LITR 4232 American Renaissance

Whitman, “Crossing Brooklyn Ferry”

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assignments

Crossing Brooklyn Ferry

Whitman's influence

 

 

Thursday, 6 April: Whitman, “Crossing Brooklyn Ferry.” p. 2995

Reader: Susan Hooks

Exercise on one of Whitman's best mid-length poems

How can you tell it's a poem by Whitman?

What unique pleasures? What surprises? What pains?

 

 Walt Whitman Hypertext Archive

   

“Crossing Brooklyn Ferry“

Some Romantic and Transcendentalist themes, but also looks ahead to "Modern" poetry

Romantic & Transcendentalist: correspondence, fusion of individual with nature or surroundings

but Modern: nature or surroundings are partly urban: "Brooklyn Ferry" is a city scene, not an escape to Thoreau's Walden pond or Cooper's primeval forest

Plus "mystical" themes

relation between individual and community, self and others (objective 3) (Whitman varies the standard Romantic-masculine position of the solitary individual standing apart from and above nature: Thoreau, Emerson, Wordsworth, Douglass. Plus he works toward answering a classic problem of American society: How can there be a society of individuals?)

relation between past, present, and future (often most surprising part of poem to first readers); cf. p 2913

 


assignments

Tuesday, 11 April: Hawthorne, from Abraham Lincoln. Abraham Lincoln, “Gettysburg Address” + “Second Inaugural Address.” 

Reader: Susanne Brooks

 

 

Lincoln, Jefferson as most gifted writers among U. S. presidents

most widely quoted

not even any really close seconds

"most bookish" presidents: Jimmy Carter, John Quincy Adams, Woodrow Wilson

plus or minus John Kennedy and Bill Clinton

Ronald Reagan may not have read widely, but his writings for radio and personal letters show good style.

back to Lincoln plus or minus Jefferson:

"American" speech style--what patterns and sources?

patterns: plain-spokenness + richness, idealism--what balance?
addressing common people, uplifting union

sources: everyday speech

Bible--but, given our secular government, how does Lincoln get away with it? Compared to today, why is explicitly biblical speech

 

Why read Lincoln before concluding Whitman?

Thursday, 13 April: Whitman, “When Lilacs Last in the Dooryard Bloom’d”

"Lilacs" is an elegy for Lincoln

 

 


review > preview

last class, introduce Whitman

Whitman as "revolutionary" poet. 

Changes subject matter of poetry--instead of poetry just being about pretty flowers and heroes of the past and noble sentiments, poetry becomes more about everyday life, including the streets and farms of common American life, its common people, and the problems they face in terms of democracy, sexual identity, race, etc.

Changes style of poetry--instead of writing traditional poetic forms like sonnets and ballads, Whitman is the first major poet to write "free verse"--i. e., poetry without regular rhyme or fixed numbers of accents per line 

free verse is not just broken-up prose

doesn't use regular rhyme and meter, but continues to use other rhetorical and poetic devices to heighten intensity and meaning of language

standard: metaphors, other figures of speech, alliteration and assonance

Whitman's most identifiable free verse techniques:

parallelism

catalog

 

Whitman also changes subjects of poetry, expands range of subjects to be drawn into and faced poetically

instead of poetry just being about pretty flowers and heroes of the past and noble sentiments, poetry becomes more about everyday life, including the streets and farms of common American life, its common people, and the problems they face in terms of democracy, sexual identity, race, etc.

Whitman resolves poetically a problem in American society that can't be resolved otherwise.

All Americans are equal.

Each American is special, unique, an individual.

Inherent contradiction between equality and individuality?

what I assume you shall assume

opposite equals advance

union (sexual, mystical, or both)

 


 

 

 

 


purposes in reading "Crossing Brooklyn Ferry"

 

style:

parallelism

catalog

other poetic devices

 

subject matter:

identification

equality and difference, equality and individualism

identification not just with "pretty" nature but also city, human world

union of past, present, future, link, bridge

 

Other Whitman signatures?

 

 

 

 

 

 

projects due Thursday-Saturday
assignments for Thursday
review Whitman, greatness, style, individuality & union
"something"

review Whitman, greatness & style

last class: Whitman as "the greatest American poet"--defining "greatness" in writers & artists and measuring Whitman's achievements

Whitman's style

Walt Whitman Archive

 

 

Whitman's style in terms of subjects, techniques

Analytic divisions, but all one poem

best poetry where style and subject meet

best criticism sees it

 

subjects, content

expands range of subject matter

forbidden subjects

inclusiveness (democratic?)

everyday ("A Child Went Forth") + 2763-4

not just "pretty nature" but city, industrialism

 

2877 works at inclusiveness, both good and bad are parts of world

2879 identification

identification: absorption, expression of other; other's absorption, identification of self

(correspondence?)

2863 what I assume you shall assume

2865 opposite equals advance

2866 union

 

metaphysical issue: unity in variety

applied to democracy: nation of individuals

resolutions:

1. mystical union

Emerson, p. 1518 Nature

I am glad to the brink of fear. . . . I am nothing; I see all; the currents of the Universal Being circulate through me; I am part or particle of God

William James, Varieties of Religious Experience

2. sexual union

(sometimes experienced with cosmic language: "Oh God, Oh God . . . "; "Darling, the galaxies spun and choirs of angels sang . . . .")

Statue by Bernini of "Saint Teresa in Ecstasy" at Vatican

close-up

Life of St. Teresa of Avila

style

Poetic style: Whitman “freed verse”; how is free verse still poetry?

no rhyme, standard meter

long line--breath + inclusive

2891 parallelism, repetitions

repetition as structuring device

repetition + variation

2891 catalogue--also in King cornucopia of land of plenty  

2882 parallelism + catalog

 

Lincoln's "Gettysburg Address" & King's "I Have a Dream" as examples of parallelism & catalogue

significance of terms

 

 

"empty signifier"

"something"--Hawthorne leaves a void that reader participates in filling
"Black Veil" 2196 . . . there was something, either in the sentiment of the discourse itself, or in the imagination of the auditors, which made it greatly the most powerful effort that they had ever heard from their pastor's lips.
What, but the mystery . . has made this piece of crape so awful
cf. Poe, "Ligeia" : "What was it--that something . . . which lay far within the pupils of my beloved? What was it? . . . we often find ourselves on the very verge of remembering
anticipates Whitman in "Crossing Brooklyn Ferry": "What is it then between us?"

 

 

"Crossing Brooklyn Ferry"

 

identification

with nature

with others in democracy and time--equality

l. 7 "myself disintegrated"

l 22 just as you feel, . . . so I felt

l 78 one with the rest

 

"What is it then between us?"--"something"--not precision but evocations

 

sanctification of individual

l. 33 [halo]

l 95 what gods can exceed these that clasp me by the and . . .

 

 

l. 126 dumb beautiful ministers--everything significant

 

"What is it then between us?"--"something"--not precision but evocations

l. 6 impalpable sustenance

4, l. 49 "the same as they are to you"

5, l. 54 "What is it then between us?" . . . Whatever it is . . .

8, l. 99 What I promised without mentioning it

 

Poe 1432 that something . . . what was it?

Hawthorne

2221 And do you feel it then at last?

 

 

crossing boundaries

l. 5 you . . . years hence

l. 20 distance avails not,

I am with you

 

 

Web-highlighter: Laura Jones

Final Exam 2003

[regarding Song of Myself] This poem also shows how Whitman paints a picture through details. The reader can actually see the starving sailors far out at sea as they cast lots with fearful expressions knowing that one of them is about to be sacrificed. There is also a variety of settings from home life to city life, and from the battlefield to the ship at sea. Nevertheless, the only unity in these various situations is sorrow and agony. [SB]

2001 Presentation [DG]

[Regarding “Crossing Brooklyn Ferry”] The main theme of this poem seemed to be that while everyone has the ability to think for themselves, make their own decisions, and be an individual, we as people are held together by the fact that we share experiences. Everything that you think, feel, or experience, has been thought, felt, or experienced by thousands of other people. These shared experiences are what pull us together as a community.

Whitman seemed to put an emphasis on the fact that common experiences will transcend location, morality, race and gender. The theme of individuals sharing experiences extends pas white, moral Americans.

It was also interesting to see that Whitman did not see technology as a burden. He made no distinction between the way he described natural objects (like the seagull) and the man made objects (like the ships). When describing these natural and man made objects he seemed to be giving us just the facts, not an insight to the importance of the objects or how they relate to humans other than the image they reflect on our eyes and that we all see the same things.

 


 

Whitman's influence

 

"You Gotta Know these Latin American Writers"

 

 

Jorge Luis Borges, Argentine writer, poet, essayist, short-story author
1899-1986

early life in Europe as well as Argentina

head of National Library of Argentina

Many, many collections of translated poetry, short stories, essays

 

From one internet biography:

After World War I the Borges family lived in Spain, where he was a member of avant-garde Ultraist literary group. His first poem, 'Hymn to the Sea,' written in the style of Walt Whitman, was published in the magazine Grecia.

 

poemhunters.com

 

Pablo Neruda, great 20th-century poet of Chile
1904-1973

1971 Nobel Prize for Literature

Communist senator in Chilean congress before exile

Il Postino (1994 film)

 

 . . . The American poet Walt Whitman, whose framed portrait Neruda later kept on his table, become a major influence on his work. "I, a poet who writes in Spanish, learned more from Walt Whitman than from Cervantes," Neruda said in 1972 in a speech during a visit in the United States.

(http://www.kirjasto.sci.fi/neruda.htm)

 

from Jorge Luis Borges: Conversations, ed. by Richard Burgin, 1998, regarding Neruda:

We did meet forty years ago. At that time we were both influenced by Whitman and I said, jokingly in part, 'I don't think anything can be done in Spanish, do you?' Neruda agreed, but we decided it was too late for us to write our verse in English. We'd have to make the best of a second-rate literature." 

 

Octavio Paz, Mexican poet, essayist, diplomat
1914-1998

1990 Nobel Prize in Literature

born in village near Mexico City during Mexican Revolution

grandfather a novelist, father a liberal reformer

1962 Mexico's ambassador to India

most famous book: The Labyrinth of Solitude re Mexican character