. Her poem, although more formal than not, is not as formal as Poe’s. She has organization in her stanzas, but she uses slant rhymes more than true rhyme. Examples are the way she rhymes “Room” with both “Storm” and “firm.” She does use true rhyme in the end with “me” and “see,” which is common in her poetry as well. Another style of Dickinson is her use of color. She gives colors a sense, or synesthesia. “With Blue—uncertain—stumbling Buzz—,” she personifies color.  In Poe’s poem, the setting is a mystical place, but Dickinson places her poem in a domestic setting. The poem is a deathbed scene. She writes, “I willed my Keepsakes—Signed away / What portion of me be   Assignable—.” The person has written a will, something that is universally meaningful. Then a fly appears. This is when the domestic setting transcends into a mystical dimension: “Between the light—and me—/and then the windows failed—and then/ I could not see to see—.” She dies and we were left with the feeling of unanswered questions. This is what makes Dickinson so intriguing. Each time you read her poems, it becomes something it was not before.

Whitman, unlike Dickinson, can be analyzed easier. As a free-verse writer, his poetry is written in everyday language. In the poem titled, When I Heard the Learn’d Astronomer, we can identify it as a Whitman poem. By removing the silent vowel, he forces you to read his poem in normal instead of metrical speech. No rhythm or rhyme, but the rawness of his poetry is what makes him America’s greatest poet. Like Dickinson, he places the reader in a familiar setting. In this poem, we are in an Astronomy classroom. As in many of his other poems, catalogs or lists of common items is his way of depicting realism. By giving attention to detail, he is putting you in the classroom with him. We can also see that Whitman was knowledgeable in what he wrote. Only a person that experienced being in an Astronomy classroom can tell you that there are proofs, figures, charts, diagrams and math within the lesson. Whitman is well-known for realism, but there is also glimmers of romanticism in this poem. Daydreaming is not something adults are able to do often. He changes his persona to child-like, bringing in images of the sublime. “Till rising and gliding out, I wander’d off by myself, / In the mystical moist night air, from time to time, / Look’d up in perfect silence at the stars.” He transcended the reader into the space, alone in solace.

In Poe, Dickinson and Whitman, we can see how the era of the American Renaissance created some of the best writers of all time. Through these literary geniuses, we traveled to places we know, to realms we could never imagine. Austin Green said it best in his essay Perfect Strangers,Individually, we can learn a great deal from each poet, but when placed together it shows how wide the spectrum of poetry had become during the American Renaissance.” With their poems, anyone can learn that with education and life experiences, one can create worlds through literature that can create legends.