LITR 4326
Early American Literature
        

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Final Exam Essays 2017
(final exam assignment)

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Essay 1
on overall learning experience

 

 

 

John Silverio

Revised Thinking on Why We Write

  From its beginning, this course exposed me to the more subtle qualities of historical American literature. Our first day of class included a review over the two prevailing purposes of literature: to entertain or educate. We defined educational literature as all manner of contracts, laws, and letters written in order to provide instruction or information to the reader. Generally, such literature does not consider creativity as a priority. The Mayflower Compact and the instructions in a toaster manual have one thing in common: clarity. Ambiguity holds little value in such writing; entertaining literature functions in the opposite way. Creativity is embraced along with subtlety as entertaining novels, short stories, and accounts take form under the pen of an intentional author. However, the texts we studied frequently blurred the line between entertaining and informative purposes. To my surprise, many of the texts also had structures and themes found in modern stories. Before this course, I assumed that early American literature was “boring” and all pertained to the formation of government – but I discovered that the colonial and revolutionary times gave birth to creative novels depicting relatable protagonists, and even poetry. A text that both entertains and informs? Imaginative writing over social issues that feels human? To credit these qualities exclusively to modern American literature would be simply inaccurate.

Does a piece that attempts to entertain and inform at the same time usually succeed? The answer, of course, depends on the text. Thomas Paine’s wrote his patriotic propaganda, Common Sense¸ with a highly pragmatic purpose. History looks upon the pamphlet as a key document in rallying the thirteen colonies towards revolution. Yet the Paine’s writing displays a creative flair: “the palaces of kings are built upon the ruins of the bowers of paradise.” Such imagery makes the reading less of a chore compared to purely legal texts, such as the Constitution. Numerous evocative moments in Common Sense contribute to the persuasive power of the piece. The efficacy of combining rhetoric and creative writing techniques caused the piece to succeed. Even today the work finds its place in classrooms, as an example of reason and literature.

More modern texts also combine creative presentation with moral implications. In 1904, Upton Sinclair’s The Jungle sought to initiate social change regarding unsanitary meatpacking conditions. The novel focused on the difficult work conditions and included emotional appeals as it describes how the packing plant employees struggled to provide for their families. The story gripped readers, as did Common Sense, and both texts positively influenced society. Entertainment and logical persuasion are not one and the same, but one can help the other.

Not all historical texts that synergize rhetoric and evocative writing style earn renown like Sinclair or Paine’s works. Though they remain useful for the study of societal norms at their time of writing, often in education they have inconvenient facts about individuals we would rather perceive as blameless. Yes, Thomas Jefferson’s 1818 letters discussing the education of women contain progressive notions about how women deserve to learn. In the first paragraph he contends that education is “essential …, which might enable them [his daughters], when become mothers, to educate their own daughters.” Noting the cyclical nature of education and how it is an investment that pays dividends from generation to generation aligns with much of contemporary views on the value of investing in schools and is logical.

But the Founding Father distances himself from modern thought by stating that “A great obstacle to good education is …inordinate passion prevalent for novels.” He continues by stating that novels are “time lost” and a “poison”. This diction gives us a taste of Jefferson’s mood when considering novels and their applications to education. He sees none. In the 21st century, one can hardly walk into a higher level reading class without witnessing discussion and dissection of classic novels. Jefferson would disagree with this practice. We must admit that in the 1700s, novels and the American novel were new idea, unrefined. But even back then, novels across the globe were revealing cultural values and were a precursor to a modern narrative style that many writers make a living off of. Nevertheless, Jefferson’s distaste for them was never known to me until this course. His letter on women’s education and novels seems to have fallen off the map of history, although the writing embodies both logic and passionate diction. Perhaps this falls into the category of inconvenient truth, like Franklin’s slaves or Paine’s multiple job failures. This class showed me the value in seeing the figures of American history as real humans, even though adding detail to the photo may reveal some wrinkles.

Past the simultaneous use of logic and creativity, one of the writings we perused had another interesting attribute: the use of archetypal characters that resembled real people. Susanna Rowson’s late 18th century novel, Charlotte Temple feels melodramatic as protagonist Charlotte makes decisions by prioritizing her own emotion, rather than pure rational thought. These aspects of the text may stem from the author’s background in theatre arts, the Romantic Movement occurring in literature at that time, or some combination of the two (an example of intertextuality). The Romantic Movement not only swept through literature, but influenced the creation of indulgent music and dramatic art. The character of Charlottle clearly personifies these values, as she follows the attractive Montraville overseas to America. In the sixth chapter, Rowson describes Charlotte as “a young heart…in more danger than when attempted by a handsome young soldier.” The notations of physical beauty and heart imagery made me picture a swooning, head over heels girl. I used to consider this image as a recent development in writing. How untrue. The story is the first in what would be a long line of American “coming of age stories”: a young girl devoted to a man no matter what the cause. Coming of age narratives persist even today, but Charlottle Temple remains as a proud precursor of those stories.

Above entertaining or informing, the very nature of all writing is to establish some sort of relationship with the audience through words. I was aware of this purpose before this course. But now I know that characters, rhetoric, and vivid descriptions are all ways to achieve that purpose. Common Sense establishes a relationship of motivating, moral implications. Charlotte Temple, though fictional, does something similar while sharing the adventure of a vulnerable protagonist.  Edgar Huntly, Charles Brockden Brown’s late 17th century novel, at its conclusion defines the relationship between writer and audience as something much simpler. Following a dark and violent tale, in chapter 27 the narrator declares “I fulfilled my promise to compose a minute relation of my sufferings. I remembered my duty to thee…” Though more complex purposes exist underneath the surface of the text, by his own admission Edgar reveals his purpose in writing the letters was to share something. This is no mean purpose. It is why, at some level, we all write. At the very beginning of schooling, it is why we are taught to write. To relate experience and establish relationships. Though we later learn the purpose for those relationships may be to entertain, inform, even harm, or potentially persuade – at the heart of all writing is the desire to connect. Connect across time. Connect across cultures. Connect, because as writers write, readers listen.