LITR 4328:
American Renaissance
        

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Final Exam Essays 2017
(final exam assignment)

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B: poetry & styles of Poe, Whitman, and Dickinson

 

Ronnie Abshier

Different Styles in Romantic Poetry

          The Romantic period in American Literature wasn’t just about stories and long texts; poets were also involved in developing the Romantic period. It is interesting to note, though, that like novels and parables of the Romantic period, poetry also differed from one another in style, diction, and form. Poets like Walt Whitman, Emily Dickinson, and Edgar Allan Poe were the faces of the Romantic poetry movement, but their methods created poetry that was in ways both vastly different as well as similar to one another.

          Walt Whitman was a poet who utilized the free verse style of poetry. He didn’t use rhyme schemes or traditional verse patterns in his poems. Because of this, some people don’t even realize he was a poet. However, Whitman’s use of anaphora, and parallelism which are poetic elements, are the reasons he is, in fact, a poet and not just a romance author.

          In his poem, “When I Heard the Learn’d Astronomer”, Whitman uses some of the elements that have become known to scholars as his personal calling cards. Firstly, the anaphora in the first four lines of the poem is typical of a Whitman piece. Here, Whitman uses the repetition of the word “When” to start each of those sentences, a poetic element that Whitman uses regularly. Whitman also uses parallelism in this poem as well, developing line 2 in the same way as line 5 by reconfirming his meaning within the commas of the text. These two poetic elements are stylistic elements that, along with his the identification of using free verse will help to identify his poems.

          Emily Dickinson’s poetry, to me, was the easiest to identify right away. Dickinson was a mix of formal and free verse, so what you’ll find with her is that her poetry is somewhere between a Whitman and a Poe poem. Her poetry does have easily designated lines and stanzas, with some rhyming that draws her into the formal category. Dickinson never titled her work, and thus the titles of her poems are often titled after the first line in her work, an element that is unique to her. She had a strange way of punctuating her poetry that made her poems easily recognizable, using an em dash to split up ideas or emphasize phrases. She would also use ballad or hymn stanzas but with use near-rhymes or off-rhymes instead of the traditional rhyming patterns that you see in formal poems.

          Dickinson’s poem, “I heard a fly buzz when I died” has all the markers of an Emily Dickinson piece. Firstly, the poem’s first line is also its title, giving the reader a signal that tells them who the poem is by without seeing the author’s name. She speaks of ordinary things in a way that makes them transcendental in a way. In this poem, the fly is not just a fly. And of course, with 19 em dashes, which is likely the most recognizable part of Dickinson’s style, she lives up to her stereotype of irregular punctuation patterns. The near-rhymes are also present, with line 2 ending in ‘room’ and line 4 ending in ‘storm’ as well as line 6 ending in ‘firm’ and line 8 ending in ‘Room’ she utilizes a non-formal technique of sometimes missing the rhyme. These aspects of Dickinson’s poetry style make her work easy to pick apart from other poets at the time, and set her apart from the other two poets mentioned here.

          Edgar Allan Poe is the most formal of the three poets we have mentioned. Because of this you will get a sing-songy, lyrical, or musical vibe from most of his poems. His poems have clearly outlined stanzas and lines, and do not use odd punctuation. His poetry gives the idea that he isn’t an American poet, however, employing the use of the traditional European gothic over the American gothic that you are used to seeing with Romantic poetry in this time.

          In “The City in the Sea”, Poe utilizes his standard pattern of poetry writing. The poem is clearly outlined in formal verse, and his rhyme scheme, while not one of the more popular schemes, is easily identifiable. He, like Whitman, uses relatively normal punctuation and no em dashes as Dickinson always does. The most identifiable thing about Poe, however, is that his content in this poem, as well as many others, speaks of palaces and towers, things that were non-existent within America at the time but were definitely commonplace in Europe. Poe’s formal style and European themes make his poetry easy to set apart from other writers of the time.

          While it is simpler to identify and separate these poets by how their poetry looks and reads, it is also worth noting that while their subject matters for writing are different. You can usually differentiate a Dickinson, Poe, and Whitman poem by their theme if you are unable to tell by analyzing the style. While Emily Dickinson’s poetry is mostly domestic, Poe’s is almost exclusively gothic and loss-based, expressing a typical textbook romantic desire and longing, and Whitman deals with the most realistic of ideas, basing his poetry with nature and romanticizing everyday urban American life.

          Although each poet certainly belongs within the Romantic realm of American History, it is interesting to see just how large the span of romanticism is within the poetry community. Things like domestic life, nature, and castles, all find their homes in the Romantic period, while both formal and informal styles are accepted as well, and the content can be anything from psychological unwellness to a longing to be immersed in nature, all the way to the topic death itself. It is amazing just how different American Romantic Poetry can be, and interesting to see how each author leaves his or her own mark on their work.